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My little review for your mission...
Writing Normal very much understandable, so it's good! like mine.
Presentation Good using of static and smooth cutsenes. So I can't see any trouble here!
Length Mission length is normal, because we go through the helicopter. So it also take sometime. That's why the mission takes approximately 5 to 4 minutes to complete. Which is good!
Difficulty Difficulty is amateur, you can say, because the enemy rifles accuracy is 50, And the health is 100 and up to 250. So it's excellent!
Variety It's decent in my opinion, because you should have to create the objects placement to make your mission variety more unique. And I can't see any object placement in your mission. Specially the underground way, after we teleport into madd dog's mansion. You should have to set the gate object there also.
My Rating: 4/5
Keep up the good work! I saw very much improvement in your missions