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Posted 13 December 2017 - 05:41 PM Edited by AfricaDesignerDz, 25 December 2017 - 10:47 AM.

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Los Santos 1998,Johnson Boys,A Good guys working in car machinemaker,They dreams to be a Gang leader,Theylikes killing bad guys,After The Boy Daniel Make A Gang Called "The OG Killers"Edward leavs his job and Join his brother gang, but after that they had proplems and some gangs mistakes, but they got new friends and special members to thier own gang...and then the gang just begin his history.

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EJ(Edward Johnson):Alive

DJ(Daniel Johnson):Alive

Willy(James Wilson):Alive

Kevin(Kevin Escobar):Alive

 

Mike(Mike Escobar):Alive

 

Officer Samuel(Samuel Anderson):Alive

 

Kig(Kigan Lorins):Alive

 

Kofi(Kofinston Leonardo):Dead

 

Mr.Fred(Fredando):Alive

 

MORE COMING SOON...

 

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Chapter 1 Link:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/51149

Mission 1)-Prologue

Mission 2)-The First Pain

Mission 3)-Guns On Vagos

Mission 4)-The OG Killers

Mission 5)-Attack On Ballas

Mission 6)-Helping Hand

Mission 7)-Kofi Must Die

Mission 8)-Bad Realtionship

 

Chapter 2 Missions:

 

Mission 1)-Gang War

Mission 2)-Money in the Bank

 

MORE COMING SOON...

 

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Thanks to GuerreroX(AfricaDesignerDz) and IsIx123 for working on this series.

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Posted 13 December 2017 - 06:03 PM

I sincerely request you to add some headers and images of the characters. Give the plot some details if you can. Sorry, if I look a bit harsh. 

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Posted 13 December 2017 - 06:50 PM Edited by TQR12345, 13 December 2017 - 06:52 PM.

Will play it once it comes out.

 

 

Daniel Johnson must be a relative to Edward,right?

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 10:27 AM

Will play it once it comes out.
 
 
Daniel Johnson must be a relative to Edward,right?


Yes,He is Edward brother

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 10:50 AM

Ow... Best topic I've ever seen.

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 11:00 AM

Ow... Best topic I've ever seen.


If you dont like this topic,Leave.

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 11:26 AM

Good story! Will play.......
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Posted 14 December 2017 - 02:36 PM

Good story! Will play.......


Thanks Homie

EDIT:Demo will Release in 24th December.

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 02:38 PM Edited by Martin_Strada, 14 December 2017 - 02:38 PM.

Ow... Best topic I've ever seen.

 

She's or He's just a rookie in this community, he doesn't know how to make any headers or something like that, so don't mind.

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 02:56 PM

Ow... Best topic I've ever seen.

 
She's or He's just a rookie in this community, he doesn't know how to make any headers or something like that, so don't mind.

Yeah,Am Just a begginer girl.Can you tell me how to Make headers?

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 02:59 PM Edited by Martin_Strada, 14 December 2017 - 03:00 PM.

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Posted 14 December 2017 - 03:02 PM

Well,I have IPhone,When got PC am gonna do this.

Dosent have this on IPhone Reply.

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#13

Posted 18 December 2017 - 02:52 PM

Characters Are Added:

Wilson
Kevin

Voting is Avaible!To 20th December

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Posted 18 December 2017 - 07:51 PM

You might as well add 2 POVs.(in a MP play as Ed and in a MP play as Daniel)

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Posted 18 December 2017 - 08:29 PM

Well,I Could Make EJ The Player,and Daniel thé player of dlc

But we will wait Résulte of vote

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Posted 20 December 2017 - 05:24 PM Edited by AfricaDesignerDz, 20 December 2017 - 05:24 PM.

BETA IS OUT!


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Posted 20 December 2017 - 05:36 PM Edited by TQR12345, 20 December 2017 - 05:36 PM.

Will play it once it comes out.

 

 

 

Rated 4/5 on DYOM website.

You can edit your post in DYOM website and show the link to the GTAForums topic,if you want.

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Posted 20 December 2017 - 05:45 PM

A'ight,I Just edit....Thanks amigo :santa: .


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Posted 20 December 2017 - 07:40 PM Edited by Target13, 21 December 2017 - 07:48 AM.

I don't what to say.
Your story makes absolutely no sense, there was no reason to make two shorts missions when you could've just fit them in one.
Do you even plan your stories out? Or do you make them up as you go? Because the story almost literally started with "Hey man I'm back from work" and then "Cool story bro. Wanna join my gang though?".
Want my advice? Seeing as you just got a PC, it's better that you try other designers' missions first and see what you can learn from them before starting your own project.
 
Rated 1/5. Sorry.
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Posted 20 December 2017 - 10:09 PM Edited by TQR12345, 20 December 2017 - 10:11 PM.

By the way,the players are quite static during the two missions. 
If you want,I can remaster those two into a single one for you and add more animations,make the mission longer,etc.

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Posted 21 December 2017 - 07:01 AM

By the way,the players are quite static during the two missions. 
If you want,I can remaster those two into a single one for you and add more animations,make the mission longer,etc.

Well,Do you wanna join my discord to make the Series good?


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Posted 21 December 2017 - 12:27 PM Edited by TQR12345, 21 December 2017 - 12:29 PM.

 

By the way,the players are quite static during the two missions. 
If you want,I can remaster those two into a single one for you and add more animations,make the mission longer,etc.

Well,Do you wanna join my discord to make the Series good?

 

I'll try

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Posted 21 December 2017 - 03:53 PM

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This is the cover. Right click and save the file

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Posted 21 December 2017 - 03:56 PM

Thanks Dude!I like it! am gonna add it. :lol:

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Posted 21 December 2017 - 03:59 PM

Thanks Dude!I like it! am gonna add it. :lol:

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Posted 23 December 2017 - 08:58 AM

​I don't think you know how to make headers my friend, so..

 

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If you like it you can add it at the top :colgate:

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Posted 23 December 2017 - 09:05 AM

Thx!Am gonna add it!Nice logo bro.

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Posted 23 December 2017 - 09:31 AM Edited by Cptmyname, 23 December 2017 - 09:32 AM.

Thx!Am gonna add it!Nice logo bro.

You're welcome, buddy.

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Posted 23 December 2017 - 10:01 AM

Nice logos. :D

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Posted 24 December 2017 - 11:26 AM

CHAPTER 1 IS OUT:http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/51149





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