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Posted 28 May 2014 - 03:47 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 25 October 2015 - 07:41 PM.

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Episodes From San Fierro (EFSF) is a mission-pack series that takes place in San Fierro and Bayside between 1988-1995. It contains two stories: The Street Life (perquel) and The Chronicle of Bryan Robinson (original). All 2 stories are connected to each other and have their own style, different side missions/activities and shows San Fierro from 2 different point of views. Idea first came in 2011 to show city from Bryan's eyes (now named The Chroicle Of Bryan Robinson), when he comes back from Germany. It was basically 'Episode' since it showed us one point of view. Now i came up with idea to remake the story and write one more (prequel) story that will show us San Fierro from another point of view in different style. Although the third story (sequel) was planned to be added, there were not enough elements and would be pointless since the story is already completed, also from other character's views.

 

 

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  • Better grammar
  • Better quality of missions (DYOM V8)
  • More understandable story
  • Missions more related to story
  • Mission name changes
  • Deleted useless missions
  • More side missions
  • New activities in/outside missions
  • New story (sequel)

 

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Five years ago, Bryan and George Robinson, two brothers started working for San Fierro Rifa street-gang. Few months late, George had some incidents with Italian mafia in local coffee bar, what caused a drive by between George, Bryan and their friends from Riffa, and Italian guys who called themselves 'Gracia gang'. Drive-by ended by crashing George's car into wall in East San Fierro. Then there spawned shooting between Riffa and Gracia. Gracia was more in better position, then Bryan saw there is no chance in surviving, he left his wounded brother George and got away, packing his stuff and flew to Germany. Five years later, Bryan finally decided to come back to San Fierro and finish the unfinished business that he should have done a long time ago.

 

 

 

Characters: 

 
Bryan Robinson
Bryan is 37 years old guy who was born in San Fierro, Paradiso. He was member in San Fierro Rifa street gang unit drive-by happened between Italian mafia and Rifa gang members. Since that moment, he left to Germany, for peaceful life. Five years later, he comes back to San Fierro to finish the unfinished stuff that he should have done a long time ago.
 
John Stark
John is 37 years old guy, one of Bryan's best friends. They went to school together when they were kids, later Bryan and John didn't see each other often because John was too busy with his work. As soon as John finds out Bryan has joined Rifa, he tried to tell him to leave because of dangerous reasons, where Bryan refuses. After Bryan left to Germany, he gave his house to John to use while he isn't here. Since he lost his job in early 1993, John joined Triads to get protection and money.
 
Wu Zi Mu
Traid leader Wu Zi Mu, also known as Woozie is powerful man in San Fierro. He has running his illegal business for a long time and doesn't want anyone to stand on his way. He's currently in far with Da Naga boys. Woozie meets Bryan and starts looking for him often and thinks he is a good solution for some of Traid's problems.
 
Hose Rovaldo
Hose, also known as Black Fish is 52 years old, second leader of San Fierro Rifa gang and ex Bryan's boss. When Bryan left the city, Black understood the situation but still couldn't forgive Bryan for doing it on that way. Since Bryan came back to San Fierro, Black is trying to get him back in the gang and remain the friends.
 
George Robinson
George is 44 years old guy, Bryan's brother who has been member of San Fierro Rifa gang. George had some incidents with Italian mafia in local coffee bar, what caused a drive by between George, Bryan and their friends from Riffa, and Italian guys who called themselves 'Gracia gang'. Drive-by ended by crashing George's car into wall in East San Fierro. Then started shooting between Rifa and Gracia. Gracia was more in better position, then Bryan saw there is no chance in surviving, he left wounded brother George. After that moment, none knows where George disappeared. Rumors were saying he has died by falling into water while trying to get away from Gracia.

Killer
Unknown killer who appeared 1 year before Bryan came back to San Fierro. He killed two big city businessmen and disappeared. When Bryan came to the hotel, Killer appeared from nowhere, killed two men and drooped bomb on the hotel. None knows his next steps.
 
Mao
A guy who appeared in hard moment with little tricks that could be very useful for Bryan. Triad from Liberty City, and old friend of Woozie, he has been always helping Woozie in hard situations. Now Woozie asked him to keep an eye on Bryan and help him as most as possible.
 
