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Posted 13 August 2016 - 06:44 AM Edited by GOTH2001, 29 December 2016 - 12:50 PM.

Mission pack status: COMPLETED

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Hello, guys. I'm new and I've made first mission pack series that I hope you'll like it. Since I've started making in lot of months to finish this, with lot of effort for this mission pack. It contains 29 missions and 4 chapters on it. So, I hope you play it enjoyfully :)


Story:
In the city of Los Angeles, it is full of crimes and gangsters all around the city. The polices had a hard time to clear the particular problems. Steve "Scaraff" Ben Johns, the new recruit of the police forces and services. He always wanted to be a police since his childhood to protect and serve the community and city of LA. However, due to his "higher level of protecting the citizens", he suggested the citizens is in danger from the even infuriate and derange of unknown gangs, causing him more confusion in mistake way. He'll try his best to clear the problem all around the community..

Characters:

Name: Steve "Scaraff" Ben Johns
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Description: Major time playable character/protagonist of this series. He is a new recruit member of police forces. He wanted to make the community much safe and peace.

Name: Frank "Orbi" Sims
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Description: Minor time playable character. He is best friend of Steve since childhood. He is fat with a decent behavior. He's been served for a week before Steve would recruit.

Name: Keith "Ketien" Salvo
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Description: One of the minor time playable character. He is valiant and polite person that he is believed that he's been served for many years.

Name: Robbie Perkins
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Description: One of the minor time playable character. He is well-meaning person with a immature behavior. He's been served for few years.

Name: Luke Wells
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Description: One of the minor time playable character. He is one of a member of the police forces.

Name: Dwayne Gilbert
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Description: He is Luke's partner under the police task. He is one of a member of the police forces.

Name: Dale "Delt" Warden
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Description: One of the minor time playable character. He is the FBI who helps investigate about Rusk gangs.

Name: Sean Dustin
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Description: He is Delt's partner of the FBI Team. He's the one who knows information about Rusk gangs.

Name: Troy Wells
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Description: He is Luke Wells' brother. He is just a civilian who wanders around his block.

Enemy Characters:

Name: Rusk Gangs
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Description: They are the Rusk gangs who has hatred towards polices and citizens. Their head of gangs is Freddy Rusky

Name: Freddy Rusky
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Description: He is the head of the Rusk gangs. He has hatred and dislike towards both polices and citizens because he believed that his budget is worthless to earn because of them.

Name: Black Mobsters
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Description: They are mixed Japanese, Vietnamese and Chinese mobsters who has same behavior with Rusk gangs. Their head of this crime is Tsing Choi Sik

Name: Tsing Choi Sik
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Description: He is the head of the Black Mobsters. He has the same hatred as Freddy Rusky. He wanted deal with Freddy Rusky for join effort in doing their own heist mission, or even annihilating the polices. However, their deal did not got so well.

Name: Sebastian Reds
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Description: He is Tsing's elite agent. He's a former and traitor member of U.S Forces for stealing military hardware and equipment.

Name: "Bookie"
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Description: He is Tsing's personal henchman. He is loyal to the Black mobs. He doesn't speak English and is only speak Vietnamese.

Link for mission pack:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/43910

Requirements:

*Download the sound effects for more realism. Here's the link: https://www.sendspace.com/file/f47z18

Notes:

*It doesn't connected to GTA Timeline. So, it's settings was set in alternate real world. I did this because I want real world.

*It quite humorous when having characters with weird names. It is their own callsign.

*When you're using headset, make sure you adjust your volume correctly what suits your hearing. The sounds may not properly optimized

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Posted 13 August 2016 - 04:18 PM

Yes..., Finally a police life MP I will surely play this

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Posted 14 August 2016 - 10:29 AM

best mission pack 


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Posted 14 August 2016 - 12:35 PM

@GYAWater7 - I'm glad you're going to play it. :)
 
@Xaad - Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! :)


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Posted 14 August 2016 - 12:41 PM

Nice mission pack you have here. Gonna try this and give you my feedback ASAP :D

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Posted 14 August 2016 - 01:53 PM

@Jhan Dave - Thanks! I'm glad you're goin' to try it. :)


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Posted 14 August 2016 - 03:26 PM

U Deserve That Bro :D

Very Very Entertaining And Awesome Story


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Posted 15 August 2016 - 05:57 AM

@Xaad - Thanks again! :)


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Posted 08 September 2016 - 11:12 AM

This is excellent for an amateur DYOM designer. You deserved it.


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Posted 08 September 2016 - 01:40 PM Edited by Alan Eastwood, 08 September 2016 - 01:43 PM.

I've played the first two chapters and for what I saw and played, the sounds are the key in this MP. It's really impressive what you did and take some of gta sounds and some scenes that you took from the gta san andreas campaign. These MP is worth to play, try not to judge by the gfx on this topic, the gameplay is kinda repetitive, but with the sounds and the change of perspective made it more even better.

