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Posted 07 July 2014 - 07:00 PM Edited by Blues2030, 25 July 2014 - 04:31 PM.

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My name is James Brown, all people usually call me James. I was born in Jefferson, Los Santos. I have a thug's life. My mom's died because of shootout of the gang when war each other. At that time my mom's was bleeding arround his body with some bullets that attached arround her stomatch. I saw her when she's laying on the ground near the street and the pedestrian who watching the incedent is trying to help. Immeadiatly, I pick her up and I took her to nearest hospital. But sadly, my mom's died due to hard bleeding.


My father is a formal cheif of San Andreas Police Departement. He's left after my mom's died. He's teaching me everything about shooting skill, driving skill, and map knownledge arround San Andreas. After that I decided to join an army to protect and serve from the enemies, including the gang who killed my mom's and other. From now on, I promise I will defend my country by the milltary and justice.


 

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James Brown
The main character in the story. He lives in Los Santos and he has a great ambition to be a soldier. He want to serve his country and revenge to the gangs who killed his mom.

Ansley Hernandes
The one who served as Lieutnant in SAAF. He joined SAAF since 5 years ago. He's good guy, friendly when off duty, and polite also he never break any rules. He's a good shooter with Sniper.

Duncan Sheik
He's a sergeant in SAAF. He lives in Montgomery and joined SAAF since 2 years ago. He got Sergeant when he was joined in SAAF. he's very discipline, never break any rules. Also, he's a good shooter and good leader.

 

Jack Williams
He's the first friend that James had when the first time joined in SAAF and become best friends afterwards. He's loyal, respectful, good shooter, and discipline. He's really good in MP5 and M4.

 

Leandro Harano
He's the leader of Delta team and he's a Sergeant. He's very respectful person, disciplne, and also good shooter with M4. Leandro and James will become a good friend soon.
 

More coming soon.

 

*Note: The photo of each character will be added soon.

 

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General Of the Army - [Gen]

 

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Lieutnant General - [Lt.Gen]

 

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Colonel - [Col]

 

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Major - [Mj]

 

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Captain - [Cpt]

 

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Lieutnant - [Lt]

Ansley Hernandes

 

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Sergeant - [Sgt]

Duncan Sheik

Leandro Harano

 

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Corporal - [Cpl]

 

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Private - [Pvt]

 

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Under Training/Trainee - [T]

James Brown

Jack Williams

 

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CHAPTER 1 ― The Beginning
 
San Andreas Armed Forces - Introduction Click here.
San Andreas Armed Forces - Coronation day Click here
San Andreas Armed Forces - First Training (Part 1) Click here

San Andreas Armed Forces - First Training (Part 2) Click here
 

CHAPTER 2 ― Main Mission

 

San Andreas Armed Forces - The Final Result  Click here

San Andreas Armed Forces - Bad Compeny  Coming soon.

San Andreas Armed Forces - Bank's Robbery  Coming soon.

San Andreas Armed Forces - Back up  Coming soon.

San Andreas Armed Forces - FC Under Attack Coming soon.

San Andreas Armed Forces - Rescue  Coming soon.

San Andreas Armed Forces - The Raid  Coming soon.

 

 CHAPTER 3 ― San Andreas Tragedy

 

San Andreas Armed Forces - Triads Coming soon.

 

Coming soon.


 

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Coming soon.

 

 

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Sorry for my bad English. If you see any bug, error, crashes when playing, etc. just comment below and then I will fix it asap, and If you like my mission, feel free to rate and comment.

 

Thank you.


This topic is currently under the construction.

 

 

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Posted 07 July 2014 - 07:21 PM

Wow! Emotional
Story makes me jolly to play the mission i will try it ASAP
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Posted 07 July 2014 - 07:29 PM

Wow! Looks interesting story should play your missions and give you my feedback :)

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Posted 07 July 2014 - 08:53 PM

Wow! Emotional
Story makes me jolly to play the mission i will try it ASAP
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Wow! Looks interesting story should play your missions and give you my feedback :)


Thank you, I will wait for your feedback. :D

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Posted 08 July 2014 - 07:44 AM

I played the introduction. It was alright. The camera angles were amazing, also the movement of the camera between cutscenes made it look like a movie. Keep up the good work. I also took a few screenshots. I'll take more as you upload missions.

 

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Posted 08 July 2014 - 08:00 AM

Played the introduction, the mission and the cutscene angle were good designed, seems the story would be promising and looks emotional, keep up the good work pal. I'll look forward for your next mission.  :^:

 

@RamiV2, Nice lensflare.


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Posted 08 July 2014 - 09:44 AM

Going to try it ASAP.


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Posted 08 July 2014 - 12:28 PM

@ProDX34, Thank you so much, glad you like it. :santa:

 

@RamiV2, Thank you so much for your screenshots, I really appreciate it. I will add them soon. :D


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Posted 08 July 2014 - 01:44 PM

Would be good if you make Trailer ASAP :)


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Posted 08 July 2014 - 01:53 PM

Would be good if you make Trailer ASAP :)


I will.

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Posted 09 July 2014 - 03:27 PM Edited by Blues2030, 09 July 2014 - 03:32 PM.

New Update!
 
San Andreas Armed Forces - Coronation day is now released!
Download here.

