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Opcode
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#1

Posted 14 January 2018 - 02:13 AM Edited by Opcode, 18 January 2018 - 07:29 AM.

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Hi,
 
First of all "Welcome". I was also going to establish and implement a new Gameplay topic but boring because no one is going to give attention to the topic as it is milked many times. As I am in the mood these days so I decided to do something where I can busy myself + this will also help you in many ways to point out your weakness and mistakes. You can improve them more easily once you find out your mistake and we will try our best to provide a complete review with the explanation (that where it is incorrect and how this thing actually works).
 
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Our goal is to provide you with the best review you ever have seen for your mission. As I said that I was also able to focus on gameplay but with the gameplay, I was also going give you a complete review of it but if we also focus on the other side, it consumes a lot of effort and time and I am too busy with the life as I am a human. So instead of gameplay, we focused only on review quality so we can put our all effort into the review to make it remarkable at every aspect. Your mission review will publish at your mission's topic and here you can say a library of all the reviews I have done. 

 

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Of course, there are rules. You can't just come here post it and that's all. No! There is a format of requesting as it will make topic decent in look. I want all of you to follow them. Rules are summarized:

  • No any crashes in storyline/Mission/Mission Pack
  • Request with format
  • No spamming in topic or else you will be reported
  • Don't PM me

These are few and easy rules for understanding. Please apply them at all cost.
 
Format:

 

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The deep check is for Premium people. For that, you have to donate us at PayPal. We also accept Visa.

 

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The schedule is kind of different from date. I can review a mission every day but consumes time and effort. What I am saying that your mission pack or storyline can take much time. 

  • A mission pack will take at least 8-10 days to finish it. Also depends on the author that how long mission pack is designed.
  • The storyline will take 9-11 days to finish it.
  • A single mission can be done in a day if it is not too much hard. 

Or maybe more or less. It is not confirmed.
 
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Indications mean levels. Tells you that how good or bad is your mission is and how much improvement it needs. Following are the indications summarized:

  • Horrible                      - Really bad. You should play other designer's missions and grab some idea and style from there. 
  • Could be Better        - Really need improvement. This is also just like the "red" one but better in most of the aspects. You have to read and write your mission again with an actual plan in your mind.
  • Decent                       - Decent. Good more than newbies and from lowest class. Need improvement to reach the "Good" stage. Keep it up.
  • Good                          - You are Good and in the field of Top 10's. We need more effort and fixes from you.
  • Very Good                  - Very Good. You are really a good designer. You are in Top 5's right now in the position of trust, therefore, we don't expect any small mistakes from you.
  • Excellent                    - To be Continue (LOL)

These are the indications. These will decide what kind of stage your mission deserves.
 
Here are the lists of the things I will focus on:

  • Grammar
  • Spelling Mistake
  • Plot
  • Cutscenes
  • Object&Pickup
  • Length
  • Difficulty
  • Presentation

Just focus on these things for achievement. 

 

Remember: The reviews are consecutive with other things also. For example Plot is connected with Placements, Grammar etc. 

 

So, this is the end of the topic. If you have any question then don't hesitate on asking but try to avoid from spam or results will be worse. The topic will update soon.

 

-Opcode.eXe

 

 

 

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A Review in YasiRFL topic "The real heroes are the Army man":

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A Review in Martin_Starda Topic "The King of Los Santos":

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The Half-Blood Prince
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#2

Posted 14 January 2018 - 02:45 AM

 

  • No any bugs in storyline/Mission/Mission Pack

 

Then there will be no project eligible for this topic... xD

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#3

Posted 14 January 2018 - 03:38 AM Edited by Opcode, 14 January 2018 - 05:08 AM.

Sorry, i was sleepy. Edited stoned.gif


Yasir_RFL
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#4

Posted 14 January 2018 - 04:22 AM

This is the topic which was missing in the community.I will surely ask you when I have a good MP(good means with no spelling and grammar mistakes). Well,Good luck for it. :D

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#5

Posted 14 January 2018 - 04:35 AM

What's the difference between a mission and a single mission anyway? Unless you meant a mission pack?


