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  • ElPatron036

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Posted 04 November 2016 - 10:56 PM Edited by ElPatron036, 04 November 2016 - 11:11 PM.

Sayonara Salvatore Alternate Ending, a Fanfic made by ElPatron036.



[Claude walks to the Yakuza Hideout in Newport]


Asuka: We have certain issues to clear up before we can continue any form of relationship, business or otherwise. Let's lay our cards on the table. I am Yakuza and I know you've been working for Salvatore Leone's family. I can give you work with our organization. But first you must prove to me that your ties with the Mafia are truly broken. Salvatore Leone will be leaving Luigi's in about three hours time. Make sure he doesn't reach his club alive. Meanwhile Maria and I will catch up on old times.


Maria: Oh.. Asuka, you've got a massager.


Asuka: That's not a massager, that is installed in there.


Maria: Sorry.


Asuka: Look, please don't blow this job, You're my only hope.


[Claude walks away, and suddenly sees a Minigun, and Grabs it]


[Back to Maria and Asuka]


Maria: Hey Asuka! You know? A Minigun won't always work!

Asuka: That's sometimes.


Go to Luigi's Sex Club


[Claude gets a car and drives to Luigi's Sex Club at Red Light District]


[The Mafia leaves the club to protect Salvatore, but suddenly they get gunned down]


Salvatore: What the hell?!


[Claude grabs Salvatore and punches him Knock Out and grabs him by his neck to take him]


Go back to Asuka's Hideout

[Then Claude either gets a boat or a car to drive to the Yakuza Hideout in Newport]


[Claude grabs him again and takes him to Asuka]


Asuka: Is he dead?


Maria: Mhm, not really.


[Salvatore wakes up]


Salvatore: So how's the 'date' going?


[Claude shakes his head like he's saying no]


Maria: Boy! I should've never told you that me and Fido are dating! Shall we restart this again?


Salvatore: I think so too.


Asuka: You messed up this time! I don't need you anymore! Goodbye you sick man! [Asuka walks away from Claude]


Maria: Hey! You should've give Fido a special reward.


Salvatore: For what he all caused? I think not!'


Maria: Yeah, f*ck him.


[Maria and Salvatore leaves Claude too, which causes Claude to get in full depression as This song plays]


[Claude goes to a wall holding his head with his arms, then Claude steals a Car which lets him go home]


[Claude arrived at his house in Portland, but sadly, he doesn't own the house anymore because he didn't paid the rentals]


[Claude is going to Luigi's Sex Club, in the alley, sitting on the ground, crossing his arms and hiding his head as he sniffs]


[A Leone leaves the Sex Club]


Leone: Umm.. Luigi? Who is that guy?


Luigi: That's just a dude who failed with his life, let's ignore that prick.


[Misty Shows Up]


Misty: Ew! [Walks into the Sex Club]


Claude: I can't believe this.... Everyone dislikes me.... All because of that Minigun....... I should've killed Salvatore.....


8-Ball: Yeah you should've! And i can't hang out with losers like you. [Walks away]


[Claude stands up and goes to Ma's Restaurant]


Toni: Sorry man! You're banned from here because you fail at life and tried to kill Salvatore!


Ma: My son is right! I would've never serve that prick! EVER AGAIN!


[Suddenly at the Construction Site, he's having Hobo Clothes, a tear falls of his eye]


[The screen fades black slowly, continuing the song with the credits]



The End

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Posted 04 November 2016 - 11:01 PM


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Posted 05 November 2016 - 12:27 AM

The f*ck it's this lol.

Still, funny. :lol:

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Posted 05 November 2016 - 02:07 PM

This was awesome. A dull protagonist deserves a dull ending :)

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Posted 05 November 2016 - 02:28 PM

What's this? A custom alternative ending? I thought it was a real discovery.

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Posted 26 November 2016 - 12:04 AM

Reminds me of Toni Ciprani, and indian music.

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Posted 27 November 2016 - 06:08 AM

what the actual f*ck have I just read

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Posted 27 November 2016 - 07:03 AM

what the actual f*ck have I just read


Something eligible for a Pulitzer Prize is what you read.

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Posted 20 April 2017 - 04:27 AM

Sad :(

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Posted 20 April 2017 - 12:02 PM

I love it.

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Posted 28 April 2017 - 06:31 AM

That... Doesn't fit the original story continuation at all.


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Posted 29 April 2017 - 03:41 PM

If only....


Claude is pretty much forced to kill him because Salvatore wanted him dead over a girl.

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Posted 15 May 2017 - 05:05 PM


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