 

Gangs/Criminal Organizations:


Triads
The San Fierro Triads are large gangs originating from Hong Kong, who have since moved to San Fierro. There are three Triad factions in San Fierro consisting of a set hierarchy with small sets answering to larger sets; the Blood Feather Triad, which would later be slaughtered by their rivals, the Da Nang Boys; the Red Gecko Tong, which is led by Ran Fa Li; and the Mountain Cloud Boys. The most prominent gang in the group, the Mountain Cloud Boys, is operated by the blind Wu Zi Mu and answers to the Red Gecko Tong.
 
San Fierro Rifa
The San Fierro Rifa (or Rifa) is the sole Mexican gang based in San Fierro, later seen to be collaborating with Big Smoke, the Ballas, Los Santos Vagos and Russian Mafia in the narcotics business. The Rifa also appear to work as thugs and protection for the Loco Syndicate. After death of former leader T-Bone Mendez, Rifa lost large deals for drug trade and fall on lower level than they used to be.
 
Da Naga Boys
The Da Nang Boys are at war with the local San Fierro Triads and were responsible for the massacre of the Blood Feather Triad, a subset of the Triads. They have also targeted the Triads' leaders, namely Ran Fa Li and Wu Zi Mu, in one instance attempting an assassination. The gang is extremely violent, with major interests in protection, narcotics and human trafficking. While the Da Nang Boys are portrayed as a major Vietnamese gang in the city

 








Missions:


Episode 1: Welcome Home - Download
1.Welcome Home
2.Old Chapter
3.New Times, New People
4.Confusion
5.Little Flashback
6.Steal The Stolen
7.Complicated Victory
8.Party On The Ship
9.Cleaning The Hood
10.The Game Just Started
11.Outro
Episode 2: Stand up & Finish It - Download
12. A Job For Beginner
13. Special Reward
14. Beginning Of The Hell
15. Unexpected
16. Close Encounter
17. Through The City
18. Easy Way To The Point
19. Singing Like Rock Star
20. Dead End
 












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San Fierro in late 80's is like Liberty City in 60's, but with newer style. The streets of crime that are filled with gangs, and the one of them is Rifa. San Fierro Rifa, known as Rifa is the famous gang in San Fierro that controls the biggest part of the city. They are in war with Triads. Recently, rumors started talking about Italian mafia called: Gracia, which is interested in some business with companies in San Fierro. member of San Fierro Rifa, George Robinson doesn't want to get involved in their stuff only if they don't think of touching Rifa's streets. But things, seems to start complicating lately.




Characters:


George Robinson
One of the most respected and skilled Rifa members, ranked on the similar level as T-Bone. Although not a Mexican, he was offered to join by T-Bone after successfully helping the gang to make up one big drug trade. George doesn't like drugs or getting involved with it that much, but since drug trade is main focus in the gang, he accepted making deals and transports. He has elder brother Bryan and lives in the Paradiso.
 
Hose Rovaldo
Also knows as 'Black Fish' is a member of San Fierro Rifa and one of the George's closest friends. He got George to the Rifa, suggesting T-Bone it would be really worth having George by side. Hose used to dislike American food, but once Luis showed him some food at the Burgershoot, Hose fell in love with it. He has been a Rifa member for a long time, knowing many things and what happened in history.
 
Luis
Recently came from the Mexico and joined Rifa when his brother Fernando invited him. He's one of the George & Hose's closest friends, often hanging in the hood at Gracia. He knew to use guns since he was kid now can show his skills at the bettel or when it comes to that. Professional weapon user and great support.
 
Sam
Is a local dealer and George's friend since high school. He's been into drugs since school and was trying to get George into business but without success. He makes only single, small drug deals. Because Rifa is the generally controlling the drug trade ground, he was allowed to have his own small drug business with help of George.
 
Mao
Triad member from Liberty City who comes often to San Fierro if problems with other gangs/organizations suddenly occur. He assists Woozie and lead the main tactic in defeating the enemy. Often called in Liberty City 'The fastest dragon' by Triads there. He is one of the biggest Rifa problems when it comes to facing with Triads.
 
T-Bone Mendez 
Officially the leader of San Fierro Rifa. At some point in the past he joined the San Fierro Rifa, and eventually became the leader. Under his leadership, the Rifa confronted the Varrios Los Aztecas, Mendez himself killing two of Cesar Vialpando's friends. His main point is to expand the drug trade as most as possible. Although he respects the work that George is doing, he keeps eyes on George because of possibility for George to take over T-Bone's leadership and gang overall. 
 
Bryan Robinson
Elder brother of George who doesn't think it's good idea to be associated in any kind of stuff that George is associated. Peaceful person, sometimes assist George and lives with him in Paradiso.

