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Posted 15 June 2014 - 05:57 PM Edited by Huzaifa khan, A week ago.

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Hello! everyone I started my new project Grove boys revolution. This Mission-Pack is related to gang wars but the Mission-Pack based on story and I try to make my Missions unique as I can. And improve my previous mistakes. All I want is your feedback and opinion :)
 
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The story of the Mission-Pack is that in Los santos there are four gangs Ballas, Grove Street, Los Vagos and Los Aztecas and all their gangs had their leaders Ballas runs under the co-operation of B-Dup's. Grove Street runs under the co-operation of Sweet. Los Vagos runs under the co-operation with OG loc and Los Aztecas runs under the co-operation of Cesar. All the gangs in los santos wanted to take over the other gang territories, In these conditions the one bad decision of Vagos gang turned a war between Grove street Vs Vagos and then the war grow bigger. In these circumtences Ballas the most biggest gang of los santos shake their hands with Vagos gang and they started to taking over the grove street territories and killed their members then grove street started a revolution and shake hands with Aztecas after that Grove Street and Aztecas started a revolution and finish the hold of bad boys in the Los Santos.
 
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Grove Boys Revolution (Intro)

Revolution Begining

Protect the turf

 

Taking Over Los Flores

 

Smith's Kidnapping

 

Grove And Aztecas Partnershiping

 

Sweet Returns

 

Re-Taking Grove Street

 

GBR Chapter: 1

 

Chasing B' Dup's

 

Runaway

 

Take over the big one!

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All Credits goes to the Dyom Developers Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for this awesome modification Dyom and my friends who support me to start this Mission-Pack and me for Logo and Headers.

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Posted 15 June 2014 - 06:08 PM

I see you started your new MP Huzaifa, goodluck. I'll play it when it comes out  :colgate:  ;)


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Posted 15 June 2014 - 06:41 PM

I see you started your new MP Huzaifa, goodluck. I'll play it when it comes out  :colgate:  ;)

Thanks dude :) Intro and first mission had come out play and give feedback :)

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Posted 15 June 2014 - 07:14 PM Edited by Target13Productions, 15 June 2014 - 07:46 PM.

Just by playing Revolution Beginning, i know that this Mission Pack is gonna be fantastic.

There were bullets flying everywhere and i loved it! I know for sure that i'm gonna love killing me more Vagos.

Keep them coming Huzaifa.

 

Pros

  • Interesting story
  • Good actor placement
  • Good vehicle placement
  • Good time and weather
  • Great weapons and accuracy 

Cons

  • Dialogue wasn't very accurate.

 

I'm waiting for the next mission.  ;)

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Posted 15 June 2014 - 07:43 PM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 15 June 2014 - 07:46 PM.

Just by playing Revolution Beginning, i know that this Mission Pack is gonna be fantastic.
There were bullets flying everywhere and i loved it! I know for sure that i'm gonna love killing me more Vagos.
Keep them coming Huzaifa.
 
Pros

  • Interesting story
  • Good actor placement
  • Good vehicle placement
  • Good time and weather
  • Great weapons and accuracy 
Cons
  • Dialog wasn't very accurate.
 
I'm waiting for the next mission.  ;)
Oh, thanks for your review T13. Its really good that first time you reviewed my mission and I try to improve my dialouge mistakes :D also second mission is under progress and upload in 2 days :)
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Posted 15 June 2014 - 08:11 PM

really interesting, i think that this MP is gonna be unique. Good luck!!

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 01:49 AM Edited by KD himan, 16 June 2014 - 02:06 AM.

Goodluck with this project Huzaifa! as the Target13 said its entertaining and enjoying, it should be that, Keep it up mate.

EDIT : Finally got the time to sit in coolest room and play *Design some missions, i played your first part, the thing i saw in your missions is the improving english i found, and the concept was really good, once i also used to thought of making a project related to Grove streets, but nevermind for that, may i get inspiration from you one day. 

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 02:51 AM

This gonna be most interesting gang war mission series, keep up the good work pal. I'll always looking whole missions from you.

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 02:59 AM

really interesting, i think that this MP is gonna be unique. Good luck!!

Thanks Dyom123 for your support :)

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 05:38 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 16 June 2014 - 05:40 AM.

Goodluck with this project Huzaifa! as the Target13 said its entertaining and enjoying, it should be that, Keep it up mate.
EDIT : Finally got the time to sit in coolest room and play *Design some missions, i played your first part, the thing i saw in your missions is the improving english i found, and the concept was really good, once i also used to thought of making a project related to Grove streets, but nevermind for that, may i get inspiration from you one day. 

Thanks, bro for your support and feedback. I try my best to improve dialouge mistakes in next missions :)

This gonna be most interesting gang war mission series, keep up the good work pal. I'll always looking whole missions from you.
:)

Thanks, dude stay tuned with my MP :)

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 08:09 AM

Wow! New MP, Goodluck with
this bro BTW I played your first mission revolution begining it was very fantastic mission keep it up :^:
Waiting for next mission dude :)
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Posted 16 June 2014 - 09:39 AM

Cons

  • Dialogue wasn't very accurate.

 

Well, that little con can ruin a whole MP!  :miranda: 

 

Anyway, goodluck bro! Been a long time since I last played a GangBang mission! :p

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 11:53 AM

 

Cons

  • Dialogue wasn't very accurate.