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#6

Posted 14 January 2018 - 05:44 AM

What's the difference between a mission and a single mission anyway? Unless you meant a mission pack?

Both are same but mission pack is different. You know much better from me.


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#7

Posted 14 January 2018 - 07:41 AM Edited by Light Syde Riandy, 14 January 2018 - 07:41 AM.

You wrote "a mission" instead of "a mission pack" in "will take 8-10 days."

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#8

Posted 14 January 2018 - 08:07 AM Edited by Martin_Strada, 14 January 2018 - 08:07 AM.

Hey man, I would like to play my storyline:

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/50738

 

Mission Name: The King of Los Santos

Type: Storyline

Description: Lance Reed is a mechanic member in Ocean Docks, LS. His work to get a car and upgrade it. Second of all, Lance Reed bored without action like shooting, race, and driving. He's 24 years old kid who loves his work. His journey will cause a lot of casualties...

Additional: I recommend you to use a cheat AEZAKMI, cuz some missions were not disabled, this storyline was made by 4 members.

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#9

Posted 14 January 2018 - 03:19 PM

Single war missions allowed?

Also nice topic OP.:D

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#10

Posted 14 January 2018 - 05:27 PM

Single war missions allowed?

Also nice topic OP. :D

Yes.


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Posted 14 January 2018 - 09:25 PM Edited by Danz., 14 January 2018 - 09:31 PM.

Mission Pack Name: Empire of the Soul
Type: Mission Pack                
Description: Story about time travelling, fighting the government and relationship among the main characters, being it friendship, brotherhood or love.
Additional: 4 main characters, several organizations, being ALSOUL the main one, which is more in the grey side of things. (It ain't good nor evil, does both things at the same time) It is still WIP, but will probably finished until June.
 
Link to it: http://gtaforums.com/topic/862352-mp-empire-of-the-soul/


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#12

Posted 17 January 2018 - 09:19 AM Edited by Chaos17, 17 January 2018 - 09:19 AM.

Hey will you be the reviewer for the missions in DYOM Cup.

Opcode
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Posted 17 January 2018 - 09:54 AM

Sure.


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Posted 17 January 2018 - 10:08 AM Edited by Chaos17, 17 January 2018 - 10:08 AM.

Sure.

Thanks

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Posted 17 January 2018 - 01:04 PM Edited by Roxie, 18 January 2018 - 12:40 PM.

Mission Name: Land of the Dead

Type: Mission Pack
Description:Horror MP...The game is a prequel to the Land of the Dead film, taking place during the initial outbreak of the zombie epidemic. 

Additional:Play this MP with sounds this is my first MP  
 


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Posted 18 January 2018 - 05:29 AM Edited by Opcode, 19 January 2018 - 11:37 AM.

@Danz. and @Roxie - Expect my review on your topics soon.

 

[News]:  Grammar error is fixed + a "remember" under the "Indication".

[News]:  Format method updated. Another option added + Some about Premium under the "format".

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Posted 19 January 2018 - 05:09 PM

@Danz. and @Roxie - Expect my review on your topics soon.


I’m already waiting for it. :D

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#18

Posted 20 February 2018 - 10:57 AM Edited by Martin_Strada, 18 March 2018 - 09:29 AM.

Hey man, I would like to play my mission pack.

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/52655

 

Mission Name: Modern Frontlines

Type: Mission Pack

Description: The year is 2011, Vlad Rodriguez begins a coup in the Afganistan, while Russia is in the Civil War, between the Ultranationalists and Government Loyalists. To complete the revolution, Vlad executes the mayor of Los Santos and takes all San Andreas territories. Meanwhile, a new Europe Force 141 recruit 'Sponge' Wilkins has passed the Selection and is now joining Cpt.Cost's squad and Cost will soon reveal that Vlad is just a small fish in these operations. It's up to you to discover the truth.

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Posted 20 February 2018 - 01:56 PM Edited by VenomDYOM, 04 March 2018 - 08:06 PM.

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#20

Posted 14 March 2018 - 07:35 AM

this thread look dead because opcode is now too inactive and offline!





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