Fernando
Also known as 'Fred' is a minor character and brother of Luis who has been a long time in the gang. He is holding all the weapons of San Fierro Rifa in the Gracia, which some of them are free.
 
Dave
Is a Los Santos drug dealer and a long time friend of Sam. He came to SF with his friends Josh & Mike who are also from LS, to plan a robbery at the airport with Sam.
 
Josh
Along with his brother Mike, is a illegal weapon dealer and a long time friend of Dave. He came to SF with Mike and Dave to plan a robbery at the airport with Sam.
 
Mike
Along with his brother Josh, is a illegal weapon dealer and a long time friend of Dave. He came to SF with Josh and Dave to plan a robbery at the airport with Sam.


 




Gangs/Criminal Organizations

 
Triads
The San Fierro Triads are large gangs originating from Hong Kong, who have since moved to San Fierro. There are three Triad factions in San Fierro consisting of a set hierarchy with small sets answering to larger sets; the Blood Feather Triad, which would later be slaughtered by their rivals, the Da Nang Boys; the Red Gecko Tong, which is led by Ran Fa Li; and the Mountain Cloud Boys. The most prominent gang in the group, the Mountain Cloud Boys, is operated by the blind Wu Zi Mu and answers to the Red Gecko Tong.

San Fierro Rifa
The San Fierro Rifa (or Rifa) is the sole Mexican gang based in San Fierro, one of the most serious gangs in San Fierro with the biggest drug trade in region. Leaded by T-Bone Mendez and assisted by their best & one of most respected member George Robinson. After successfully made deal about territory with Da Nagas, the problem with Triads still stayed on hand.

Da Naga Boys
Currently quiet, are the ship-street gang active in Esplade north and few ships around San Fierro.
 
East Boys
The East Boys are a small group of people that recently moved to Bayside & San Fierro. Their main opportunity is drug trade, although not big, they started installing in the east San Fierro before they got destroyed by the Rifa. Their status is currently unknow, except it's known they still remain in Bayside.
 
Italian Mafia
Two Italian  businessman have moved from Las Venturas to San Fierro trying to make a different step from usual Italian business (Casinos). Planning to open a factory in Gracia and named themselves 'Gracia' have a rival, Rifa which were holding that territory way before Italians came there.


 

Missions:

 
Episode 1: The Streets Of Mine - Download
1. On The Run
2. For Justice
3. East Trouble
4. Worthless Step
5. Gang War
6. Esplanade East
7. Easter Basin
8. San Fierro Bay
Episode 2: Drugs Are Serious - Download
9. A Mess
10. Just Drugs
11. Random Bullsh*t
12. It Ain't Going Like That
13. Photographer
14. Side Fun
15. Running Away From Hell
Episode 3: End Of The Street Life - Download
16. Old Friend, New Enemy
17. Blow It The f*ck Up!
18. Warning
19. Preparing For The Trip
20. Dangerous Way Out
21. Beginning Of The End


 

