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Posted 11 August 2016 - 11:12 AM Edited by fashion, 11 August 2016 - 11:18 AM.



How to play

I will start the story by writing one line or paragraph describing what happened. Eg:

"John finished feeding his horse and decided to head out. He grabbed the sattle and headed into town. Because it was still early in the morning, he decided to go to"

 

Then there will be 3-5 options for you to choose from. Eg:

A) The local bar

B) The train station

C) See Dickens

D) A shop

E) the farm

 

The next player would then pick one, and write what happens next, then leave 3-5 more options for the player below to pick from, and write about. Etc, Etc.

 

Rules

 

1) Write nothing sexual, whatsoever. So nothing like [CHARACTER 1] approached [CHARACTER 2] and spread his cheeks.... Very minor things are allowed though just don't go all out.

 

2) Main Characters can't die. If they do, they simply wake up at the doctor.

 

3) I decided to make the RDR ending never happened because nobody likes Jack and we don't know enough about him.

 

4) Have fun! The GTA section could do it, maybe this topic can help to make this section more active so spread the word.

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Because why not? :)

GTAV Chain story topic I copied some stuff from: http://gtaforums.com...ge-1?hl= chain
(Credit goes to Ezza.)



Here it goes:

John Marston wakes up in his bed on a sunny morning. He's hearing someone knocking rapidly at the door but before he could jump out the bed, his wife Abigail opened the door.

"Darling, wait!"

Who's at the door?

A: Bonnie MacFarlane
B: Landon Ricketts
C: Irish
D: The Police
E: Kidnappers

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Posted 11 August 2016 - 01:42 PM

C: Irish


"Hello me lady, i'm looking for a grumpy guy covered in scars and good with the revolver"-Abigail calls for John- "Irish? The hell you doing he- Iughh, is the morning, why you already smell like liquor you bastard?!"- "Look listen, i need your help!"

Irish asks for:

A- Hiding in the farm with the Marstons for a bit from unknown pursuers.

B- Help with a group of bandits that he owes money to.

C- Needs money to buy a treasure map.
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Posted 11 August 2016 - 05:14 PM

A)

 

"Johnny, my boy. I'm just lookin' for a place to duck my head for a day or two. I ain't askin' for much."

 

John stroked the stubble on his chin, then looked back at Abigail. With an apprehensive expression colouring her face, she shrugged. John sighed, then looked back at his old acquaintance. 

 

"Irish, just what the hell are you up too? Are you tryin' to put my family in danger!?"

 

Sensing those old, familiar feelings, John shoved Irish back outside, then signaled Abigail to close the door behind him. As he stumbled backwards, Irish lifted his hands up and shook his head quickly.

 

"My intentions are pure, Marston! I'm just looking for a safe haven!"

 

John gave Irish another shove, edging him towards the porch stairs.

 

"This is my home, you drunken fool! Not some place you can hide out!"

"Please, Mr. Marston, just one night, that's it!"

 

John gave Irish one last shove, pushing him over the porch stairs and onto the dirt. Irish winced for a second then looked over towards the thicket that divided John's ranch from Tall Trees. The sun was setting, poking holes through the trees, casting golden rays of light on Beecher's Hope.

Irish raised a hand to block the setting sun, and looked back at John who was towering over him.

 

John expels a sigh and..

1) Offers him a bed in the barn.

2) Reaches for his Schofield Revolver that was tucked away in his holster, threatening Irish to get out.

3) Notices something in the distance, a gang of Outlaws heading towards Beecher's Hope.


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Posted 11 August 2016 - 06:22 PM Edited by fashion, 11 August 2016 - 06:32 PM.

3. Notices something in the distance, a gang of Outlaws heading towards Beecher's Hope.

Irish grabs John by the jacket and starts crying out loud:
"John, I'm begging you, help me out! It was just one bottle of that.. *hicks* tha imported stuff from..."
John pushes him away in disgust.
"You lying stinking buffoon, all you'll be drinkin' to the rest of ya life is opium if you ever touch me again!"
"-b- But please listen, I'll do anythin'! Hide me, if they see 's together they'll kill you too! Oh no, God bless us all!

