and here is My GOODS and BADS
At the Begining of the mission was great when you add player talk on phone
also the Weapones chose Wisely
Enemy Health isn't too high
The Cutscens is Perfects
You should not talk with Fresh English, you should talk agressively and Bad like you know.
and there are some grammatical mistakes
Overall: i give 4/5 , Keep it up Bro