 

You need to work on your english. Some of the cops talk like they're gangsters.

 

Also, there's parts in the game that are surreal to me:

 

SPOILER ALERT! Don't open this unless you've played the first two chapters.

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Apart from that, the MP has his unique story and funny characters. 

 

You got yourself a new fan over here. Good luck on your future MP's.

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Posted 08 September 2016 - 06:57 PM Edited by Rocket Man FI, 08 September 2016 - 06:58 PM.

Very good MP.I think it should be reviewed,Good luck for next MP s
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Posted 08 September 2016 - 11:34 PM Edited by Light Syde Riandy, 08 September 2016 - 11:37 PM.

Well, I gotta say that I had fun playing this MP. But there are few things that annoys me.

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Posted 10 September 2016 - 04:45 AM Edited by GOTH2001, 12 September 2016 - 11:28 AM.

@Solar Flare - Thanks for your fine feedback!

@Alan Eastwood - Thanks, the sounds are the ideas I made for this MP. But the thing is, that I made a gameplay and story plots, was not really that, to be good enough. Might be repetitive because I'm making up the story progression so that users could understand.

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@Rocket Man FI - Hey, good to see you. Looking forward to your review soon. :)
 
@Light Syde Riandy -

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Thanks for your honest feedbacks, it means a lot to convinced me to improve for the future mission packs.  :D

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Posted 10 September 2016 - 05:35 AM

I'm being real honest here, from all the mp's that i've played, this is my favourite right now, I'm not kidding. The english is the low part but apart from that, the sounds, the history, the wtc, everything works perfectly. And this is your first mp! I mean, it's amazing.

 

More people should play this, we've might get a nominee for mp of the year. 

 

Also, chapter 3 was a real pain in the ass (and I say this in a good way). I think it's my first time that i've got so much trouble to win a mission because the enemies pop out of nowhere. Hands down to you, sir.

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Posted 10 September 2016 - 06:56 AM

@Alan Eastwood:

Thanks, I didn't know other people can use sounds on their missions packs or whatever. I take WHOLE time to finish it, and was kind of long time elapsed I gotten to finish it. I found out and learned how to make sound effects, by myself I think. :D

Hmm.. I think I agree on you, will only nominee this when people (lot of them) found out about this

Thanks that you liked and fave this MP. Cheers :)

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Posted 16 September 2016 - 02:17 PM

Hmm... A story about law enforcement, huh? It looks good. I guess I have to try it soon when I had the time.

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Posted 17 September 2016 - 02:12 AM

@Fabeeeeeee - OK, looking also forward for your review. :)


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Posted 29 December 2016 - 12:55 PM Edited by GOTH2001, 29 December 2016 - 03:38 PM.

(News)

New update has come:
-Grammar mistakes are now fixed
-New sounds have been modified
-Changes some scenarios during gameplay

Final Note:

-I made a final version of this, just to inform you.
-As for the latest upcoming SL "GTA: Life is Tough", I'm working on it.
-Yeah so, have fun! And sorry for bumping.


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Posted 04 January 2017 - 07:10 PM Edited by fashion, 04 January 2017 - 07:10 PM.

I'm going to check it out as soon as I'm finished with VfV. I can't remember playing through a proper police mission pack back in 2011, so I'll give it a shot.
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Posted 07 January 2017 - 06:13 AM

I'm going to check it out as soon as I'm finished with VfV. I can't remember playing through a proper police mission pack back in 2011, so I'll give it a shot.


It's fine, just take your time. ;)


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Posted 15 April 2017 - 04:34 PM Edited by .GreenGoo, 15 April 2017 - 04:37 PM.

Awesome MP, I like it! Pretty enviornment you made in it. :happy:

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Posted 16 April 2017 - 02:35 AM

Awesome MP, I like it! Pretty enviornment you made in it. :happy:


Thanks! I'm also glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Posted 15 July 2017 - 08:37 AM

This is one of the best Mission Pack i've ever played in DYOM. Everything is Perfect! Grammar was Fabulous, Presentation was great, no spell mistakes! Plot was Hell! Seriously, enjoy this a lot. 10/10! 

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Posted 16 July 2017 - 04:27 AM

This is one of the best Mission Pack i've ever played in DYOM. Everything is Perfect! Grammar was Fabulous, Presentation was great, no spell mistakes! Plot was Hell! Seriously, enjoy this a lot. 10/10! 


Thanks, I hope you had a great time playing it. Cheers :)

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Posted 26 July 2017 - 02:28 PM

Wow, this Mission Pack is the best! You're a professional designer, keep up designing more! :D

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Posted 31 August 2017 - 09:36 AM

This one is a best mp with police. 





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