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Posted 23 June 2014 - 08:20 AM

Fifth mission completed 70% hope I upload it today :)


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Posted 24 June 2014 - 07:31 AM

Fifth mission had come out Smith's Kidnapping :)


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Posted 24 June 2014 - 09:10 AM

An only cutscene mission? From the name i though i had to kill some gang members D:

Anyway, there are only some grammar errors here and there.

The other missions are great by the way.

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Posted 24 June 2014 - 09:29 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 24 June 2014 - 09:31 AM.

An only cutscene mission? From the name i though i had to kill some gang members D:
Anyway, there are only some grammar errors here and there.
The other missions are great by the way.

Yeah, Its just a cutsene mission because I want to show that how smith kidnap, but next mission is about long action fighting and much more Stay tuned. :)

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#35

Posted 26 June 2014 - 09:10 AM

60% mission had been done. I try to upload my mission today.

New character and gang are added

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Posted 27 June 2014 - 03:18 PM

Sixth mission had come out Grove And Aztecas Partnershiping New Gang and Character are added :)

 

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#37

Posted 28 June 2014 - 04:01 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 28 June 2014 - 04:02 AM.

New mission under progress Sweet Returns and upload tomorrow.

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Posted 02 July 2014 - 07:00 PM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 02 July 2014 - 07:15 PM.

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Seventh mission has been released:

Sweet Returns

Feedbacks will be appreciated :)

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Posted 03 July 2014 - 12:59 AM

Wow, awesome man, I've played it and I really liked the story, it's like the rise of the families (?)

Hahaha, very nice job friend, only a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes but it's cool.

 

4/5

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Posted 03 July 2014 - 09:12 AM

Wow, awesome man, I've played it and I really liked the story, it's like the rise of the families (?)
Hahaha, very nice job friend, only a few grammar and vocabulary mistakes but it's cool.
 
4/5

Thank you very much martin for your feedback and opinion, I really appreciated it and I try to improve my grammer mistakes in next missions :)

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Posted 03 July 2014 - 11:08 AM

Topic updated mission links Added.


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Posted 04 July 2014 - 09:46 AM

Hi bro! I played your seven missions of grove boys revolution and all missions are full of action and enjoyable. Length of the missions are short but everything mission is good and perfect looking forward for next mission.

Rating: 4.5/5 :^:

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Posted 04 July 2014 - 11:12 AM

Hi bro! I played your seven missions of grove boys revolution and all missions are full of action and enjoyable. Length of the missions are short but everything mission is good and perfect looking forward for next mission.

Rating: 4.5/5 :^:

Ah... Thanks bro for your review stay tuned  :)


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Posted 05 July 2014 - 03:18 PM

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Eight mission had come out: Re-Taking Grove Street

 

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Posted 05 July 2014 - 05:44 PM

Okay, i played the rest of the missions.

 

Smith's Kidnapping

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It took 3 missions to finally introduce a main character besides Steve.

To take revenge on the Grove Boys, OG Loc (Who is now the main antagonist) decides to kidnap a Grove Boy named Smith.

While all the cutscenes were really simple, We finally got a little story in this MP. Unfortunately, this is a cutscene only mission.

Which i despise in Mission Packs. 

 

Pros

  • New Characters introduced

Cons

  • No gameplay, Only Cutscenes

 

Grove and Aztecas Partnership

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Caesar finds out that Smith has been kidnapped and warns Steve. Together they go to rescue the poor boy and form a relation ship between the two gangs. While the shootout was entertaining and the story was good, the atmosphere was disappointing. For some reason, each Grove Boys Revolution mission is set late at night and features completely empty streets. I understand that the designer didn't want the player to get distracted by Cars and Pedestrians during shootouts but during cutscenes or during Drive from Point to Point objectives, adding Cars & Peds would be better. Because Los Santos now feels like an empty playground with only three groups of people fighting in it.

