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[MP] The Wrong Lines

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Martin_Strada
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#1

Posted 26 August 2017 - 01:26 PM Edited by Martin_Strada, 4 weeks ago.

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About:

 

This mission pack is talking about infection of San Andreas, This MP idea is to kill zombies and survive the world

 

 

Story:

 

 

You are Rick Paul, a lost guy in the forest, the start's going on, where Rick Paul got crash with truck.. 6 hours later, he wakes up in the midnight, checking people, while he's walking, he sees a house where's empty, while entering the house, Rick Paul is missing something, because he looked a possessed guy, is he a zombie or culture? While we get out of this house, Rick Paul is running away from those things, Rick Paul is running to the helicopter, while he almost to the helicopter, Heli is destroyed, Rick Paul runs on foot. There's no way to run to him, he jumps through a big hill, is he survived?

 

Characters:

 

Rick Paul:

 

A lost man in the forest, he's a playable character.

 

Issac Spectre:

 

A veteran S.W.A.T. Member, he always wanted to be a hero.

 

Bob Riggleman:

 

A black guy, he tells everything that's going on this world.

 

 

Downloads:

 

Recommended Download/Required mods

http://www.gtagarage.com/mods/show.php?id=9226

https://www.sendspace.com/file/i61xmz

 

 

Game created by: Rockstar North

Story made by: AtomicSpawner (Atomic Man)

Characters made by: Martin (Strada)

Main Mission Pack's idea by Martin (Strada)

DYOM (Design Your own Mission) made by: Dutchy3010 & PatrickW

Text made by: Martin (Strada)

Overdose Effects made by: Function X


Delaware
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#2

Posted 26 August 2017 - 02:42 PM

Work on your grammar.
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Pablo Javier
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#3

Posted 26 August 2017 - 02:43 PM Edited by Pablo Javier, 26 August 2017 - 02:43 PM.

I hope you will do a good work!

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.GreenGoo
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#4

Posted 26 August 2017 - 05:04 PM

Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck  :^:


Delaware
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#5

Posted 26 August 2017 - 05:41 PM

Delaware's right, you must work on your grammar before designing cause the important thing in designing is the Grammar. Good luck  :^:

In this case, I don't think it's the most important thing. Martin's mission packs were usually very simple, short and fast. His projects usually lack character development and a decent story, which I think are the two most important things. His grammar is currently understandable, but at a weak level too. Oh and Martin, I have nothing personal against you. I am just judging your work. You need improvements.

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.GreenGoo
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#6

Posted 27 August 2017 - 11:06 AM

@Delaware Excatly, I always work hardly on the gameplay, creativity and actions.

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