M-10 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 Good job, well done More, more...! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 Good job, well done More, more...! well thank you... Im working o nteh third part just now... should be up later tonigh or tommorow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ch33kY Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 hahaha nice try mate, but what a load of rubbish!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 hahaha nice try mate, but what a load of rubbish!! first bit of negitive feedback... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrAck_420 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 we were near barstow, somewhere on the edge of the desert...our vibrations were getting nasty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 we were near barstow, somewhere on the edge of the desert...our vibrations were getting nasty what???... anyway, you have had your say... if you want to give some ideas for the next part to improve it please do... but dont fill my topic wiht sh*t... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 maybe you should add something gang related? the ballas could have stolen your camper, so you have to go take it back..or the mafia could have taken it because they had 2 campers, one with crack one without, and your next door neighboor was the customer who was supposed to get the crack truck, but they mixed them up, so now they stole your camper and you have to go to the meat factory to get it back?thats the best thing i can come up with... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattyb Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 Hey Ozzie this is wicked if you had msn aim or yahoo ill help u wit it and i was just wonderin how u takin ur pics? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattyb Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 lol Mog you just gave me the greatest idea for ozzy could we make a Grand Tour team up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 lol Mog you just gave me the greatest idea for ozzy could we make a Grand Tour team up? are you talking to my or ozzy?im guessing ozzy, but you said my name so just making sure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 some good ideas... the third part has already been shot.. but iv not written any story for it yet... this is my MSN if you wish to talk to me... [email protected] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattyb Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 lol Mog you just gave me the greatest idea for ozzy could we make a Grand Tour team up? are you talking to my or ozzy?im guessing ozzy, but you said my name so just making sure im talking to both of you and im saying we should make this together and put all our idea's in it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 lol Mog you just gave me the greatest idea for ozzy could we make a Grand Tour team up? are you talking to my or ozzy?im guessing ozzy, but you said my name so just making sure im talking to both of you and im saying we should make this together and put all our idea's in it Im happy to take everyones ideas.. jsut post them here.. not sure about making up a team though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 yeah, he wants all the credit to himself just kidding, but yeah a team wouldnt work since all of us would have to be on and make decisions together, and we would have to work as a TEAM something im terrible at and like i said that was probably the best thing im ever gonna come up with... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
specter_xs Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 dude take it easy withe the episodes! if u keep up at this pace your gonna run out of ideas in a week! episode 2 was cool but it would help if it had more of a point to it. also dont think you should constantly end with things like 'his life would never be the same after that' because then you have to make the storie incredible or you will let down the fans. also ur not letting youself think of new ideas. but thats just my input, i have some experience with riting and thats what ive found out. i hope you take this into mind your outcome will be alot better. keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 dude take it easy withe the episodes!if u keep up at this pace your gonna run out of ideas in a week! episode 2 was cool but it would help if it had more of a point to it. also dont think you should constantly end with things like 'his life would never be the same after that' because then you have to make the storie incredible or you will let down the fans. also ur not letting youself think of new ideas. but thats just my input, i have some experience with riting and thats what ive found out. i hope you take this into mind your outcome will be alot better. keep up the good work! or he could use all of my fabulous dildo-wielding bigfoot and mafia ideas when he runs out of his until he gets more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 dude take it easy withe the episodes!if u keep up at this pace your gonna run out of ideas in a week! episode 2 was cool but it would help if it had more of a point to it. also dont think you should constantly end with things like 'his life would never be the same after that' because then you have to make the storie incredible or you will let down the fans. also ur not letting youself think of new ideas. but thats just my input, i have some experience with riting and thats what ive found out. i hope you take this into mind your outcome will be alot better. keep up the good work! Part 2 could have been better... but Iv shot part 3 and I have a rough idea of a story line... remember there are going to be about 5 parts with this one story, but he has not tecnically started his tour yet... I am going to take it easy with teh parts, and after part 3, coming tonight or tommorow morning... Ill be leaving it a day or two to plan the next few parts... Thanks for your advice... or he could use all of my fabulous dildo-wielding bigfoot and mafia ideas when he runs out of his until he gets more Hate to ruin it for you but there is not going to be anything more about the dildo... and im going to stay off the track of bigfoot... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 well maybe you can still use my mafia idea... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 well maybe you can still use my mafia idea... who knows... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 well i still think a dildo wielding bigfoot is a good idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 well i still think a dildo wielding bigfoot is a good idea not that is the post that sends this topic into a "hot topic"... lol... it would be a good idea.. maby in a different story...bit not teh sort of think Ill do in this one.. I may make up a little piss around one sometime for you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White_Lightning Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 how do you get your pictures from the ps2 to the computer cause they're awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mog1191 Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 he uses a flash drive, they cost from 50-100 dollars...i personally dont think its worth it, but if he wants to buy one to entertain us, im not stopping him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 how do you get your pictures from the ps2 to the computer cause they're awesome! I use a Action Replay Max Drive... it cost me £20 (dont know what it is in $.. maby about 30/35...) I got it from http://www.codejunkies.com also all the pics on my story are half sized... just incase you thaugh thats what size they were when you take them off the PS2... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 PART 3 HAS NOW BEEN ADDED!!! part 4 will be worked on over the next day or two... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PunkRaiden Posted December 23, 2004 Share Posted December 23, 2004 PART 3 HAS NOW BEEN ADDED!!! part 4 will be worked on over the next day or two... I have just ordered a Max Drive for £20 off codejunkies.com before I read this post, coincidence? So maybe I'll be making something in the near future. Staying on-topic: I like these stories, they seem to turn out nicely. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 23, 2004 Author Share Posted December 23, 2004 PART 3 HAS NOW BEEN ADDED!!! part 4 will be worked on over the next day or two... I have just ordered a Max Drive for £20 off codejunkies.com before I read this post, coincidence? So maybe I'll be making something in the near future. Staying on-topic: I like these stories, they seem to turn out nicely. Keep up the good work. thanks... I like teh prist as well... keep your eyes open for the next [arts.. and PM me with your email of you want me to send you the new partts as they come out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattyb Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 This is a story in many different parts... If you have any ideas for the next part of teh story please post them... Also if you want me to e-mail you when I add new updates please PM me with your e-mail address... Part 1 Part 2 NEW>>>Part 3<<<NEW Exelent Work on it all how big will it be? ill read Part 3 now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OzzySM12 Posted December 24, 2004 Author Share Posted December 24, 2004 This is a story in many different parts... If you have any ideas for the next part of teh story please post them... Also if you want me to e-mail you when I add new updates please PM me with your e-mail address... Part 1 Part 2 NEW>>>Part 3<<<NEW Exelent Work on it all how big will it be? ill read Part 3 now no idea... it wil jsut run and run... like a TV soap opra... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
specter_xs Posted December 24, 2004 Share Posted December 24, 2004 This is a story in many different parts... If you have any ideas for the next part of teh story please post them... Also if you want me to e-mail you when I add new updates please PM me with your e-mail address... Part 1 Part 2 NEW>>>Part 3<<<NEW Exelent Work on it all how big will it be? ill read Part 3 now no idea... it wil jsut run and run... like a TV soap opra... lol if its like a tv soap oprah i am gonna stop readin it right now! nice work on part 3 ozzy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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