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#1

Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:24 PM

just looking at ideas for things you think would look good, also what colors you think would look good

 

let me know!

 

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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:26 PM

No offense but it looks like a 12 years old crew of ghetto gangsters. Make it more simple, don't fill the space with random layers.

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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:28 PM

no offence taken, im not a very artistic person 

 

i just liked the concept of making LoA out of weapons but I'm smart enough to know when i need help haha


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:33 PM Edited by CenMan, 16 July 2014 - 05:34 PM.

Firstly, don't use a black background. Use the transparent background so that your crew emblem doesn't appear as a black square with stuff on it in-game if you know what I mean.

 

Secondly, the flame coming out of the gun doesn't look like muzzle flash. You could try making it better but I'd leave it out altogether.

 

Thirdly, I assume from your name it's supposed to say "LoA", that's not really clear. You would have to at least make the skull the same size as the other items, and I would  make letters with the items in them, rather than simply using the items as letters.

 

edit: I would also make the gun straight rather than at an angle because it would make it more clear that it's supposed to represent a letter.


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:36 PM

i have the tranparent background

 

and its supposed to be LoA

 

i'll try everything else you said


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:41 PM Edited by Mathew4296, 16 July 2014 - 05:42 PM.

Don't just use random weapons and such. Really put some time and effort into it. Don't skimp out on stuff. Make use of the multiple layers. My display image is something I created in the Emblem creator. Took me a while before I came up with and finished it. It'll be worth it when you have an impressive emblem to show off. The one you posted in your OP does look like something a 12 year old would make, and you want to avoid that.

 

EDIT: I want to add, don't overload it with stuff either. Try and keep it simple, but complex at the same time if you get my drift.


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:46 PM

again im really sh*tty with artistic stuff so general info doesnt help me too much aha


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 05:59 PM

again im really sh*tty with artistic stuff so general info doesnt help me too much aha

I'm not all that artistic myself. It might help if you have something else to take some inspiration from. That's what I did. You don't want to copy it though, just have it give you somewhat of an idea. My emblem turned out quite different to what my inspiration looks like. It is slightly similar, but quite different at the same time. You don't have to do it in one sitting. Just work on it for a bit, leave it then come back to it and edit it again until you like it.


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 06:15 PM Edited by LoA-Phantom, 16 July 2014 - 06:54 PM.

its getting slightly better i think 


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 06:18 PM

If you're set on the "LoA" theme there's not much I can say to help you.

 

IMO, your current graphic has too much going on, and lacks symmetry. I used to do the same thing when I first started my crew. I had an elephant with some ninjas in the background LOL it was pretty lame.

 

I prefer something simple as an emblem, my current one is The Hundreds "atom bomb", looks pretty sweet on my slammed rides. Had to get that through the SVG 'glitch' , idk if you can still do that.

 

I can never make something I'm happy with through the creator, kind of lame tool imo.

 

But if you like what you got currently, just stick with it man. Just my 2 cents


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 06:22 PM Edited by LoA-Phantom, 16 July 2014 - 06:24 PM.

My actual loa logo is sick but I can't get the abg glitch working, I have to use the creator and yeah def sticking with the loa theme

I like the concept but my execution is poor, that's why I need all the help I can get lol

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Posted 16 July 2014 - 06:48 PM

I can't help you much, but a tip: Try, and learn lol

 

I'm just gonna leave some of my Emblems here for possible inspiration:

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a7c84218814d23b372f730768519e358ac77f0c4One of my favorites

Do something like that and expect the skull (like seen above) but your LoA or something :)

Good Luck


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Posted 16 July 2014 - 06:55 PM

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settled on this for now, looks a bit better but i still have alot to do i think


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Posted 17 July 2014 - 02:20 AM

Moved to visual arts


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 05:28 PM

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this is what i ended up with for now, any other suggestions?


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Posted 19 July 2014 - 02:14 PM

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this is what i ended up with for now, any other suggestions?

 

Unless  I knew the crew was "LOA" , I'd think it was just called LA from the emblem. The skull is too small





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