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Poll: LwFS Favorite Racing Style (30 member(s) have cast votes)

Which one is your favorite theme racing style?

  1. Normal Race (0 votes [0.00%])

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  2. Kart Race (0 votes [0.00%])

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  3. Open Street Race (13 votes [43.33%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 43.33%

  4. Derby Race (3 votes [10.00%] - View)

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  5. Time Attack Race (0 votes [0.00%])

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  6. Bike Race (8 votes [26.67%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 26.67%

  7. Monster Truck Race (3 votes [10.00%] - View)

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  8. Quad-Bike Race (0 votes [0.00%])

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  9. Class Race (0 votes [0.00%])

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  10. Drag Race (3 votes [10.00%] - View)

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ProDX34
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#1

Posted 14 June 2014 - 07:39 AM Edited by ProDX34, 27 November 2014 - 01:37 PM.

 
Progress will be continued soon...
Life with Full Speed
 
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"Speed is nothing without a good Driver..."
 
Hello Everyone, Welcome to the topic of the my latest mission series here.
After done with previous mission pack "The Proving of Dead Chapter#1", it's time for a new coming storyline with racing theme style named "Life with Full Speed". Be sure to comment and rate for improvements about this series, and also suggestion are allowed.
 
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San Andreas Racing Series
San Andreas has been built as a hometown of racing where every drivers must enforced to use all of their ability to become the top of racing series. S.A.R.S. stands for San Andreas Racing Series is a major series which the true challenge of racing will be held throughout the most of famous cities like Los Santos, Las venturas, and the main one is San Fierro, and the only opportunity to get every driver dreams comes true. Fame and popularity will always be guaranteed.
 
 
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Protagonist
 
Frei Rizzi
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A former of courier who wants to involves himself to the world of Racing where reaching his dream could be possible, becoming a professional racer. With his intention, Frei decide to sit behind the wheel to face all of his opponents.
Car
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*All cars in this list are using installed mods, and doesn't match with original skins in GTA SA
Yellow Phoenix with Black Stripes
 
Antagonist
 
Danny Malcov
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An expert driver and rich guy who always mastering almost every race he participated in. Because of his favorite car which has bought by his father, many of sponsors and popularity always looking for Danny and makes his name become the current top driver. Danny is also the leader of his own community called "Deathly Thunder" which nearly dominating around San Andreas and becoming the most dangerous racing crew in San Andreas. Danny is almost unstoppable, but when he saw someone who had better skill than himself, Frei, Danny must try to find a way to get rid of him away from the event.
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Black Turismo
 
Marco Rosberg
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He is a Co-leader of Deathly Thunder Crew and also a best friend of Danny who helped him to defeat his arch rival Frei Rizzi
 
Deathly Thunder Crew Members
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Friends
 
Frank Rizzi
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He is a Frei's twin brother who always pleasured to help Frei to becoming the top driver by teaching him some sort basic lessons of racing, even he suprised that his brother can drive well such a professional driver. So Rizzi Brothers will work together and had their goal by becoming the top driver of major of racing series, S.A.R.S.
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Blue Light Bullet with a white stripe
 

Michelle Cannes
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**This character is using installed mod, and not match with original skin in GTA SA
After got beaten by Frei in a street race, Michelle decide to admit with Frei's amazing expertise and making Frei as her boyfriend and leaving her former boyfriend which ever betrayed her, Brian.
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Dark Jester
 
Nathan Parker
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One of a guy who admired with Frei's racing skills, he wants to be a huge fan of Frei and supporting him in any kind of situation.
 
Main Opponents
 
Andrew Muller
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He is a gamer who always love playing a game related about racing with his own gaming wheel pad. Because of his skill about gaming, Andrew seems can drive better and mostly winning in almost every race. His family finally support him to become a racer than just a gamer, so he build his career and got himself a sport car which is his favorite car ever...
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Red Infernus
 
Rinna Flynn
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She is working as a croupier, but she always participates when she’s known about ongoing race. She's beautiful but aggressive when she driving with her classic car, she won't allowed any driver to overtake her even with currently top driver, Danny Malcov
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White Comet
 
Hiroshi Nakajima
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A person who gains lot of provides by the yakuza family, he had a great skill about controlling a car and trusted to being himself as a driver for many jobs. Hiroshi decided to participate himself into the major of racing series to show off and improve his skills...
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Dark Grey Banshee
 
Nate McFarland 
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A mechanical engineer who really wants to participate the major of racing series with his tuned super car, Nate seems to think that he had a big opportunity to make his name into the list of top driver by working hard of his car without worrying about with his racing skill.
Car
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Green Cheetah
 
Other Opponents
 
Gerald Williamsmith
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One of "Dracula Speed" member who ever participated in SARS last year with enough position to build his reputation and cash for his own car.
Car
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Red SuperGT
 
Ferry Darryl
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He's one of the best driver of his crew "The Barracuda", he love destruction and happily seeing opponents taken down by his aggressive behavior
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Blue Zr-350
 
Grevor Skyline
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One of Nardo's worker who ever showing to everyone with his racing skills in SARS last year.
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Brown Buffalo
 
Brian Smite
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Ex-boyfriend of Michelle, but even Brian had broken out with her but still wanted to get her back even she refused it and try to taking down to any people who ever touching her.
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White Alpha
 
More Character will be added soon...
 