 

Pros

  • Good shootout location
  • Interesting story

Cons

  • Lifeless environment
  • A bit short

 

Sweet Returns

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After being gone for years, Sweet returns to Los Santos but finds out that the Vagos and Ballas have taken over Grove Street. This mission introduces a new Main Character. Sweet. It simply is just a part of Story Development. The events of this mission won't fit in others so the designer had to make a separate mission. This mission isn't really entertaining. Very less gameplay (Little driving and shooting), Mostly cutscenes and again, Lifeless Streets.

 

Pros

  • New character introduced

Cons

  • Less gameplay
  • Lifeless environment

 

Retaking Grove Street

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Unfortunately, This mission crashed for me so i couldn't play it completely. 

Both Steve and Sweet fight the Ballas and Vagos to regain control of Grove Street.

Features enough cutscenes and dialog along with enough gameplay. A balanced mission.

The shootout were challenging unlike previous missions. There were enemies in each direction and bullets were flying everywhere.

Amazing. But cause my game crashed, i can't say anything more... :/  

 

Just that you should keep your missions balanced like this one.

 

Pros

  • Enough gameplay
  • Enough story
  • Challenging and entertaining

Cons

  • Crashes at a certain point.

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Also, i have a question.

 

Is this MP set after the events of GTA San Andreas or is it Not Canon to GTA SA?


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Posted 05 July 2014 - 06:22 PM

Okay, i played the rest of the missions.
 
Smith's Kidnapping
------------------------
It took 3 missions to finally introduce a main character besides Steve.
To take revenge on the Grove Boys, OG Loc (Who is now the main antagonist) decides to kidnap a Grove Boy named Smith.
While all the cutscenes were really simple, We finally got a little story in this MP. Unfortunately, this is a cutscene only mission.
Which i despise in Mission Packs. 
 
Pros

  • New Characters introduced
Cons
  • No gameplay, Only Cutscenes
 
Grove and Aztecas Partnership
----------------------------------------
Caesar finds out that Smith has been kidnapped and warns Steve. Together they go to rescue the poor boy and form a relation ship between the two gangs. While the shootout was entertaining and the story was good, the atmosphere was disappointing. For some reason, each Grove Boys Revolution mission is set late at night and features completely empty streets. I understand that the designer didn't want the player to get distracted by Cars and Pedestrians during shootouts but during cutscenes or during Drive from Point to Point objectives, adding Cars & Peds would be better. Because Los Santos now feels like an empty playground with only three groups of people fighting in it.
 
Pros
  • Good shootout location
  • Interesting story
Cons
  • Lifeless environment
  • A bit short
 
Sweet Returns
------------------
After being gone for years, Sweet returns to Los Santos but finds out that the Vagos and Ballas have taken over Grove Street. This mission introduces a new Main Character. Sweet. It simply is just a part of Story Development. The events of this mission won't fit in others so the designer had to make a separate mission. This mission isn't really entertaining. Very less gameplay (Little driving and shooting), Mostly cutscenes and again, Lifeless Streets.
 
Pros
  • New character introduced
Cons
  • Less gameplay
  • Lifeless environment
 
Retaking Grove Street
----------------------------
Unfortunately, This mission crashed for me so i couldn't play it completely. 
Both Steve and Sweet fight the Ballas and Vagos to regain control of Grove Street.
Features enough cutscenes and dialog along with enough gameplay. A balanced mission.
The shootout were challenging unlike previous missions. There were enemies in each direction and bullets were flying everywhere.
Amazing. But cause my game crashed, i can't say anything more... :/  
 
Just that you should keep your missions balanced like this one.
 
Pros
  • Enough gameplay
  • Enough story
  • Challenging and entertaining
Cons
  • Crashes at a certain point.
==================================
 
Also, i have a question.
 
Is this MP set after the events of GTA San Andreas or is it Not Canon to GTA SA?
First of all thanks for your review and your feedback is really apprecited for about crashing of last mission. Idk why mission crashed on you but don't worry I try to fix it ASAP.

