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AdamArtz
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Posted 4 weeks ago Edited by AdamArtz, 2 weeks ago.

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I would like to present Fear From God, my new MP...

 

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After a tragic event in 1996 on Grove Street, Michael gets sent to his aunt who lives in San Fierro. A few years later, Michael becomes a very successful cop. His best friend from his rough childhood, Brandon, becomes a drug dealer.

 

Theme song:

 

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Michael Swan - Main protagonist

Status: Alive

Sent to San Fierro after he lied to his mother.

Turned into a very successful cop.

 

Brandon Foster - Secondary protagonist

Status: Alive

Michael's childhood friend. After what happened in 1996, Michael no longer talks to him. He tries to contact Michael and leaves him a couple of messages but no answer.

Turned into a drug dealer.

 

Nina Swan - Antagonist/Protagonist

Status: Dead

Michael's mom. She sents him to his aunt in San Fierro after she told him to stop hanging around with Brandon, but eventually, she decides to sent him to San Fierro.

 

Nancy Peterson - Minor protagonist

Status: Alive

Michael's secretary.

 

Travis Ellison - Minor antagonist

Status: Alive

Arrests Brandon in the Prologue.

 

Michael's aunt - Minor protagonist

Status: Alive

Michael was sent to his aunt's house in 1996 by orders from his mother.

 

Bridget Swan - Protagonist

Status: Alive

Michael's wife. It is implied that Michael got married before he became a cop.

 

Unnamed Cop/Agent - Main antagonist

Status: Alive

Boss of Brandon.

 

Shawn - Minor protagonist

Status: Alive

 

Cory - Minor antagonist

Status: Alive

 

Gerry - Antagonist

Status: Alive

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Chapter 1 - A New Life - Full Download: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33032

Prologue - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32823

Welcome to San Fierro - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32852

Michael's Wife - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32866

I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 1 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32888

I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 2 - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32937

Actions Speak Louder Than Words - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32981

Tormented - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33029

Fire In The City - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33030

 

Chapter 2 - Wastelands

Rebellion -

When They Come For Me -

These Colours Don't Run -

Wastelands of Today -

Ammosick -

A Lot Like Venturas -

  Seen It All Before -

Deathbeds -

 

Chapter 3 - It Never Ends

Go to Hell, for Heaven's Sake -

Dead March -

The Devil's Plan -

March to War -

The Devil Is Near -

A Portrait for the Deceased -

Something to Fear -

Letters -

 

Chapter 4 - Evolving

Undying -

Revolve - 

Redeem -

Return Of Brandon -

Shawn Has A Plan -

Time to Escape -

A Beautiful Lie -

Final Masquerade -

 

Credits:

HUGE credit to GunWrath for making the logo & the headers!!!


Dyom 123
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#2

Posted 4 weeks ago

New MP! dyom is back in action. I really liked the logo and the headers. gonna give it a try later  :lol:

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Posted 4 weeks ago

New MP! dyom is back in action. I really liked the logo and the headers. gonna give it a try later  :lol:

Thanks (: The user who created those is really awesome. 


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Posted 4 weeks ago

Oh, this looks like it could turn out like a good detective story, like Cold Year. I really hope this will live up to my expectations. Will play The Prologue and will give ya feedback.

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Posted 4 weeks ago

Great new MP should play your mission btw cool logos and headers :)
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Posted 4 weeks ago Edited by AdamArtz, 4 weeks ago.

Great new MP should play your mission btw cool logos and headers :)

Thanks Huzaifa

 

Oh, this looks like it could turn out like a good detective story, like Cold Year. I really hope this will live up to my expectations. Will play The Prologue and will give ya feedback.

To clear this up this is half detective half criminal POV. All events lead up to the finale. Plus it's more of a drama-psychological thriller-mystery story.


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Posted 4 weeks ago

Wow, it's cool, I played it and it seems to be a really promising mission pack, also I really catched the story, it's awesome. But it isn't good that you tell a part of the story in the topic, I saw that you wrote that his best friend kills her mother and then becomes a drug dealer. It isn't wrong but it would be awesome that you can't predict the story and become shocked when that happens in the MP


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Posted 4 weeks ago

Wow, it's cool, I played it and it seems to be a really promising mission pack, also I really catched the story, it's awesome. But it isn't good that you tell a part of the story in the topic, I saw that you wrote that his best friend kills her mother and then becomes a drug dealer. It isn't wrong but it would be awesome that you can't predict the story and become shocked when that happens in the MP

Thanks for the tip. I changed it.

The second mission "Welcome to San Fierro" is unleashed. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32852

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Posted 4 weeks ago

Mission 3 "Michael's Wife" is out. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32866


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Posted 3 weeks ago

Awesome, seems promising!  :lol: I'll play the MP and make a detailed review once the first chapter is out. Lemme just grab the prologue mission for a sneek peek. ;)

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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by AdamArtz, 3 weeks ago.

