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#61

Posted 08 July 2014 - 07:27 PM


I'm gonna stop playing and reviewing your missions for a while.
Cause i'm designing something right now. 
 
The same goes for Dyom 123's No Way Out.

Waiting for your project. I have no doubt that it's gonna be awesome. BTW Huzaifa, i played the whole series and it was fantastic to be honest taking apart some grammar and typing mistakes. Keep it up with the good work!
Thanks, bro for your feedback :) I try to improve my grammer mistakes in upcoming missions.

BTW T13 I'm sure that your project is awesome seriously waiting for it Good luck! :)

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#62

Posted 08 July 2014 - 09:48 PM

Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. :cool:


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#63

Posted 08 July 2014 - 10:10 PM

Interesting! I will play it soon and give my feedback. :cool:

Thanks, hope you like my missions :)

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#64

Posted 09 July 2014 - 11:16 AM

Topic updated... Screen shots and missions link are added.

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Posted 09 July 2014 - 12:06 PM Edited by Terano, 09 July 2014 - 03:25 PM.

Review of Chapter#1 of  "Grove Boys Revolution" by Huzaifa
 
 
Mission Name
Writing
Presentation
Length
Difficulty
Variety
Revolution Begining Good Good Excellent Easy Decent
Protect the turf Decent Very Good Excellent Easy Good
Taking Over Los Flores Decent Decent Decent(Little Bit Long) Easy Decent
Smith's Kidnapping Decent Very Good Not Playable
(Cut scene)
Not Playable
(Cut scene)
Very Good
Grove And Aztecas Partnershiping Decent Very Good Excellent Easy Excellent
Sweet Returns Good Excellent Decent (Short But Okay) Easy Very Good
Re-Taking Grove Street Good Excellent Excellent Medium Very Good
 
 
 

Huzaifa, I reviewed first 8 missions excluding Intro.
Story is good but when i was playing 'GBR'.I was feeling like i am playing GTA Sa but after 4th mission(Taking Over Los-Flores) I noticed a twist in the story. Chapter 1 contains lots of cool things like Kidnapping, Ballas attacking by bikes, Attacks in Night, and many more.
 
Noticeable mistakes in your writing but enough to understand the story clearly.
 
You definitely puts lots of efforts in making your Presentation and variety good.
I like when a ballas member attack on smith by bat that scene was cool.
but the biggest con of this MP is that There is a lack of slang words in this MP.
I suggest you to use more slang words because its a gang war story and it will also attach player with the story more.
 
 
Mission length is perfect but i noticed that difficulty level is not hard in any mission.
i like if you will work on the difficulty section of 'GBR'.
 
You had done very good use of each function of DYOM.
Keep it up bro.
Next time, I am accepting more than this from you.  :^: 
 
OVERALL RATING:- [3.5/5.0]
 

 

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Posted 11 July 2014 - 06:50 PM

Thanks, for this awesome review and opinions bro :) I highly appreciated it I try to improve my writing mistakes and other things in my next missions. Stay tuned :)
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Posted 12 July 2014 - 06:15 PM

I'm feeling proud to say that 10th mission had come out Runaway :)
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Posted 17 July 2014 - 08:27 AM

11th mission of GBR has been released: Take over the big one!


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#69

Posted 19 July 2014 - 11:29 AM

Great Huzaifa Your Missions Are Getting More Name In Dyom Community Good

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Posted 19 July 2014 - 12:07 PM

Great Huzaifa Your Missions Are Getting More Name In Dyom Community Good

Oh, thanks bro :)


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#71

Posted 22 July 2014 - 09:34 PM

It has been a week. I can't make any mission of the story because of laziness and busy with other things, but now I continue this again except a mission in 2 days.

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#72

Posted 28 July 2014 - 12:40 AM

This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it :)

4.6/5

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Posted 28 July 2014 - 04:07 AM

This was the great gang war MP I've ever played hope you should continue it :)

4.6/5

Hey, thanks for your feedback bro just stay tuned I'll release next mission in couple of days :)

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#74

Posted 08 September 2014 - 02:25 PM

Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it
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Posted 08 September 2014 - 02:44 PM

Hey bro, nice mission pack, 7.5/10, can you check my new mission ? My mission is getting to quiet, I don't get feedback at all. Please check it

You bump a two month old thread to ask if you can get feedback?

i can also go to your thread, give a fake rating and then ask for feedback.

 

Seriously dude.


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#76

Posted 08 September 2014 - 02:53 PM

Oh sorry, dude, I didn't see a date, again really sorry dude.

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#77

Posted 08 September 2014 - 03:54 PM

T13, this thread is still running, I work out my 12th mission which is under progress and upload in some days :)

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#78

Posted 15 December 2014 - 10:10 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 15 December 2014 - 10:14 AM.

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12th mission has been released...

Badly Incident

Description:
After take over east los santos on very next day some bad things happening in the unity station by Vagos and Ballas watch out in the mission.

Your Opinion And Feedback Is Appreciated :)

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Posted 22 December 2014 - 01:57 PM Edited by 1caker, 22 December 2014 - 02:04 PM.

Nice MP   :^: I have similliar MP theme with u


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Posted 24 December 2014 - 10:02 AM

Nice MP   :^: I have similliar MP theme with u

Thanks, yeah I played your missions that's cool :)

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Posted 24 December 2014 - 03:59 PM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 24 December 2014 - 04:01 PM.

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13th mission has been released... Take Out! Jefferson...  :santa:


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#82

Posted 26 December 2014 - 04:03 PM

It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street  :colgate:


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#83

Posted 27 December 2014 - 06:51 PM

It's cool bro,but you should use Aztecas boys since they work together with grove street  :colgate:

Yeah you're right but I added aztecas in my next mission.

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#84

Posted 04 January 2015 - 09:08 PM

Why no one add a Reply on my topic !!

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#85

Posted 03 March 2015 - 09:40 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 03 March 2015 - 09:42 AM.

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14th and a second last mission of this MP has been released: The Final Showdown

Don't skip any cutscene than mission runs perfectly.

Your every feedback will be appreciated :)

Play N' Enjoy :)
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#86

Posted 03 March 2015 - 09:45 AM

Finally, after wait for a long time. Will play it later  :^:

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Posted 03 March 2015 - 10:26 AM

Last mission of this mission pack release in 2 days. Stay tuned.

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#88

Posted 03 March 2015 - 03:59 PM

Played the MP.

 

Here's my feedback:

- OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos.

- Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs.

 

So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway :)


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#89

Posted 03 March 2015 - 05:24 PM

Hey, Bro am come Back, am gonna play this mission Right now , Wait for the feedback  :karmaeater:

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Posted 03 March 2015 - 06:14 PM

Played the MP.
 
Here's my feedback:
- OG Loc has nothing to do with Los Santos Vagos.
- Bad Grammar and Bad Spelling inside dialogs.
 
So I Give a 7/10, Good job anyway :)

Yeah, my grammer is sucks and you see Og loc in the final mission. Btw thanks for your feedback :)




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