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#31

Posted 13 May 2016 - 05:45 AM

Suggestion #1:
 
Mission 0: Prologue
Objectives:
Break Out of the Prison.
Get in the getaway vehicle.
Escape the Prison.
Lose the Cops.
Drive to the Pickup Point at the Church.
Description: In 2005, Anthony and Charlie escape a Prison In Saline City (Salt Lake City). Anthony Blows up the Gate.The Duet Hit Through the Gate, but are already swarmed by the local law enforcement. 

Thanks, I'll be sure to make that the first mission soon. The only thing is in 2005, the characters would be about 10 years old, so I was thinking something like 2014.
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Posted 14 May 2016 - 08:36 PM Edited by ACCOUNTDEAD, 15 May 2016 - 03:06 PM.

Suggestion #2:

 

I have new characters!

 

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Names:

 

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#33

Posted 15 May 2016 - 09:21 AM

I have proposition!
Jack Lwowski
Age: 25
Lives in: Chirime(Chicago)
Nationality: Polish
Race: Caucasian
Status: Alive
Appearances in: Main storyline missions, Heists, Friendship activities
Appearance: Short black hair and 1" beard. Wears white T-Shirt, red shorts and sandals with white socks to knees. Slim, tall and well-built.
Family: Bailey Lwowski(wife, age: 24), Adam Lwowski(son, age: 4), Ann Lwowski(daughter, age: 4)
Missions description: Anthony first meets him at the park in Chirime(Jamal introduces Jack to Anthony). Jack has a quest for Anthony to rob small shop with him. When eventually it is harder to rob it, than it seemed, the two must use their guns to kill the guards to get out of it with the cash alive(Mission name: Robbing with Pole). After this mission, Jack becomes Anthony's friend and has a mission for Anthony to get a receiver, that is tuned to listen to Aliens. Anthony has to skydive into top secret facility near Las Venturas(something like Area 69), go stealth, or fight his way to the receiver. After one of approaches is done, Anthony must get back to Chirime with Hydra on base's airstrip(Mission name: Alien Receiver). After that, Anthony and Jack are listening to the alien speech and it is revealed, that they want to destroy USA. After this mission is done, Jack has one more mission to Anthony. Anthony with Jack, must defend USA from aliens, by using Rail guns(Mission name: Intergalactic war). After this is done, Jack appears in last mission as a supporting character.
Description: He born and raised in Poland, but he wanted to taste "American Dream" and fly to Chirime at age of 18. There, he met Bailey Sand and married her one year later. Ann and Adam were born as a twins. Jack isn't normal, because when he is angry, he can throw benches and trees.
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Posted 15 May 2016 - 10:07 AM Edited by ultraProtect21, 15 May 2016 - 11:06 AM.

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Once you read it, you'll know what to do next. Gonna be fun!

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Posted 15 May 2016 - 10:10 AM

You are a legend!

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Once you read it, you'll know what to do next. Gonna be fun!

Yo man, thats amazing! Thank you!


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Posted 15 May 2016 - 11:08 AM Edited by szymuxik, 15 May 2016 - 11:13 AM.

I have proposition for 16th mission!
Mission 16: Away From Home
Anthony has no friends in Drowe and hqs nobody to trust in. Then he gets an idea.
Mission objectives:
-Get out of home
-Go to a bar
-Buy this man a beer
-Drive him home
Rewards:
Loss of 1$(beer)
Frank as a friend
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Posted 15 May 2016 - 11:11 AM

I have proposition for 16th mission!
Mission 16: Away From Home
-Get in your car
-Defend your car
-Get on route to LV
-Get to LV
Mission Passed
Reward: Safehouse in LV
I know, that it will be hard mission, because from Chirime to LV is far.

Thanks for the suggestion, only thing is, like 1 minute ago, I updated it. I will definately add it soon, but for another mission.. Maybe to go from Detroit to LV. Thanks anyway.

