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Posted 25 August 2014 - 08:40 PM Edited by gammoudicj, 4 weeks ago.

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"It’s the year of making the dreams come true, it’s the time to get on the top of everything. It's time to live a crime life with dangerous choices and decisions. It's time to make your own power and control everything.

This Storyline will take places in the same time of the standard game.

Let’s get down to business, gentlemen."

 

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San Fierro 1992,

Diego Rodrigo, a young criminal and a talented thug wanted to make himself a great life

He always wanted to rule his own set, run a gang, get reputation on the streets but never did.

Along with his childhood friends, Diego had only one dream, becoming rich.

His brother, Jose is trying to make him get on his feet, by teaching him how to build up his own respect.

“Play a dangerous life with Diego Rodrigo, have crossovers with the original game, kill or be killed, a gta style storyline, no doubt baby”.

 

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Diego Rodrigo:

A young Mexican thug from San Fierro Rifa set, a pro’ in fighting, a skilled hit man, an ice cold killer and a cold person.

He always wanted to make a life for himself, get away from the pooness, until one day his brother wanted to test his skills, now Diego will be facing troubles, running a whole gang himself, killing and robbing…

 

Jose Rodrigo:

A Rifa O.G, a real high ranking member. Everybody respect him, he has connections with T Bone Mendez, The Loco Syndicate, Cornales. He's a killer too. He's a rich guy, he has everything he ever wanted. Now, Jose wants to make his brother Diego follow his steps and build up his own reputation.

 

Ernesto Tubercio:

Diego’s best friend, also a young gangster and criminal. He’s a member of San Fierro rifa.

Ernesto’s not like the other representers of the set. He always looking for deals, breaking meeting and getting money. He’s not a killing machine like Diego or Alberto but when his amigos need him, he’ll be ready.

 

Alberto Mendez:

 

Cornales Lopez:

 

Ricardo Martinez:

 

Alexandra "Alex" Mendez:

 

T-Bone Mendez:

 

Mike Toreno:

 

Jizzy B:

 

Secondary Characters:

Claude:

 

Catalina Vialpando:

 

Cesar Vialpando:

 

More characters and info coming soon...

 

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Green means finished

Orange means WIP

Red means not started yet

 

Chapter #1: Big start

Main missions:

Intro

illegal situation

Into rifa more

Night business

Wrong place

A big fish

Vialpando's price

Burry the hatchet

Meet swim and run

The exchange

Big time

Outro

Side missions:

Bullet in the head

The fastest boat

Funeral interuption

RAMPAGE

War under the freeway

Fight fight fight

 

Review:

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Chapter #2: Stand up and control

Intro

 

The Rodirgo Cartel missions:

No pay eh?

Bigger and bigger

Underwater

Factory and hit

Business protection

Supplie Lines

Ancelotti fall

One and for all

Southside Vatos

Jose's missions:

Hotel madness

Van problems

Secret meeting

The Loco Syndiacte:

Highjack

Smooth play

Bombing da' base

Quick delivery

Cornales missions:

San Fierro Bikes

A big opportunity

Freeway speed

The bank job

Jason's missions:

Law or crime?

Side missions:

Gang war

Small heist

The hit

Biker season

Fight in the night

 

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Done

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coming soon...

 

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Walkthrough:

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*Topic is still under progress

*The missions are not to hard or too easy, try to use pickups in game.

*Don't forget to give feedback :D

 

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GammoudiCJ for making the missions, topic, storyline, screenshots...

Dyom 123 for making the logo and headers

You for playing

Revolver1 for the review.

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Coming soon... when I publish ch #1


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Posted 25 August 2014 - 09:02 PM

it looks nice. 
 
I just have one thing to tell you:
 
Good luck !
 
I will test when you publish your missions.  :lol:

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Posted 25 August 2014 - 09:26 PM

 

it looks nice. 
 
I just have one thing to tell you:
 
Good luck !
 
I will test when you publish your missions.  :lol:

 

Thank you for your feedback mate, stay tuned. Probably, this will be availebale this weekend or less.


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 05:46 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 26 August 2014 - 05:50 AM.

Oh, fantastic logo and headers looks so interesting MP Good luck! with this :)

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 09:00 AM

One thing i don't like are the headers:

Why do you have to use the text with a GTA V/GTA IV background? This is neither of those games.


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 09:07 AM Edited by gammoudicj, 26 August 2014 - 09:12 AM.

One thing i don't like are the headers:

Why do you have to use the text with a GTA V/GTA IV background? This is neither of those games.

I didn't create those headers, I think it's some luck. Dyom 123 made them for me, I just told him to make a few headers that fit the Rifa gang.

I'll try to finish the Side missions today.

@Huzaifa khan: Thank you dude :D

EDIT; New logo added.