The group of smugglers is getting closer, there seems to be at least 15 of them and a wagon.
Abigail runs out.
"Damn you Marston and your drunk friends, putting your wife and son in danger! f*ck this drunk bastard, we should hand him over immediately."

What's the plan?

1. They let Irish hide inside before the smugglers approach.
2. The family hides, John and Irish confront them.
3. John confronts them alone.
4. Everybody grabs a horse and rides away.
5. Irish gets punched in the face and is gonna be handed over to avoid any trouble.

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Posted 17 October 2016 - 10:47 PM Edited by confederatestatesgta, 24 April 2017 - 02:30 PM.

1. they let irish hide inside before the smugglers approach.

 

"get your ass inside before they see us!" john

"ok thanks john. irish

"the only reason im doing this is because you helped me get to mexico." john

 

the outlaws approach the house and the leader yells out

"bring the irish man out we know he is in there" unknown

"we dont want to have to kill you but we will" unknown

john looks out the window and sees the whole gang all armed with guns.

 

"what did he do to yall to deserve this attention?" john

"he stole our beer and when we tried to stop him he shot a few of our men and stole my favorite horse!!" unknown

"ok i can understand the anger and if he did that to me i would probably want to hurt him too." john says while looking angrily at irsh.

 

"hes lying john that aint how it went at all!" irish

"shut up you irish bastard!!" unknown

now listen here mister i dont know who you are im sure your just a regular person who just wants peace." unknown

"i dont know what he told you but everything he says is a lie." unknown

"oh i believe you he has screwed me over many times in the past he even tried to rob some nuns a while back before i stopped him" john

"well thats quite a story mister whats your name?" unknown

"its john marston and yours?"

"john marston? i know you your that outlaw who ran with dutch and his gang right?" unknown

"yea i was part of it until he betrayed me" john

"i have had dealings with them before you must have been gone when i met em" unknown

uncle hears all the commotion and wakes up from his usual nap and comes in the living room.

 

"what the heck is going on john?" uncle

glad you decided to join us old man" john

"i recognize that voice you wouldent happen to be sergeant ralph barkly of the confederate army would you?" unknown

"what the hell aint no one called me that in years." uncle

"you dont remember me? captain george carthey"

"oh sh*t john you got to kill him quick!!" uncle

"whats the matter ralph you dont want john to find how you f*cked up our chances of winning the war?" george

"well you better bring out irish and ralph NOW!!!!!" george

"no irish is an idiot and if he screwed yall over i will see to it he gets punished. and whatever your rivalry is with uncle can just be forgotten the war ended a long time ago." john

"ha ha yea sure you think im an idiot sure i know if i leave irish will be let go to hurt more people and ralph will get away with his crimes he should be court martialed.george

abigail moves up to john while jack goes and grabs a rifle.

 

john what are we going to do?" abigail

but before john could answer george interrupts him.

"well if you aint gonna give them up i will just kill them now" george

george throws a molotov at the house starting a fire.

 

what do they do?

 

 

1. they try leave out the back door

2. shoot at the outlaws

3. try to put the fire out

4. someone comes to their rescue and attacks the outlaws

 

ok i put the names of the people who talked after the sentence. and the person who is unknown is the leader. his name is revealed later. i hope this is good enough to continue the story.


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Posted 30 January 2017 - 04:13 PM

come on anybody? this is a cool thread idea i want to see more to the story.


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Posted 17 April 2017 - 09:53 PM

come on anybody? this is a cool thread idea i want to see more to the story.


I would, but I can't tell who is doing what in your post. Separation and clarification is important.

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Posted 26 April 2017 - 01:47 PM

i updated it now. can you understand what is being said now?


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Posted 29 April 2017 - 10:36 PM

1. they let irish hide inside before the smugglers approach.
 