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Posted 10 July 2014 - 08:31 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 10 July 2014 - 08:54 AM.

Wow! wow! what a intro and a first mission just awesome I say every cutsene is perfect and I'm sure this MP is very fantastic :^: looking forward for next mission :)

Keep up mate! 5/5
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Posted 10 July 2014 - 03:07 PM

Wow! wow! what a intro and a first mission just awesome I say every cutsene is perfect and I'm sure this MP is very fantastic :^: looking forward for next mission :)

Keep up mate! 5/5

 

Thanks mate, I really appreciate it for your rating to me. :lol:


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Posted 11 July 2014 - 03:38 PM

New Update!
 
San Andreas Armed Forces - First Training (Part 1) is now released!
Download here.

 

Note: I'm sorry, there is a little mistake in the mission. I suggest when you do the shooting test, especially in "Moving object", try to shoot on the head to get more damage. If you late, the mission will stucked and you need to restart the mission


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Posted 12 July 2014 - 03:37 AM Edited by Rachmad_Harkov, 12 July 2014 - 01:12 PM.

WOW! amazing, im dead when shooting by moving object shooter ;D but, still FUN :3


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Posted 12 July 2014 - 09:30 PM Edited by Blues2030, 12 July 2014 - 09:32 PM.

WOW! amazing, im dead when shooting by moving object shooter ;D but, still FUN :3

Ikr, It's kinda hard in that test, Anyways thank you very much. Stay tuned other mission will coming soon. :evilgrin:

 

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Posted 18 July 2014 - 09:23 AM Edited by Blues2030, 18 July 2014 - 09:47 AM.

New Update!

 

San Andreas Armed Forces - First training (Part 2) is now released!

download here.

 

The final mission of the chapter one has been released! Hope you like it. Feel free to give your rate and feedback to me.

 

Chapter 2 's mission is coming.

 

P.S: Sorry for waiting, I'm so lazy as fu*k to continue this mission.


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 11:07 AM

Played all chapter 1:

What can i say? Nothing was wrong, everything was perfect.

You're really a good designer, keep up the good work!


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 03:21 PM

ill play it... 


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 03:52 PM

Looks Very Great I Will Try This Today :)


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Posted 18 July 2014 - 06:06 PM

Played all chapter 1:

What can i say? Nothing was wrong, everything was perfect.

You're really a good designer, keep up the good work!

 

Thank you, Juice. I really appeciated it. Stay tuned, other mission will coming soon. :)


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Posted 19 July 2014 - 08:20 PM

Except a feedback for your chapter 1 in 5 or 6 days :)

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Posted 22 July 2014 - 10:24 PM Edited by Blues2030, 22 July 2014 - 11:01 PM.

2 new mission is coming soon. My target is, I will publish it in the next 2 or 3 days because laziness make this happen.  :blink:


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Posted 24 July 2014 - 02:33 AM

New Update!

 

San Andreas Armed Forces - The final result is now released!

download here.

 

Note: The next mission is on progress, I will publish it as soon as possible.


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Posted 27 July 2014 - 04:30 PM

Just for remind, maybe I'll pause this mission for a while due to work for my new project. Also, when I'm back to continue this series, I'll publish a lot of missions. which means, I will publsih the missions in a large of ammount.


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Posted 29 July 2014 - 06:01 AM

Great missions, Blues2030! Keep it coming..


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Posted 01 August 2014 - 09:38 AM

I don't like it, bad grammar, no realism, it just doesn't work out reall well for me. The Grammar isn't that much of a bad of a factor, but an unrealistic, childish army setting, I don't like that.

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Posted 01 August 2014 - 10:45 AM

 

I don't like it, bad grammar, no realism, it just doesn't work out reall well for me. The Grammar isn't that much of a bad of a factor, but an unrealistic, childish army setting, I don't like that.

 

Okay then, Thanks for your feedback. I know my english sucks because I'm indonesian and I'm still learning to make my mission be better in the future.

Thanks anyway.


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Posted 01 August 2014 - 12:16 PM

No, really, I mean, it's like everybody is calling everyone Sir, which is actually wrong. You only call higher ranked soldiers sir. And soldiers don't have their own rooms like in a hotel, but they all live in barracks with bulk beds next to each other. I think you got this idea from a ranger story, didn't ya? Plus, you shouldn't say: Join an army, but the army. There aren't multiple armies in the US, just one. And the recruiting process starts with an interview at an army office, then training. If you finish training, you're enlisted. And when you do, you get your first task.

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Posted 01 August 2014 - 04:05 PM Edited by Blues2030, 01 August 2014 - 04:07 PM.

No, really, I mean, it's like everybody is calling everyone Sir, which is actually wrong. You only call higher ranked soldiers sir. And soldiers don't have their own rooms like in a hotel, but they all live in barracks with bulk beds next to each other. I think you got this idea from a ranger story, didn't ya? Plus, you shouldn't say: Join an army, but the army. There aren't multiple armies in the US, just one. And the recruiting process starts with an interview at an army office, then training. If you finish training, you're enlisted. And when you do, you get your first task.

 

Dude, this is a game. I can't make the mission precisely like in reality life and if it possible, It will take much time to make it. Also, DYOM has limited the feature. Which means, I can't make an actor more than 100. I just make it simple so people can play it and enjoy the whole story.





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