 

GangBang

 

So accurate this Phrase was, right?


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Posted 16 June 2014 - 12:37 PM

Good luck with this one..  Hope for more from you ;) Greetings.

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 12:41 PM

Good luck with this one..  Hope for more from you ;) Greetings.

Thanks bro, for your support :)


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Posted 16 June 2014 - 01:15 PM

Played first two. i think it's not necessary to write at beginning of every mission: ''This is mission 2...'' and introducing us to gangs and all that could be done on another way or simply written at topic, however it's your idea and it gives you style, so i could say it's positive and great idea even if i don't like it so much.

 

Since first mission was just introduction, i will be talking about second. This mission looks more like a side mission or typical gang war mission from San Andreas free roam. We didn't get introduced to the story yet, except the background story, but i'm looking forward it! You started good! You definitely listened to some of my advices i wrote at your previous MP, there were pickups for healt and cover at buildings door.  i hope you will continue it as well though. Keep up and good work, this could turn into something amazing!  :^:

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 01:38 PM

With inaccurate dialogue, i meant this: "Why you morons enter in our area ?.

Real gang members might say something like this "Why do you bitches wanna enter our turf" or something.

I just found the dialogue a little "Soft" and not really "Ghetto" Understand?

 

But this doesn't mean that i won't enjoy the mission pack. Really looking forward to more mindless action. :^:  

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Posted 16 June 2014 - 03:15 PM

Thanks, both of you guys Andrej and Target13 for your helping instructions. I try my best to make next mission with better dialouges :)
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Posted 19 June 2014 - 03:43 PM

Third mission had come out Protect the turf

Play 'n' enjoy feedback will be apprecited :)

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Posted 19 June 2014 - 03:50 PM

no offence but your missions are better than your name.. just kidding :)..
I am waiting for next release...
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Posted 19 June 2014 - 05:05 PM

Just played the third mission. To be honest, i was disappointed.

It was very similar to the second mission. The same location, shooting the same people.

 

Besides, this mission was shorter. The only thing i enjoyed was that short cutscene of the Vagos incoming in bikes.

The Groveboy stated that they will take over Los Flores in the next mission. Looking forward to it.


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Posted 19 June 2014 - 05:13 PM

Just played the third mission. To be honest, i was disappointed.
It was very similar to the second mission. The same location, shooting the same people.
 
Besides, this mission was shorter. The only thing i enjoyed was that short cutscene of the Vagos incoming in bikes.
The Groveboy stated that they will take over Los Flores in the next mission. Looking forward to it.

Sorry bro, If you don't like it, BTW I show in this mission that vagos tryed to take over the east beach again. But don't worry fourth mission is better then this mission :cool:
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Posted 19 June 2014 - 06:58 PM

T13 was right.. It's almost the same mission, that moment with bikes was epic... But i still will play next missions.. I hope, it will be more interesting than the 3rd mission. Good luck ;)
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Posted 19 June 2014 - 07:13 PM

T13 was right.. It's almost the same mission, that moment with bikes was epic... But i still will play next missions.. I hope, it will be more interesting than the 3rd mission. Good luck ;)

Thanks, bro I try to make next mission best as I can stay tuned bro :)

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Posted 4 weeks ago Edited by Huzaifa khan, 4 weeks ago.

Fourth mission had come out: Taking Over Los Flores
 
Your every opinion and feedback will be appreciated :)

Next mission is under progress name Smith Kidnapping and upload in 2 days.

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Posted 4 weeks ago

Nice mission, Taking over los flores little bit of short but nice looking forward for next missions Good luck :^:
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Posted 4 weeks ago Edited by Huzaifa khan, 4 weeks ago.

Thanks dude, for your feedback stay tuned with my MP :)

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Posted 4 weeks ago

Played Taking Over Los Flores.

 

Just because you received positive reviews for a mission where there is a big shootout, doesn't mean that you have to make each mission

like that. It seems that The Grove like to take over territories at midnight only. And i highly doubt that a ghetto gang can get their hands on M4s. The mission was the same Shoot Vagos from every single side of the area and win. Four Missions and we still haven't met any new characters or went deeper into the story. All three missions feel the same.

 

Pros

  • New shootout location

Cons

  • Still no story or character development.
  • Inaccurate player weapon arsenal 
  • Very similar to two previous missions (Gameplay and Atmosphere)

 

I don't playing the same thing over and over again.

Try something different next time.


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Posted 4 weeks ago

Played Taking Over Los Flores.
 
Just because you received positive reviews for a mission where there is a big shootout, doesn't mean that you have to make each mission
like that. It seems that The Grove like to take over territories at midnight only. And i highly doubt that a ghetto gang can get their hands on M4s. The mission was the same Shoot Vagos from every single side of the area and win. Four Missions and we still haven't met any new characters or went deeper into the story. All three missions feel the same.
 
Pros

  • New shootout location
Cons
  • Still no story or character development.
  • Inaccurate player weapon arsenal 
  • Very similar to two previous missions (Gameplay and Atmosphere)
 
I don't playing the same thing over and over again.
Try something different next time.
Don't worry dude Next mission is not a gang war or something. Next mission is truly interesting because the mission is about Smith's Kidnapping so don't be dissapointed T13 :)
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Posted 4 weeks ago

waw i should play it bro 

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