"get your ass inside before they see us!" john
"ok thanks john. irish
"the only reason im doing this is because you helped me get to mexico." john
 
the outlaws approach the house and the leader yells out
"bring the irish man out we know he is in there" unknown
"we dont want to have to kill you but we will" unknown
john looks out the window and sees the whole gang all armed with guns.
 
"what did he do to yall to deserve this attention?" john
"he stole our beer and when we tried to stop him he shot a few of our men and stole my favorite horse!!" unknown
"ok i can understand the anger and if he did that to me i would probably want to hurt him too." john says while looking angrily at irsh.
 
"hes lying john that aint how it went at all!" irish
"shut up you irish bastard!!" unknown
now listen here mister i dont know who you are im sure your just a regular person who just wants peace." unknown
"i dont know what he told you but everything he says is a lie." unknown
"oh i believe you he has screwed me over many times in the past he even tried to rob some nuns a while back before i stopped him" john
"well thats quite a story mister whats your name?" unknown
"its john marston and yours?"
"john marston? i know you your that outlaw who ran with dutch and his gang right?" unknown
"yea i was part of it until he betrayed me" john
"i have had dealings with them before you must have been gone when i met em" unknown
uncle hears all the commotion and wakes up from his usual nap and comes in the living room.
 
"what the heck is going on john?" uncle
glad you decided to join us old man" john
"i recognize that voice you wouldent happen to be sergeant ralph barkly of the confederate army would you?" unknown
"what the hell aint no one called me that in years." uncle
"you dont remember me? captain george carthey"
"oh sh*t john you got to kill him quick!!" uncle
"whats the matter ralph you dont want john to find how you f*cked up our chances of winning the war?" george
"well you better bring out irish and ralph NOW!!!!!" george
"no irish is an idiot and if he screwed yall over i will see to it he gets punished. and whatever your rivalry is with uncle can just be forgotten the war ended a long time ago." john
"ha ha yea sure you think im an idiot sure i know if i leave irish will be let go to hurt more people and ralph will get away with his crimes he should be court martialed.george
abigail moves up to john while jack goes and grabs a rifle.
 
john what are we going to do?" abigail
but before john could answer george interrupts him.
"well if you aint gonna give them up i will just kill them now" george
george throws a molotov at the house starting a fire.
 
what do they do?
 
 
1. they try leave out the back door
2. shoot at the outlaws
3. try to put the fire out
4. someone comes to their rescue and attacks the outlaws
 
ok i put the names of the people who talked after the sentence. and the person who is unknown is the leader. his name is revealed later. i hope this is good enough to continue the story.


3) Try to put the fire out. (Though the way as I write it looks like all 4 combined)

John pulls out a shotgun to hold them off as Uncle and Abigail try to put out the fire with water and Irish runs off to god-knows-where, however, as we all know, John is not that good with holding on all that officers and he is eventually óverpowered.

It just gets worse when Jack wakes up, and, distracted to what is happening, goes to read a book with a lamp, which was named "The Troubles Of Living With Your Parents" written by a man named Harold MacDougal. Mister George Carthy fires accidentally at the lamp when aiming for John and the fire gets worse. Jack gives up and goes back to sleep.

Suddenly, Irish gets back with a ancient equivalent to a tommy gun and shoots all the guys, besides Carthy and the unknown leader, who let a small piece of paper fall from his pocket as both fled. Uncle and Abigail managed to stop the fire as well.

John picks up the paper, who reads "Commissioner of Police Peter Walsh, ID 42, Telephone SKY-SEA-TANGO". What does he do next?

1) Wake up useless Jack and tell him to help him finding those people with his ever-so-knowing intellect
2) Call the number himself and see what happens
3) Gives a long lecture to Irish as to why he can't hide at his home
4) Asks Uncle for information on his true identity
5) Starts reading the book written by MacDougal that Jack left behind, as we change POV to somebody else BESIDES John, Jack, Abigail, Uncle, Irish, Carthy or the unknown leader/Peter Walsh
NOTE: If the unknown person/Mr. Walsh are the same person will be decided by people's choices.

