It was the year when "Vice City Stories" came and the 3rd era finished.
I wonder this sh*t topic has more views than my concept, i mean the "Ultimate"
I think you're being offensive about GTA III Era, man (even if you didn't want to mean it). I think GTA III Era has a great potential for fan-fictions, even for me, more than HD Era. Because for now, III Era has more history than HD Era and you see, III Era has a greater fiction, well-connected crossovers. Yeah, III Era concepts would get little attention but I think all people should see that III Era has a great potential and this potential must be mined. After I'll be done with A Mexico, Al Infierno (my GTA IV concept, but I am not so sure if I will finish it because IV DLCs are old-fashioned for people, I guess) I consider making two GTA III Era concepts, one of them is set two years before San Andreas, concerning on a big story from the perspective Kane and the whole Ballas gang and the other is a Vice City concept which will be set in 1995 or 1996, after the downfall of Don Vercetti, in a dark utopic City Of Vice with a huge amount of corruption. And in the Vice City concept I am considering multiple protagonists, probably three.
However, you're right. This concept doesn't look good, it should be improved too much. First off, the beginning is not bad, actually a good start but I think it would be better if we see Luigi's mission about stealing a car with mayor's corpse a time after story starts. So after Jonie (man, you should find a better name) would start to work for Toreno, maybe collecting evidence about top criminals in the city. I would like to see it like that. I'm not so much good at grammar but you should improve your English A LOT. Also there's a huge time gap between GTA III and Vice City, I think you should include less characters from Vice City in your concept (as I consider this as a III Era concept after the year 2001), include the ones who can be logically fit into your story. Like I said, story seems not bad but you should improve it so much better. Good luck with it, man.
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