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The Ballad of Murphy [MP]

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Elyobo893
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Posted 04 August 2014 - 09:40 AM Edited by Elyobo893, 09 August 2014 - 05:29 PM.

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An original GTA mission pack, The Ballad of Murphy follows Murphy Boyle a Bayside two-bit hood trying to go three-bit. Follow Murphy as he deals with condescending bosses, local thugs and sociopaths as he climbs the criminal ladder.

 

Missions

#1: Welcome to Bayside; http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33452

#2: Marky's Day Out: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33462

#3: Down to Business: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33469

#4:Murphy's Law: Coming Soon

 

 

Characters

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Murphy Boyle

Bayside hood with aspirations of grandeur. Short-tempered but loyal. Hopes to leave Bayside and pursue a successful criminal life in San Fierro

 

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Barry Mendoza

Head of the Mendoza Crime Family. Successful Bayside gangster. Condescending to Murphy

 

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Marky Mendoza

Barry's little cousin. New in town. Sponges off others. Reckless, unappreciative and generally unlikeable

 

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Mr. K

Notorious San Fierro gangster. Not to be crossed.

 

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Louie Garrett

Bayside hood. Good friends with Murphy. Under-utilized and under-appreciated by Mendoza.


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Posted 04 August 2014 - 12:13 PM

Primary Character list now up!!


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Posted 04 August 2014 - 02:03 PM

Nice topic :cookie: :cookie:

 

I'll play this ASAP and leave some feedback


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Posted 04 August 2014 - 02:44 PM

A story in Bayside? Great!


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Posted 04 August 2014 - 05:08 PM

Excellent English mate, haven't seen that in a newbie for a while. Blow my mind with this, good luck.
Oh yea btw, I think you should play some missions first to get the hang of DYOM. And, I'll always available for help, if you need anything.
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Posted 04 August 2014 - 06:07 PM

Excellent English mate, haven't seen that in a newbie for a while. Blow my mind with this, good luck.
Oh yea btw, I think you should play some missions first to get the hang of DYOM. And, I'll always available for help, if you need anything.

Well I am a 21 year old native English speaker :3 Thanks mate and I have been messing around with DYOM a bit so I have a better understanding of it. I've played a good few other missions but I find that the cutscenes are too long even though the missions are great.


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Posted 04 August 2014 - 07:31 PM

Excellent mission bro, liked your mission, waiting for next one good luck :^: :)
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Posted 04 August 2014 - 11:58 PM Edited by Elyobo893, 04 August 2014 - 11:58 PM.

Thanks for the support guys. Mission #2 is out and can be downloaded at http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33462


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Posted 05 August 2014 - 07:28 PM

Hey guys. Mission #3 "Down to Business" is out and can be downloaded at http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33469


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Posted 07 August 2014 - 04:10 PM

Alright, just played, and I have something to tell ya.

1. You should really add some color to character's names, use Ctrl + (first letter of the color), for example blue, then Ctrl + B

2. I actually kinda like the style of your mission. In other MPs, gang leaders are usually the one bossy and sh*t, and the main character is usually shy, polite. But in your mission, It actually kinda shows that Murphy somewhat hates to be a mobster, who hates his bosses and his jobs and such, and always talks sh*t behind their back. As I know, every mobster does. But the special thing is, his boss was a nice guy, but Murphy still hates him, which makes him kind of a dick, which portraits more "gangster" feeling in Murphy. Other MPs (the ones I've played so far) just don't give me this feelings, ya know?

3. If you are planting charges, put a Dymite object where you plant them, it looks cooler. Also, you should put some objects in the shootout location, gives more of a "chaos" feelings and such, if you know what I mean.


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Posted 07 August 2014 - 05:48 PM

@Revolver thanks man its great to get some constructive criticism. Yeah Murphy is an impatient dick. A shy polite protagonist doesn't make sense in a crime game. All criminals are scumbags at the end of the day.

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Posted 09 August 2014 - 05:28 PM

Hey guys. Missions will take longer to make as I'm busy with personal stuff and I'm taking more time making my missions longer and better. So here's a screenshot of Mission #4: Murphy's Law which will be out very soon! :D

 

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