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Posted 11 July 2017 - 03:06 AM Edited by Domand, 11 July 2017 - 03:06 AM.

4) Asks Uncle for information on his true identity

 

As John looks around to make sure all is clear he looks to see Abigail going to Jack. 

 

Uncle: Damn George and....

 

John: They know you old man?

 

Uncle: Ralph...one of the oldest titles of mine.

 

John:How do they know you? What were they talking about with the war?

 

Uncle: The war.... Damn captain George and Grant

 

John: Grant? The guy who fled with Captain George Carthy?

 

Uncle: You know him...Grant Edison. 

 

John: No clue.

 

Irish walks up.

 

Irish: Mother feckin Jesus! Grant Edison? The second in command of Warren. Warren the King.

 

John: Warren the King?

 

Irish: Just a nickname title. Warren is one of the most powerful people in the whole United states East Coast. Got connections out west here.

 

Uncle: We are screwed son if we just messed with one of his allies Grant edison. plus George is gonna want me dead knowing I am alive. 

 

John...

 

1) Asks more about Grant Edison and Warren

2) Goes to check on his family

3)Tells Irish he must leave

4)Invesigates the Peter Walsh Paper

 

Here @confederatestatesgta i continued the thread for you guys. The thread has much potential to expand even if its only a few of us.


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Posted 11 July 2017 - 04:46 AM

thanks dude I appreciate it. this thread is cool. hopefully others will get into it as well.

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Posted 09 September 2017 - 02:42 AM


To bad no one is getting into this. I might try to type something up soon as I personally like this.

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Posted 09 September 2017 - 03:19 AM

Ok man, I can't wait to read it.

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Posted 16 December 2017 - 06:02 AM

2) Goes to check on his family.

 

John heads inside and see's Abigail with Jack in the living room. He goes over and makes sure they are fine. 

 

John: Abigail....Jack...you okay?

 

Abigail: I be even better if your friends don't keep popping up trying to hurt us everyday for once.

 

John: No....its people that got something to do with Uncle.

 

Abigail: What do you mean?

 

John: I....

 

John looks at Jack.

 

John: Let me explain later. For now....I am gonna start cleaning this place up. You guys take sometime to get settled after all this mess. Me and Uncle got this covered.

 

Some hours later after cleaning up from the situation earlier, John, Uncle, and Irish walk up towards the house.

 

Irish: So....what about me having a place to rest?

 

John: I will give you a blanket and some pillows. Rest up in the barn. Alongside the horses.....seems to be your kind.

 

Irish: Screw ya Johnny Boy.

 

Uncle: Look I am sorry John...I....

 

John: No old man...I ain't even get started on you yet.....I yet to ask further on what the hell your talking about. Carthy....Warrren....Grant Edison.....and you....Ralph. 

 

Uncle:No John....these ain't fellas you wanna mess with. But it seems you might have to now.

 

John: They attacked my farm...but they seem after you and if you can't explain what the hell they is talking about with you nd why they want you dead....then your on your own with this mess.

 

Uncle: I helped your family out for years....we go way back John....how could you possibly do this...how could you still be a old hard ass even in time of crisis?

 

John: Your gonna be having a time of crisis after I put a bullet in your brain if you don't start explaining?

 

Uncle:......fine.Ralph Barkly......one of many titles. All dating back in time to when I was a younger then I am now......back to when.....to the war. Civil War. I was in my twenties We were not soldiers....Not me nor Warren....nor Grant. Only George Carthy was. Carthy however joined our side.

 

John: What side?

 

Uncle: We called ourselves the Knights. We weren't soldiers, but we had a more secret operation going on during the Civil War that made money. I and Carthy were with this group of "Knights" during its founding. Hell we witnessed Warren jon and become leader and change everything. Saw Grant Edison join and become second in command. 

 

Uncle...

