Nuclear Solution - The Script You Never Asked For
Posted 04 April 2016 - 02:48 PM Edited by Mokrie Dela, 04 April 2016 - 10:16 PM.
I present to you... My work.
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Logline: "The Pilot follows four friends in a hectic day as they cross paths with two different gangs and get caught in the crossfire. It all culminates in a half-improvised plan on which hinges their jobs or even their lives."
Hope you enjoy and give some feedback. It's 40 pages, should be a quick read.
Now, you may be asking why you should care.
To be honest, I don't know. This is a spec, it's not gonna get made. I made it, not to sell it (God knows I'm in no position to do that), but because I wanted to.
An amateur screenwriter who writes specs for no reason and has no real world experience and posts his work online? What kind of idiot am I? Those people are the laughing stock of the internet!
Well, it's either this or the alternative. I foresee being a manager at a McDonalds after working as sh*t there for 8 years. So, why not hope? What's the worst that can happen?
Really hope you (Anyone) enjoy this and give me some feedback.
It helps with my ego.
Posted 04 April 2016 - 03:02 PM
Sup mate, will read and give you some feedback later. Later as in...a few years. Probably not, just kidding, But I will, given time.
Posted 04 April 2016 - 03:24 PM
You know what, it took sixteen minutes. A little bit of the action was somewhat unrealistic, but I enjoyed it. Would watch if someone made a short film out of this.
Posted 04 April 2016 - 03:30 PM
Glad you enjoyed at least one part of the first half.
If you've still got time, or can get a second sitting out of it, I can almost guarantee you'll enjoy the ending.
Posted 04 April 2016 - 10:15 PM
I apologise if I didn't make that clear
Posted 05 April 2016 - 02:47 AM
Well, so much for that. It's probably gonna take like 2 hours of f*cking around to get the format right.
At least I got half of a review before being slapped back into my place.
Posted 05 April 2016 - 09:34 AM
It's easier on you, and on the reader. Don't take any offence though man, it's just you can't link to your outside work (I.e. Advertising/promoting), but for your work to physically be posted on the forums. You can link to such websites in your signature though.
Again, sorry if I didn't make that clear in our PMs. No harm done
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