Awesome, seems promising!  :lol: I'll play the MP and make a detailed review once the first chapter is out. Lemme just grab the prologue mission for a sneek peek. ;)

Thanks. :) I'm working on the fourth mission right now so it's gonna take a while. I already have plans where this series is aiming at the second chapter.

I updated the OP.

Missions 4 & 5 are splitted into two parts. (From what I can only tell the second part is BLOODY!)

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Posted 3 weeks ago

I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 1 has now been released. Might release the second part tomorrow.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32888


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Posted 3 weeks ago Edited by AdamArtz, 3 weeks ago.

I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 2 is out now. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32937

This is basically my favorite mission off the chapter so far because oh well alot of stuff happen.

This mission made me question myself "Since when did Brandon become a freedom fighter?".

EDIT 1: I think you're all really going to like where I'm going for at the next missions and the second chapter. :D

EDIT 2: I strongly suggest that you should play Part 1 with "I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 1" by Avenged Sevenfold and the second part with "I Won't See You Tonight, Pt. 2".

They were my inspiration (sorta haha).


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Posted 3 weeks ago

Mission 6 - Actions Speak Louder Than Words is out now.

In this mission, we're having a glimpse into Michael's past in SF...

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32981

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Posted 2 weeks ago

Mission 7 - Tormented is out. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33029

To me, this mission is like an interlude to the finale. It's pretty short. 

Trivia: dat epic long-stare competition in the end XD

 

Mission 8 - Fire In The City is also out. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/33030

Well this mission is very BIG. xD 

Alot of stuff happen. It's pretty cool.

 

Chapter 2 - here I come :lol:


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Posted 2 weeks ago

Alright, man, here's my opinion:

It's just...well...like your other ''joke'' missions...

You drive to a place, you talk with someone, then you go into another place and you get a phone call, and you go to another place...

I mean, it's boring and repetitive, the story goes on too fast.

But still, the grammar is good, but don't put two people talking on the same cutscene, it's a pain to read.

4/10 for me.


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Posted 2 weeks ago

Alright, man, here's my opinion:

It's just...well...like your other ''joke'' missions...

You drive to a place, you talk with someone, then you go into another place and you get a phone call, and you go to another place...

I mean, it's boring and repetitive, the story goes on too fast.

But still, the grammar is good, but don't put two people talking on the same cutscene, it's a pain to read.

4/10 for me.

I actually took it seriously beside "Tormented". That long stare was an inspiration off The Walking Dead XD


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Posted 2 weeks ago

Bro, your missions are nice and cool but as juice said don't put two persons talking animation cutsene it's really difficult to understand sometime that who's talking, but overall GOOD MISSIONS :)
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Posted 2 weeks ago

Bro, your missions are nice and cool but as juice said don't put two persons talking animation cutsene it's really difficult to understand sometime that who's talking, but overall GOOD MISSIONS :)

Thanks Huzaifa thanks alot :)


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Posted 2 weeks ago

The long stare part made me laugh, like, A LOT.

Still, maybe it's better than i though, i was expecting an action MP, maybe that's that.


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Posted 2 weeks ago

The long stare part made me laugh, like, A LOT.

Still, maybe it's better than i though, i was expecting an action MP, maybe that's that.

Well because of the ongoing riots in SF, maybe there will be more action in Chapter 2.

I'm glad that part made you laugh, I had to add it! xD


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Posted A week ago

Okay, so i played first chapter. I always love to unique & special themes like i thought this would be (according to the name of MP), but after playing i got disappointment. 

 

Firstly, i wanted to make a review, but because of things i will say, i decided to write a feedback without a rating. Presentation of missions is very poorly done. Just go to the check point, go to the next, little cutscene and then again the same.

Even story doesn't make sense and missions aren't connected to each other, i couldn't understand almost anything of the plot. Mission-pack filed on primary aspects, so i wouldn't like to talk about other. You should try to improve primary aspects and make sure how story should look like. It's something very primary, i even think this theme would be too much for beginning, but it's creator's choice.

 

Anyway, don't take this offensive, take it as advice. I'll play chapter 2 and see what you improved.  Good luck.


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Posted A week ago

Okay, so i played first chapter. I always love to unique & special themes like i thought this would be (according to the name of MP), but after playing i got disappointment. 

 

Firstly, i wanted to make a review, but because of things i will say, i decided to write a feedback without a rating. Presentation of missions is very poorly done. Just go to the check point, go to the next, little cutscene and then again the same.

Even story doesn't make sense and missions aren't connected to each other, i couldn't understand almost anything of the plot. Mission-pack filed on primary aspects, so i wouldn't like to talk about other. You should try to improve primary aspects and make sure how story should look like. It's something very primary, i even think this theme would be too much for beginning, but it's creator's choice.

 

Anyway, don't take this offensive, take it as advice. I'll play chapter 2 and see what you improved.  Good luck.

Thanks for the feedback, I understand that. 

I'll start working Chapter 2 when I'm back in the US





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