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Intro
 
Chapter#1 Trailer
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______________________Storyline_____________________________________Status_____________________________Version_____________
Chapter#1 : First StepCompleted!1.04
 
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Intro
 
Chapter #1
First Step
Spoiler
Chapter #2
It's about to begin!
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Add-ons Pack
 
N/A
 
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Dutchy3010 and PatrickW for an amazing modification
GTA Anderius, Flatout, and Grid for race inspiration
Flatout 3, and Grid 2 for game soundtracks
Rockstar Games for an awesome game : Grand Theft Auto San Andreas

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#2

Posted 14 June 2014 - 07:55 AM

Interesting, gonna play it just after you release the missions.. :lol:  :lol:


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 08:47 AM

Hey, bro that looks great! Topic I should play the missions when you release :) And one more thing logo is awesome :)

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Posted 14 June 2014 - 09:55 AM

So it started, can't wait for chapter 1, also my topic will be updated soon.


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#5

Posted 14 June 2014 - 11:17 AM

You got your most liked theme Racing, keep it up and goodluck with it!


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 11:37 AM

So, you really like race type! Huh, after playing your previous amazing mission-pack, i should try this. 


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 02:39 PM

Well, I wonder how will a racing mission pack turn out with DYOM limitations. Will play for sure.


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 05:51 PM Edited by ProDX34, 14 June 2014 - 05:51 PM.

Thanks everyone for supports! :D

@Huzaifa, thanks for the compliment about the logos, those are made by myself.

 

Anyway, A new intro and 2 missions has released, Play and give some feedbacks for those missions!

Intro

Flashback

Your New Car

 

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Posted 14 June 2014 - 05:52 PM

OKay, gonna play it right now.  :lol:


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 06:16 PM

I download your missions right now except a feedback from me tomorrow :)

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Posted 14 June 2014 - 06:27 PM

Alright I played the intro and the other 2 missions.

The missions were great, great use of objects and custence witch was amazing. Also you improved your english, I didn't find many mistakes. The race was awesome and fantastic animations. I'd give 5/5, question should I start making missions or not? And my topic will be with yours or no?


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 06:39 PM

Thanks for the feedbacks, I really appreciated it.

Well... since you know the intro and beginning of mission, you may can start making the missions, but it's better to play more several mission before makin' it (because S.A.R.S. isn't started yet.)

about topic, i suggest should bundled with mine to improve this topic easily but if you want add more characters and description in your another storyline then you can create your own topic.


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 06:46 PM

I think  I should edit my firt post and turn it into a topic. But anyway, I'll wait for your missions then I'll start working on mine (right now I'm working on Thug's view).


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Posted 21 June 2014 - 05:13 AM

i will continue this project as soon as my f*cking college works done, at least Monday...


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Posted 21 June 2014 - 05:19 AM

Wait a minute... Are those drivers featured in the mission 'First Race' from TPoD?

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Posted 21 June 2014 - 05:32 AM

Wait a minute... Are those drivers featured in the mission 'First Race' from TPoD?

Partly yes.

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Posted 23 June 2014 - 07:07 AM

Just playing a Intro of your Mission-pack and once I feel that I watched the racing movie seriously you're great in making race mission and also your mission Your new car is also great! Amazing object setting and everything you such a deserved 5/5 :^: Keep up the good work bro looking forward for next missions :)

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Posted 23 June 2014 - 09:03 AM

HOLY sh*t! Can I have the car pack!?

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Posted 23 June 2014 - 09:56 AM

Just playing a Intro of your Mission-pack and once I feel that I watched the racing movie seriously you're great in making race mission and also your mission Your new car is also great! Amazing object setting and everything you such a deserved 5/5 :^: Keep up the good work bro looking forward for next missions :)

Thanks for your feedback Huzaifa, I really appreciate it.

More mission will be coming soon since today I started this project again, so stay tuned...

 

HOLY sh*t! Can I have the car pack!?

Nope :p

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Posted 26 June 2014 - 12:31 AM

Added more characters which will appear in some next missions.

 

- Marco Rosberg : Co-leader of D.T. Crew

- D.T. Crew members


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Posted 26 June 2014 - 10:25 AM

Added more characters which will appear in some next missions.

 

- Marco Rosberg : Co-leader of D.T. Crew

- D.T. Crew members

Oh man, impatience is killing me. I can't wait for the next missions.  :panic:


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Posted 27 June 2014 - 05:35 AM Edited by ProDX34, 27 June 2014 - 05:57 AM.

New missions is finally released, check it out :

 

Better to Better

4 Wheels Basic

Against The Thunder - Intro*

Against The Thunder - Race

 

Note : *There's an error which i'm unable to upload one of the missions list above in DYOM site so i moved it into another link for a while.