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So Andrej, here's the review of the first episode of TCoBR.
Welcome Home
Writing : very good : Some typing mistakes but covered with the good language and vocabulary. The idea is easy to understand
Presentation : very good : Well accurated and timed cutscenes. I especially liked the cutscene that shows the dynamite flying in the air and the explosions with the slow motion cutscene
Length : decent : it can be done in 2 minutes. the player takes the role of Brian Robinson going to a hotel in Queens. But he gets out of it because it was destoyed. you don't have the chance to play only once just make your way out of the hotel.
Difficulty : very easy : you can find a fire extincter to get out of the hotel and there is not much fire to extinct
Variety : Good: the actors are different, i did not notice similar actors or cars. there is not too much objects including the explosions and fire.
Old Chapter
Writing : Very good : the main idea is comprehensive in general. There's some typing mistakes that can be found in this mission though.
Presentation :Very Good: the cutscenes are well accurated and timed. Good choosing for the actors animations.
Length : quite good : It could be done in 3 minutes. as Bryan Robinson, You'll be going with your friend John shopping then you'll return home.
Difficulty : Very Easy : You have nothing to do but to drive to the supermarket then going back home
Variety : Decent : there is no pickups. the actors including Bryan and John.
New times, New people
Writing : Quite excellent : better than the first two missions, I can barely notice some mistakes but..that's good!
Presentation : Very good : As usual, well timed and accurated cutscenes with different animations for actors.
Length : good : It can be done in 4 minutes and 50 seconds exactly depending on your shooting and driving skills.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to shoot the bottles with the timing, you should be well habituated on shooting unless you'll fail.
Variety : Decent : there are only one weapon pickup, almost 7 bottle objects. And actors including Bryan, John and the Triads leader.
Confusion
Writing : Excellent: there are no such mistakes noticed. good language and grammar.The idea is easy to understand.
Presentation : Very Good : Good scenes and well timed. the animations are well choosen that fits the situation.
Length : Short : It can be done in 3 minutes and 10 seconds exactly depending on your fighting skills. You have the chance to play only once to defend John against the enemies
Difficulty : Easy : The enemies have a low health, they can be killed easily. Besides, they're equipped with some shovels and bats.
Variety : Decent : there are a very small amount of objects ingame. There are only 2 car used but the actors were different including Brian, John, and the enemies.
Little Flashback
Writing : Very Good : Some spelling mistakes but they're not clear, good language and vocabulary used. That's all.
Presentation : Quite Good : As every time, the designer make the cutscenes well accurated and timed. Also, the animations were good but there is nothing new or surprising.
Length : Short : It can be done in 2 minutes and 18 seconds exactly. The whole mission is composed of cutscenes.
Difficuly : Easy peasy ! : because you have no chance to play the missions, you just have to watch the cutscenes, which is a very boring thing.
Variety : Could Be Better : there are no objects used. Besides, there are only two cars. the actors including Brian and Black
Steal the stolen :
Writing : good : good writing but with some typing mistakes like "Traids" and "robison"... However it does not affect too much on the idea.
Presentation : good : well accurated and timed cutscenes. there is only one that is not well timed but it is not very important nad not affecting on the idea. Aswell, i liked when you put the rifa gang members surprising you.
Length : good : it can be done in 3 minutes and 50 seconds exactly. but can last for 4 minutes or more if you don't find the car so fast. you have to drive to some place, then you have to kill the Rifas and finally bring back woozie's car
Difficulty : quite medium : the only hard thing (for the normal players) is the low health of the Triad member, if he dies, you lose. That's all.
Variety : quite good : there is 2 pickups ingame + just one object. The actors including Woozie, the Traids, Brian and the Rifas
Complicated victory :
Writing : very good : good language and vocabulary used in the mission. but there are some spelling and typing mistakes. Although, they are not affecting on the main idea.
Presentation : very good : As usual, the designer knows how to accurate the cutscenes. Besides, I liked the stealth part of this missions in which there are actors surprising the player. Keep it up.
Length : quite Long : it can be done in 10 minutes. You have to steal some files from SF army base and take them to Woozie. Taking out the enemies is the most thing that takes some time to do.
Difficulty : Quite hard : The placed actors have 500 health and high accuracies. So if you get detected, you'll be dead in a few seconds. I couldn't complete this mission only after few tries.
Variety : Very good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, the Triads, the army and Da Nang Boys. Pickups including silencer, knife, armor and health. The most thing that i liked in this missions is how good the objects were placed in the ship. And at the end when the whole ship explodes.
Party on the ship :
Writing : Good : Good writing but always the designer writes instead of "Triads" "Traids". Anyway, in general the grammar was good taking apart some other mistakes
Presentation : Very good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Also a nice use for them. And I also like the shootout by the helicopter at the beginning. Very amazing presentation.
Length : Very good : It can be done in 6 minutes and 30 seconds exactly, depending on your skills. You have to kill all the Da Nang Boys to clear the ship.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to kill all the actors. You shall be carefull because there are some hidden actors, so you must wipe them out slowly to avoid getting killed.
Variety : quite good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, The Triads and Da Nang Boyz. I did not notice any pickup while i was playing. In general it was a unique mission.
Cleaning the hood :
Writing : very good : The designer knows how to write correctly taking apart some typing mistakes or some missing letters.
Presentation : quite good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. But the problem is there are not so much action. So there isn't such a surprising or epic things.
Length : very good : it can be done it 6 minutes depending on your fighting and driving skills. You have to drive to Bayside and fight some villagers.
Difficulty : Easy : You have to fight some guys, but you have to be fast or else you'll fail the mission because your friend will die.
Variety : Decent : actors including Bryan, John, and the villagers. Pickups including a pistol and health. I did not notice any objects used unlike the other missions.
The Game Just Started :
Writing : Excellent : No such mistakes noticed. I encourage the designer to keep up like this. Besides, He's using a good vocabulary.
Presentation : good : Nice use of cutscenes. As everytime, the designer have to ability to well accurate and time them. good work! However, there is not something surprising the player. You just have to watch the cutscenes.
Length : Decent : It can be done in 2 minutes and 19 seconds. It's all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : The player has no chance to play so he must just watch the cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan, Black, and 2 unknown guys. No such objects or pickups used. Only 1 car noticed ingame.
Outro :
Writing : Excellent : Like the previous one, no mistakes found. A good grammar and vocabulary used.
Presentation : Quite good : Like all the missions. Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Good Work! But the only boring thing is the mission is all cutscenes
Length : Too short : It can be done it 30 seconds! It is very short since it is an outro and it is all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : Like the previous mission, the player has no chance to play, only watching cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan and John. Only 1 car in use and 3 pickups found.