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Posted 15 May 2016 - 11:14 AM Edited by szymuxik, 15 May 2016 - 11:23 AM.

Mission 20: Financial Problems
Anthony is in his room, but then, the man who's car crashed into the wall(Mark Gutentag, German) gets in it and blames Anthony for it and Anthony owes this man money. Anthony needs money.
Mission Objectives:
-Go to Mark's car
-Calculate how many money you need to repair Mark's car
-Plan a Heist
Reward:
Mark as a contact
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Posted 15 May 2016 - 11:51 AM

I've got proposition to new character
Name: Mark Gutentag
Age: 48
Lives in: Matorit
Nationality: German
Race: Caucasian
Status: Alive
Appearances in: Main storyline missions, Heists
Appearance: Short grey hair, black suit and trousers, black boots. Slim and tall.
Family: Pauline Gutentag(wife, age 47).
Description: He born and raised in richest family in Chirime, but his allergies made the family move in Matroit when he was 15. There he met Pauline Johnson. They married 8 years later. He has short temper(like Jack Lwowski) and he can destroy everybody, because he has so many contacts in US government. His car crashed into a wall, because of Anthony. He wants 20000$ to repair his car.
Notes: Yes, I based him on Martin Madrazo.
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Posted 15 May 2016 - 02:00 PM Edited by JackDA, 15 May 2016 - 07:18 PM.

oops...

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Posted 16 May 2016 - 01:51 PM Edited by szymuxik, 16 May 2016 - 03:59 PM.

Proposition for 25th, 26th and 27th mission:
Mission 25: Cold Tracking
Lester tracks down Charlie, who has been in Ludendorff, the city, that Lester knows very good, because Lester's friends performed heist there in 2004. Anthony must prepare for long journey and finally get to Ludendorff.
Mission objectives:
-Call Jamal about process of tracking down Charlie
-Get in the car
-Get to Ludendorff, North Yankton
-Get in the motel room
Rewards:
Safehouse in Ludendorff
Jacket

Mission 26: Ice Cold Friend Killa
Lester tells Anthony, that he must use Trackify to track down the exact Charlie's position. Eventually, Anthony finds Charlie at the bank, that was robbed in 2004. Anthony then gives Charlie a chase to the downtown Ludendorff with option to kill or spare him. It wouldn't affect anything, because when spared, he will accidentaly fall under a bus and die.
Mission objectives:
-Use Trackify to find Charlie
-Chase after Charlie
-Kill or spare Charlie
Rewards:
350$(Charlie's money)

Mission 27: Coming back home
Charlie ain't problem no more, so Anthony must get back to Matorit to meet up with Jamal and tell him about the situation.
Mission objectives:
-Get in the plane
-Fly to Matorit
Rewards:
Shamal(stolen to get back to Matorit)
P.S: In Anthony's description it is written, that Chris fell in depression and I think, that it shall be Anthony.

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#42

Posted 16 May 2016 - 06:12 PM

A Caribbean protagonist in Chicago ? Not really a good choice. Caribbean gangs are not really significant in Chicago, the black gangs are almost exclusively African American. You got the African character right tho, Nigerian crime syndicates are well known in Chicago.

Just be a bit more realistic with the characters going with the setting.
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Posted 16 May 2016 - 06:18 PM

A Caribbean protagonist in Chicago ? Not really a good choice. Caribbean gangs are not really significant in Chicago, the black gangs are almost exclusively African American. You got the African character right tho, Nigerian crime syndicates are well known in Chicago.

Just be a bit more realistic with the characters going with the setting.

Thank you, I will change it now.

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Posted 16 May 2016 - 06:29 PM

A Caribbean protagonist in Chicago ? Not really a good choice. Caribbean gangs are not really significant in Chicago, the black gangs are almost exclusively African American. You got the African character right tho, Nigerian crime syndicates are well known in Chicago.
Just be a bit more realistic with the characters going with the setting.

