I’m looking for some feedback on my script writing, so I’d like to post what I’ve done here and if there’s anyone who could check it out and let me know that would be great!
I’ve basically done this “mini-series” for the sake of improving my writing by means of practice, so because it’s my first script it is beyond rough.
There was a basic plot outline, but I pretty much changed so much and wrote down what came to me it’s unrecognizable from what it originally was.
“A hitman gets hired by a mysterious figure who turns out to be psychotic. This leads our character, Const, to spiral down a hole of parallel universes, clones(?), accidental self-murder and talking vegetables.”
Lovely, isn’t it?
I know it's completely ridiculous.
I was inspired a lot by Quantum Leap, Inception, Hannibal and David Lynch’s stuff in some ways.
Basically, I want to know if my writing and formatting are up to snuff, whether my dialogue makes sense, and in what ways I need to improve to work on proper screenplays.
Anyways, without further blah-blah, here are the links to all 5½ episodes (total: ~60pgs):
Episode #1 http://docdro.id/8qbAbCw
Episode #2 http://docdro.id/xlKfE54
Episode #3 http://docdro.id/sYFbvio
Episode #4 http://docdro.id/zN03HUT
Episode #4.5 http://docdro.id/1QCUkNb
Episode #5 (Finale) http://docdro.id/M5lM9dP
Thanks for any comments/feedback.