 

1)Proceeds to talk about his story with the "Knights"

2)Is cut of by some comment from Irish

3)Decides to not tell anymore of the story

4)Is cut of by John


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Posted 16 December 2017 - 05:38 PM

1) Proceeds to talk about his story with the Knights

 

Uncle: They was founded during the Civil War by a few small time guys that got thrown out of the Union Army for Idiot decisions, and so they decided to help the war effort another way. Working behind the scenes and taking out people on both sides of the War. They believed they needed to fix the broken society by destroying all the corrupted on both sides and bring the people back together. Like they were the Saviors of the United Sates or something. I was rejected from joining the Army. For the Confederates. I didn't personally enjoy south's beliefs, but I was loyal to my state of Virginia. Which joined the south side. Like I said when I was rejected to join I ended up meeting a Knight and he offered me a place in their large group. They made friends as well. Lots of friends and contacts to help the Knights. One of them was Confederate Captain George Carthy. Who after the war joined as well. 

 

John Marston: After the war though....what did your little group do?

 

Uncle: Became bigger....and bigger.....and bigger... had hundreds of men joined as the Knights kinda became a large secret Society. We worked kinda like a helping society. We worked behind the scenes to dictate society of the United States to go in one certain direction. A path we all believed was best for it to be on. Even if we had to do bad things to get it there. Now as we grew we broke off into branches. The most powerful one was the east coast were a young Warren and Grant Edison joined the group. Soon they grew in their influence in the Knights and to keep a long story short....Warren was able to become the leader of the Knights and appointed Grant as his Underboss. They changed the rules and ways the Knights worked making them more like evil bastards who are supposedly making society better but in aweful ways. Warren even has his offical leader title as Warren the King. Lots of people who been involved with the Knights know about how dangerous they are. I couldn't accept being apart of their shameful group. So I left and thats how I started living with you here on this farm.

 

John Marston: So all those years I knew you when I was younger....you were doing all those bad things because you was a Knight?

 

Uncle: Yes. Now it seems they think I is a traitor for leaving them. They wanted me dead since I left. I always used fake names to hide my identity...hell the name they knew me by, Ralph Barkly, isn't even real. Neither is Uncle. I just used that to keep in hiding from them when I moved here. 

 

Irish: Well it looks as if they found you.

 

John Marston: Yeah because of your stupid actions Irish!

 

Uncle: Now they will do anything they can to kill me and after you got invloved today John and Irish....they will want you dead too.

 

We then see...

 

1)John decide for everyone to sleep for the night while he decides what to do.

2)John decides that they need to get rid of the Knights

3)Irish decide to leave in fear

4) Uncle suggest they should all go into hiding


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Posted 18 December 2017 - 02:40 AM

Really? No one else?

 

I wonder if this setup we got going isn't grabbing peoples attention. It has been posted for a year. Should we just start a new one or try to keep going? Or atleast reboot it?


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Posted 18 December 2017 - 03:07 AM

What do you mean start a new one? Post a new chain story so we could have a fresh start? Don't know if that would change anything much. Plsu Im sure the person who posted this wouldn't mind his topic still going if it still has potential.


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Posted 18 December 2017 - 08:51 PM

Oh my goodness! A red dead chain story! I knew about the GTA one but this is even more exciting for me.

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Posted 18 December 2017 - 09:04 PM

I don't know. I think this one kind seems dead. Post a new one. New rules, and start the storyline over again and give it a fresh start then me and you would most likley spend time writing in it. Then others could see it and get into it. Plus we seem to have just rushed in this story thin with the Knights. Don't know its up to you. 


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Posted 18 December 2017 - 09:11 PM

I mean I suppose but if its just us writing in it, and the other dude who recently just posted interest....I would just hope it doesn't get boring. Then again it be a fresh start. And maybe somehow attract interest.


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Posted 19 December 2017 - 02:40 AM

So should I reply in this one or are you gonna post a reboot? Either way I am definitly in on writing for a Red Dead Chain story. Even if its just the three of us for now.


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Posted 19 December 2017 - 02:42 AM

Might make the reboot one. Gonna think on it for now.





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