Thank you, I will change it now.

Welcome bro.

If we're talking New York City or South Florida then yeah, a Caribbean protagonist is ideal, many Caribbbean gangs in those places. Hence why we had Lil'Jacob and his Jamaican Posse in IV and the Haitian gangsin VC.

There are also a lot of Hispanic gangs in Chicago, especially Mexican-American and Puerto Rican, and the Mexican drug cartels are very active there. Russian and Polish organised crime exists in the dirty and there are still remnants of the Italian-American Mafia and Irish Mob too.

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 10:09 AM

I'd like to see an improved weapon storage system, where you use both safe houses, trunks, suitcases and backpacks to carry your weapons. Better weapon modifications would also be sweet, such as laser sights, grips and all that good stuff.

 

Then there should also be the option to play as the good guy. Maybe add, or make one of the protagonists, a cop/soldier? That means he can still hijack vehicles, but this time in name of the law, and wreaking havoc comes with a penalty. If this can't be implemented in the story mode, I'd like to see it in online, to spice things up.

 

I love the concept, especially the map, and the fact that you focus on different cultures, and that you're even considering to add minorities such as Indians or Arabs is amazing, I'll definitely be hanging around Detroit a lot! What would be awesome: the ability to interact with these groups, perhaps as an online feature. If you're character is Indian, Indian gangs might help him out when he's in a fire-fight, or something like that?

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Posted 17 May 2016 - 12:05 PM

Then there should also be the option to play as the good guy. Maybe add, or make one of the protagonists, a cop/soldier?


Best idea for GTA 6! It's kinda boring to play as a bad guy everytime and it could make the game more realistic! Or it could be like on some servers in SAMP, where you can choose a job...
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Posted 20 May 2016 - 06:27 PM

What happened? Why concept is dead?
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Posted 20 May 2016 - 07:30 PM

What happened? Why concept is dead?

Its not dead. Im taking a small break as I have some exams for school, and I just went to a funeral. It will be back, and I am not stopping until it is finished!
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Posted 20 May 2016 - 07:53 PM Edited by ultraProtect21, 20 May 2016 - 08:02 PM.

 

What happened? Why concept is dead?

Its not dead. Im taking a small break as I have some exams for school, and I just went to a funeral. It will be back, and I am not stopping until it is finished!

 

The greatest and best things are usually never noticed. Such incredible map should get atleast by hundred to thousands comments and reactions

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Posted 25 May 2016 - 01:26 PM

What happened? Why concept is dead?

Its not dead. Im taking a small break as I have some exams for school, and I just went to a funeral. It will be back, and I am not stopping until it is finished!
Oh... I made an idea: Let's just ask R* if we can use RAGE and other engines they used and some people to do graphics, music, scripting and do your concept?
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Posted 30 May 2016 - 12:00 PM

Small update to the OP, for anyone interested.

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Posted 05 June 2016 - 09:03 AM

I have a suggestion for special ability! Coming back in time, I mean: for example you are on a mission and failed to acquire 100% accuracy, so you use this ability right after fail and can kill same person with headshot. It would fill up after... I don't know... You can suggest me after what it will fill up...

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Posted 28 June 2016 - 07:02 PM

This sounds dumb and irrelevant but could you add a little bit of canada, You know like Vancouver and Toronto and Montreal. Me and Trevor are from Canada. 


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Posted 01 July 2016 - 02:24 AM Edited by jdaniel21, 01 July 2016 - 02:27 AM.

my gaming PC will die trying to render that map... the concept is cool and i want a feature that allows us to fly to one city/map at a time instead of rendering it all at once and making a giant america map. that would be so hard on our PC's and consoles


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Posted 2 weeks ago

 

how do you make a concept map? also ur map looks amazing


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Posted 2 weeks ago

 

how do you make a concept map? also ur map looks amazing
Thank you. http://gtaforums.com...apmaking/page-1
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