hi everyone im back at it again trying a new fan fiction. this one is about the civil war and the old west. it is set in the red dead universe and the protagonist will come in contact with other characters in the universe. enjoy and please dont kill me if i make a few mistakes. also please dont take offense to any insults said in this. i might write yankee or have racial slurs but this is only to keep thngs accurate. please do not be offended this is set in the 19th century.
hi my name is mathew this is the story of my life and journey throughout the old west. i suppose it starts when i was 15 during the civil war in 1863. my pa was a confederate soldier. he was an artilleryman and very good at it. i lived on our little farm in tennessee with my mom and older sister jessica. we did not have a lot of money. my moms sister on the other hand was rich. they had a plantation with slaves and a big house. they helped us sometimes but they were pretty mean and greedy. things were going ok for the most part. my pa would send us letters often and tell us how he was doing. we had not seen the war yet until one day in late 1863 the yankees came to our farm.
I was feeding the animals when they came. There was about fifteen of them and I ran straight to our cabin to tell ma and Jessica. "mom the yankees are coming here what do we do"? "go tell jessica to hide and you too i will talk to them". "ok mom be careful i love you." "you too son." i ran to jessica she was watering our crops. "Jess we have to hide the yankees are coming mom is going to distract them". "follow me lets hide in the shed". i followed her in the shed and we saw the yankees ride in on horseback. they were cavalrymen. mom was standing in front of our house looking fearless. she was a strong woman. the leader of their group a sargent told them to halt and he spoke to my mom. "hello ma'am i am sargent brian calloway of the united states cavalry". "we are here to take anything you have for our army food, tools, horses or anything else we need". " i aint supplying the yankee army anything". "well unfortunately for you we can take whatever we want". "men go search for what we need come back in ten minutes". as the yankees moved around our house and stole most of our supplies i grabbed my gun that my pa gave me out of the shed and started loading it. jessica spoke with a whisper. "what are you going to do"? "im gonna stop them from stealing our stuff". "your going to get yourself killed i wont allow that". "ok your right but im going to load it just in case", as this was happening the sargent was getting close to my mom and i could tell he was up to no good. "your very pretty miss i haven't had a woman in a long time". GET OFF ME CREEP"! just then my mom punched him hard and he was mad. she was running from him towards the shed but he tackled her. "come on lady your just making this harder on yourself." he pulled down his pants and started raping her i couldn't take it. so i opened the shed door and lined up my gun just right and pulled the trigger. the man dropped and had a red hole in his chest. what happened next was even more horrifying.
ok that was my first two chapters of red dead rebel. i know it started off pretty bad but it will get better eventually. please tell me what you thought i know the grammer is probably bad but im still working on it.