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Posted 26 August 2014 - 09:14 AM

 

One thing i don't like are the headers:

Why do you have to use the text with a GTA V/GTA IV background? This is neither of those games.

I didn't create those headers, I think it's some luck. Dyom 123 made them for me, I just told him to make a few headers that fit the Rifa gang.

I'll try to finish the Side missions today.

@Huzaifa khan: Thank you dude :D

EDIT; New logo added.

 

Oh well, doesn't matter. Story sounds nice, can't wait to play this!


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 11:02 AM

One thing i don't like are the headers:

Neither did i, everytime i saw headers with some of GTA V background, i feels like... dunno why... but i can't said it. In my opinion, you may need to tell Dyom 123 to remove the background and leave just the font text, surely it'll be looks better.

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Anyway about storyline, of course i'll play it since the story would be nice just like your old great MP which ever interest me.

:)


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 11:04 AM

 

One thing i don't like are the headers:

Neither did i, everytime i saw headers with some of GTA V background, i feels like... dunno why... but i can't said it. In my opinion, you may need to tell Dyom 123 to remove the background and leave just the font text, surely it'll be looks better.

Spoiler

Anyway about storyline, of course i'll play it since the story would be nice just like your old great MP which ever interest me.

:)

 

Thank your your feedback ProDX34, I'll change the headers ASAP. BTW, I'll upload few pics today.


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 11:29 AM

Great one! I'll definitely try it out when you release it :D 

Anyway, i'll change the headers later today.


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 04:30 PM

Wow, this seem's to be epic! Can't wait for you to relase it. I'll definetly play it. Nice job with the characters description's and with the images. Looking forward to this.


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Posted 26 August 2014 - 06:42 PM

Great one! I'll definitely try it out when you release it :D

Anyway, i'll change the headers later today.

 

Wow, this seem's to be epic! Can't wait for you to relase it. I'll definetly play it. Nice job with the characters description's and with the images. Looking forward to this.

Thank you, both of ya. Anyway, progress updated. 2 more side missions added to the list.


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Posted 29 August 2014 - 04:56 PM Edited by gammoudicj, 02 September 2014 - 12:03 PM.

Progress updated, only few missions are left. The Rodrigo Cartel: Chapter #1 will be published this weekend or Thursday. Stay tuned :^:


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Posted 30 August 2014 - 05:29 PM Edited by gammoudicj, 02 September 2014 - 12:03 PM.

Finally! The last mission is finished! Exept The Rodrigo Cartel tommorow or Monday!


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Posted 30 August 2014 - 06:15 PM

Finally! The last mission is finished! Exept The Rodrigo Cartel tommorow or Monday!

That's really nice, i hope you could released it tomorrow so that i can play it asap, i'll busy as hell in Monday.


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Posted 30 August 2014 - 06:18 PM

 

Finally! The last mission is finished! Exept The Rodrigo Cartel tommorow or Monday!

That's really nice, i hope you could released it tomorrow so that i can play it asap, i'll busy as hell in Monday.

 

I can release it tommorow but without correcting the grammatical mistakes, also the mission "rampage" won't be availebale.


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Posted 02 September 2014 - 12:01 PM Edited by gammoudicj, 17 hours ago.

Expect Chapter #1 in two or three hours.


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Posted 02 September 2014 - 12:39 PM Edited by Revolver1, 02 September 2014 - 12:45 PM.

Nice, I bet it'll be cool.
It's "expect" by the way, not "exept", and except. I think you got "except" and "expect" confused, therefore you use "exept".
I'm not a grammar nazi, just trying to fix some things for ya.
P.S: It's "thought", not "tought". you wrote this word wrong a lot in TCoAH, I forgot to mention in my review.

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Posted 02 September 2014 - 04:22 PM

Nice, I bet it'll be cool.
It's "expect" by the way, not "exept", and except. I think you got "except" and "expect" confused, therefore you use "exept".
I'm not a grammar nazi, just trying to fix some things for ya.
P.S: It's "thought", not "tought". you wrote this word wrong a lot in TCoAH, I forgot to mention in my review.

I realised about my "thought" fault when I was making the last missions of The Rodrigo Cartel.

Anyways, this is an unexpected new

I'm sorry guys, The Rodrigo Cartel is cancelled and wont be published.

I made a mistake and I lost all the mission files, I apolgize. I know many of you waited for it but damn...

Also, I'm leaving DYOM. This made my day so goodbye... I realy enjoyed my time here

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Also, recomended to everybody to see this spolier

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Posted 02 September 2014 - 05:53 PM Edited by Chevy Wolfs, 03 September 2014 - 05:12 PM.

 

Nice, I bet it'll be cool.
It's "expect" by the way, not "exept", and except. I think you got "except" and "expect" confused, therefore you use "exept".
I'm not a grammar nazi, just trying to fix some things for ya.
P.S: It's "thought", not "tought". you wrote this word wrong a lot in TCoAH, I forgot to mention in my review.

