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Las Venturas Stories #1 (Uploaded)
2/5. This mission is not properly made. Leo, the protagonist, is first seen insulting and complaining about criminals, but after he meets his friends, he kills "Mr Stinky,, and the mission is 4 minutes. The grammar is not good and there are several mistakes done in this mission. Overall, the story would be a bit interesting if the designer would add more realistic events.
Ryder's Revenge (Uploaded)
Not gonna review this one. It's my own.
Civilians Defense (Uploaded) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a2Tkzgc4xig
3/5. Grammar must be better. Story must make more sense, the characters have kind of weird names and real designer names.
Must have better use of objects
A Cage Match (Uploaded) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oh6_BlGgXMw&feature=youtu.be
5/5. This used to be my favourite genre of missions. Just some problems related to the game's artificial intelligence.
This is a bit hard, but once you get the chainsaw,you know you're the strongest out there.
Mission is long enough. Good job
Conquer The Grove (Uploaded)https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FJNzFZxE-q8
My mission. No need to review it.
Rating on DYOM website 5/5 (3)
Robbing the Casino (Uploaded)https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BzLwmQUEY28&feature=youtu.be
This is a nice mission. I rate 4/5 'cos Jacob could profit from usage of objects.There was a mistake with timeout objectives
But mission is easy-medium. And its long enough to be good.
Mission Pack List
The Money Chronicles
The King of Los Santos (Not Uploaded)