EDIT : *I've decide to separate between the mission and soundtrack to able to upload it into DYOM site, so you can download it from there but still you need to download the soundtrack for better quality of the mission.

 

Play and give some feedbacks for those missions.

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Posted 27 June 2014 - 08:30 PM

New missions is finally released, check it out :

 

Better to Better

4 Wheels Basic

Against The Thunder - Intro*

Against The Thunder - Race

 

Note : *There's an error which i'm unable to upload one of the missions list above in DYOM site so i moved it into another link for a while.

EDIT : *I've decide to separate between the mission and soundtrack to able to upload it into DYOM site, so you can download it from there but still you need to download the soundtrack for better quality of the mission.

 

Play and give some feedbacks for those missions.

:)

Just finished playing the missions and what will I say, it's FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!

The use of objects, routepoints, animations was great, I saw few grammar mistakes but don't care about it.
Rating: 5/5 :)

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Posted 28 June 2014 - 02:24 AM

Just finished playing the missions and what will I say, it's FREAKING AWESOME!!!!!!!!

The use of objects, routepoints, animations was great, I saw few grammar mistakes but don't care about it.
Rating: 5/5 :)

Many thanks for your great feedbacks, I really appreciate it and i admit about grammar mistakes since i made them in a rush.

And yeah... be sure to also rate the missions in DYOM site since it can attract more people to try those missions. I'll continue working for another mission at tomorrow or Monday, so stay tuned.

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Posted 28 June 2014 - 10:51 AM Edited by Be Kowalski, 28 June 2014 - 04:54 PM.

Man, I can say that you're creating helluva missions. About those grammar mistakes, good thing my brain works in the way which corrects them while reading. :D Also - without some good Phoenix mods, winning in those races is so hard... :/

 

PS. Can you tell me the name of the song you used in 4 Wheels Basic? I like it. :)

EDIT. Nevermind, found it. It's Redshirt Theory - Girl, Who You With. :D


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Posted 28 June 2014 - 12:21 PM

Great missions. I like the addition of ramps here and there, the only thing that bothered me is that...

i couldn't win any of the races...

goddamnit, when i'm in the middle of a racing competition i drive like i'm on drugs.


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Posted 29 June 2014 - 12:22 AM

Also - without some good Phoenix mods, winning in those races is so hard... :/

 

Great missions. I like the addition of ramps here and there, the only thing that bothered me is that...

i couldn't win any of the races...

goddamnit, when i'm in the middle of a racing competition i drive like i'm on drugs.

So it's hard? well... i was thought that it's moderate, not hard and not easy for winning the race when i have to test the mission even with vehicle mods but still be able to complete with original vehicle skins, but the only mission which i admit it difficult is 4th mission, 4 Wheel Basic.

But anyway, thanks for the comments guys, i'll try to make it easier next time.

:)


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Posted 29 June 2014 - 11:00 AM

 

Also - without some good Phoenix mods, winning in those races is so hard... :/

 

Great missions. I like the addition of ramps here and there, the only thing that bothered me is that...

i couldn't win any of the races...

goddamnit, when i'm in the middle of a racing competition i drive like i'm on drugs.

So it's hard? well... i was thought that it's moderate, not hard and not easy for winning the race when i have to test the mission even with vehicle mods but still be able to complete with original vehicle skins, but the only mission which i admit it difficult is 4th mission, 4 Wheel Basic.

But anyway, thanks for the comments guys, i'll try to make it easier next time.

:)

 

Maybe it's just me, because i like damaging cars...

Anyway, you should try to use some '','' when people are talking, i don't know what other think but the word ''bro'' feels less repetitive with that.


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Posted 29 June 2014 - 11:44 AM Edited by ProDX34, 29 June 2014 - 11:49 AM.

Maybe it's just me, because i like damaging cars...

Anyway, you should try to use some '','' when people are talking, i don't know what other think but the word ''bro'' feels less repetitive with that.

Alright, i'll try looking for it, thanks for your advice.


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Posted 29 June 2014 - 07:55 PM

Played. It was good as i expected, maybe even better. Cutscene, A.I & Objects were perfectly done as in your previous mission pack. I can say (i'm not 100% sure, i may forgot someone important but) you are if not the best, then one of the best race mission maker in DYOM history.

 

You even make better story itself if it's only about racing. I think grammar mistakes are only mistakes in this mission-pack, there are no DYOM errors as far as i can see. I guess, next missions will have more variety & action. If you are planning a bigger story then you should keep it moving, making more unique & special races, i wouldn't want 20 missions to be just like this, story following and only these type of races. We haven't seen even a mission with shooting, but that's just my opinion! Overall it's near perfect.

 

Obejcts and sounds really make this MP feels like racing game! Also, try to improve grammar. Although i could understand everything easily, some people might take it bad. Anyhow, it's going well! Good work! :^:  

 

Rating: 4.8/5 

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