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Coldnew
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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by Coldnew, 3 weeks ago.

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You are forced to do a Bank rob by your Gang Members, it fails and 

you have to escape from the Cops. You are arrested and ordered to 

Death. Can you escape before its to late? 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Download it:

 

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/53197


JohnLS
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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by JohnLS, 2 weeks ago.

Posted 01 July 2010 - 06:24 AM Edited by AznKei, 27 March 2014 - 03:21 AM

Writing: DecentWhile there is a lot of grammar mistakes, it can be still understood.
Presentation: Could be better. My reason for this is lack of storyline, it is CJ, not some dude and his mother is already dead.

LengthDecent (Around 4-5 minutes.) This is obvious.
Difficulty Very Hard! It is very hard when you get wanted, (4 stars) and I did not know what to do after getting to grove street.-- 
Variety Decent: There are not many actors and only one pickup.

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Coldnew
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Posted 2 weeks ago

 

Posted 01 July 2010 - 06:24 AM Edited by AznKei, 27 March 2014 - 03:21 AM

Writing: DecentWhile there is a lot of grammar mistakes, it can be still understood.
Presentation: Could be better. My reason for this is lack of storyline, it is CJ, not some dude and his mother is already dead.

LengthDecent (Around 4-5 minutes.) This is obvious.
Difficulty Very Hard! It is very hard when you get wanted, (4 stars) and I did not know what to do after getting to grove street.-- 
Variety Decent: There are not many actors and only one pickup.

 

 

Thx for your rate!

 

I will try to do that better next time





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