I realised about my "thought" fault when I was making the last missions of The Rodrigo Cartel.

Anyways, this is an unexpected new

I'm sorry guys, The Rodrigo Cartel is cancelled and wont be published.

I made a mistake and I lost all the mission files, I apolgize. I know many of you waited for it but damn...

Also, I'm leaving DYOM. This made my day so goodbye... I realy enjoyed my time here

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Also, recomended to everybody to see this spolier

Spoiler

 

You darn... Oh, dang it! I only got two word's... nice one. xD Good one tho, man! At first, I felt sorry for your ass, because I know that feeling, but... Eh. I'll be sure to post some feedback. 


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Posted 03 September 2014 - 11:09 AM

No feedback yet? C'mon guys, I wanna know if this is good or bad. Somebody post his opinion. There is nopoint of continuing this if nobody's gonna plau it.


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 07:59 AM

No feedback yet? C'mon guys, I wanna know if this is good or bad. Somebody post his opinion. There is nopoint of continuing this if nobody's gonna plau it.

Dude, just chill out. Remember this, Rome wasn't built in a day. Your MP will become great one day. Until then, PUSH ON!


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 08:16 AM

 

No feedback yet? C'mon guys, I wanna know if this is good or bad. Somebody post his opinion. There is nopoint of continuing this if nobody's gonna plau it.

Dude, just chill out. Remember this, Rome wasn't built in a day. Your MP will become great one day. Until then, PUSH ON!

 

I'm pushing on already. Therefore, progress on chapter #2 already started. Intro and first mission are done. I hope that I'd finish this before school :/


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 01:51 PM Edited by Dyom 123, 04 September 2014 - 01:54 PM.

Just finished playing chapter #1!

TBH, this SL contains some of the most intense shootouts and gunfights I've ever seen! It's GREAT, AMAZING!!

I'd give you as a rating 9.2/10.

Why? First of all, the thing that's noticed by everyone who plays your missions is these three words "tought", "exept" and "witch". You're always writing them like that. Second, shootouts are so overused, every mission is about killing or shooting somebody (apart that mission "Viaplando's price". Third, some designing mistakes like unhidden actors and cutscene issues but they can be barely noticed. Fourth, the hard missions, the most one that's I've retried it is "Big time". My allies keep dying and I keep losing. I retried it like 10-12 times! Seriously man, make them easier next time.

Apart from those thing I've mentioned above, everything's cool. keep it up :)

9.2/10 ain't a bad rating, right?


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 01:56 PM

@Dyom 1123: Thanks for your feedback and great rating dude , I'll try to fix those mistakes ASAP.

At last, someone played the Storyline, a Bug Fix version will be out soon.


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 02:25 PM

@Dyom 1123: Thanks for your feedback and great rating dude , I'll try to fix those mistakes ASAP.

At last, someone played the Storyline, a Bug Fix version will be out soon.

Maybe I should wait for the bugfix version. 


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 02:35 PM

 

@Dyom 1123: Thanks for your feedback and great rating dude , I'll try to fix those mistakes ASAP.

At last, someone played the Storyline, a Bug Fix version will be out soon.

Maybe I should wait for the bugfix version. 

 

Nah, just go ahead and give chapter 1 a shot. There ain't much bugs, no crashes. Just a few mistakes would never affect the quality of the gameplay.


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 02:36 PM Edited by Revolver1, 04 September 2014 - 02:37 PM.

 

 

@Dyom 1123: Thanks for your feedback and great rating dude , I'll try to fix those mistakes ASAP.

At last, someone played the Storyline, a Bug Fix version will be out soon.

Maybe I should wait for the bugfix version. 

 

Nah, just go ahead and give chapter 1 a shot. There ain't much bugs, no crashes. Just a few mistakes would never affect the quality of the gameplay.

 

Okay... If you say so.

@Gammou: Put chapter 1's link on the first post. People might not notice your later posts.


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 02:37 PM Edited by gammoudicj, 04 September 2014 - 02:38 PM.

 

@Dyom 1123: Thanks for your feedback and great rating dude , I'll try to fix those mistakes ASAP.

At last, someone played the Storyline, a Bug Fix version will be out soon.

Maybe I should wait for the bugfix version. 

 

I think you should play this version first. The bugfix version may take a while to be finished. This DYOMtemp bug is getting on my nerves. Everytime I use it, it f*cks the dialogs and objectives of the mission up, no wonder you can find stupid mistakes such as "tought" instead of "thought".

@Dyom 123: BTW, I never used "exept" in missions.


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Posted 04 September 2014 - 02:39 PM

@Dyom 123: BTW, I never used "exept" in missions.

It's my bad then, anyway, I just noticed you. :)





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