Played. It was good as i expected, maybe even better. Cutscene, A.I & Objects were perfectly done as in your previous mission pack. I can say (i'm not 100% sure, i may forgot someone important but) you are if not the best, then one of the best race mission maker in DYOM history.
You even make better story itself if it's only about racing. I think grammar mistakes are only mistakes in this mission-pack, there are no DYOM errors as far as i can see. I guess, next missions will have more variety & action. If you are planning a bigger story then you should keep it moving, making more unique & special races, i wouldn't want 20 missions to be just like this, story following and only these type of races. We haven't seen even a mission with shooting, but that's just my opinion! Overall it's near perfect.
Obejcts and sounds really make this MP feels like racing game! Also, try to improve grammar. Although i could understand everything easily, some people might take it bad. Anyhow, it's going well! Good work!
Many thanks for your great feedbacks A98, I highly appreciated it.
As usual, grammar mistake is my common problem in my mission pack and i admit it, even i have tried to improve it using "translation" but this issue still occur. I'll try to improve it as best i can do to make it more understandable.
About the story, I've planned this storyline with between 15 - 20 missions with several sub missions in each chapter, and this story will be only following with many unique type of race actions such as a derby race, time attack, kart race and more, so there'll be less kind of shooting like the other mission had.