And no this mission pack is not related after the SanAndreas event it's about my own thinking ;)
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#47

Posted 05 July 2014 - 07:07 PM

I fixed the bug in mission. Play mission again hope it works perfect. :)

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Posted 05 July 2014 - 08:53 PM Edited by Boxerek, 05 July 2014 - 08:55 PM.

Sup bro, played your MP. ;)

I found the MP to be a relaxing shootout, like a better version of the gang wars that were originally put into the game. I see you got a short story going on here too which was good showing the relationship of Steve and Smith. The gameplay was good when it was implemented - shooting at gangs from all directions while they storm in by foot or vehicles. You used a lot of cutscenes, which were strong but some of them were wasted on pointless phrases and ideas, you developed your own story with the cutscenes but it could have been much better. The language was mediocre, quite average - there were bits of mistakes. Also, it felt a bit awkward at times when gangs spawned in front of your face in weird places (e.g.: behind house fences when fighting Vagos). The final mission crashed for me when some gang members spawned at the bridge. But in overall, I liked the MP as it constantly had action, action, action - I didn't get bored anywhere: if you were not shooting, then you were watching someone get beat up which was very cool.  :lol:

 

3.8/5

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Posted 05 July 2014 - 09:08 PM

Mission still crashes.  :/

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Posted 05 July 2014 - 09:11 PM

Sup bro, played your MP. ;)
I found the MP to be a relaxing shootout, like a better version of the gang wars that were originally put into the game. I see you got a short story going on here too which was good showing the relationship of Steve and Smith. The gameplay was good when it was implemented - shooting at gangs from all directions while they storm in by foot or vehicles. You used a lot of cutscenes, which were strong but some of them were wasted on pointless phrases and ideas, you developed your own story with the cutscenes but it could have been much better. The language was mediocre, quite average - there were bits of mistakes. Also, it felt a bit awkward at times when gangs spawned in front of your face in weird places (e.g.: behind house fences when fighting Vagos). The final mission crashed for me when some gang members spawned at the bridge. But in overall, I liked the MP as it constantly had action, action, action - I didn't get bored anywhere: if you were not shooting, then you were watching someone get beat up which was very cool.  :lol:
 
3.8/5

Thanks for your opinion and a detailed feedback I try to improve my mistakes in next missions and I hope that upcoming missions are too interesting and enjoyable :) Stay tuned and about mission crashed did you try it again ? I fixed the bug.
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Posted 05 July 2014 - 09:18 PM

Mission still crashes.  :/

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Ok, then I'll fix the bug tomorrow.
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Posted 05 July 2014 - 09:21 PM

Good Luck  :^:

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Posted 05 July 2014 - 09:58 PM

Mission still crashes.  :/

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Yes, I still have the exact same crash! I think it's the game engine that can't keep up with so many plain actors in bare sight in one go.


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Posted 06 July 2014 - 06:09 PM

I fixed the bug

 

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#55

Posted 06 July 2014 - 07:18 PM

After completed the work with my eight missions. I finally released my chapter 1 of my MP Grove boys revolution.

GBR Ch#1 :)
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#56

Posted 06 July 2014 - 07:45 PM

I fixed the bug

 

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Yup, it worked.

 

Loved the mission!

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Posted 06 July 2014 - 07:54 PM


I fixed the bug
 

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Yup, it worked.
 
Loved the mission!
Thanks for your peaceful comment bro :)
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#58

Posted 08 July 2014 - 06:28 PM

Ninth mission had come out : Chasing B' Dup's 

 

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#59

Posted 08 July 2014 - 06:40 PM

I'm gonna stop playing and reviewing your missions for a while.

Cause i'm designing something right now. 

 

The same goes for Dyom 123's No Way Out.

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Posted 08 July 2014 - 07:17 PM

I'm gonna stop playing and reviewing your missions for a while.

Cause i'm designing something right now. 

 

The same goes for Dyom 123's No Way Out.

Waiting for your project. I have no doubt that it's gonna be awesome. BTW Huzaifa, i played the whole series and it was fantastic to be honest taking apart some grammar and typing mistakes. Keep it up with the good work!





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