Overall, I enjoyed playing this storyline. It's so fun to play and comprehensive in general. It has an easy understandable language. But the most thing that I hated is the short missions at the beginning. And especially the cutscene missions. Because it's sometimes boring to play a mission full of cutscenes. The player always want something epic and unique. Taking apart that, everything is fine. Keep it up.
Rating : 7/10


 

Here is the review that you wanted, enjoy it. Sorry if you find it back cuz it's the first review I ever made.
 
Hello everyone, today I'm reviewing Episode 2 of the mission-pack The Chronicles Of Bryan Robinson made by AnDReJ98
Without losing time, let's start
 
Writing: Very good: Just few grammatical and typical mistakes. The dialogues are easy to understand.
PresentationVery good: Amazing cutscenes and animations. The duration of the cutscenes is great and fits the animations and dialogs. Great work man, like always
 
Beginning of hell:
*Length: Good: Mission lasts 4-5 minutes to be done. Just pickup John and drive him home.
*DifficultyEasy: Just driving, nothing hard.
*Variety: Decent: Don't expect much since this is the introduction of this Episode. Just three taxis and an actor. No sign of objects yet.
 
Unexpected:
*LengthGood: Mission lasts 5-7 minutes to be done. The Triads have been attacked by Rifas in Pier 69 so Woozie sent Bryan to take care of them
*Difficulty: Hard: They are everywhere and well equiped. Luckily, there are some armor and health around but getting on the roof is more easy, trust me.
*Varitey: Very good: A lot of actors were used in this mission and few cars. The weapons include Ak47, Tec9, Desert Deagle, no objects seen.
 
Through the city:
*Length: Good: Mission lasts 5-6 minutes to be done. Woozie is going out of town for a week but The Rifa are waiting for him. Like always, Bryan has to take care of this.
*Difficulty: Too hard(for me): The Rifas are everywhere and your car is slow. The molotovs can destroy the Limo easy, run them over or you'll fail.
*Variety: Very good: A lot of actors, a lot of cars. No objects seen yet.
 
Easy way to the point:
*LengthShort: Mission lasts 2-3 minutes to be done. Just pick up John from the hospital and drive him home.
*Difficulty: Easy: Too easy, just sit back and drive.
*VarietyDecent: Just one actor and a car. No objects seen.
 
Singing like rock:
*Length: Decent: Mission lasts 4 minutes to be done. Mao and Bryan are looking for informations about Luigi and they're looking for it in The Pleasure Domes Club.
*Difficulty: Easy: Just avoid getting shot, there are few guards around. Headshot 'em and it's all gonna be okay.
*Variety: Decent: Some Rifas, a car. No objects seen.
 
Dead End:
*Length: Good: Mission lasts 5-6 missions to be. The Rifas are preparing to transport a ship full of army guns to LS. And Luigi is there, so it's time!
*DifficultyMeduim: Just protect the Triads, there are many Rifas around, don't let Mao die. The fight at the end is easy.
*Variety: Very good: A lot of actors were used in this mission, few cars too and great use of objects.
 
Overall, this storyline was great and enjoyable. The use of player animations and cutscenes is amazing. Just try to make the missions more longer and make it more hard. Also add more objects and cars. The story is easy to understand. I'm sure that you put a lot of effort in this project which is almost perfect.
Rating : 9/10



Hello everyone, today I am reviewing Episode 1: The Streets of Mine of the mission pack Episodes from San Fierro designed by AnDReJ98
Let's get down to business.
 

-Writing: Good. There are many grammar mistakes and some of them even affected the dialogue greatly. Also, the instructions are somewhat blind and hard to understand.
-Presentation: GoodSome of the cutscene's angles are not very well placed, but at least they are timed fine. The lack of (many) objects also make the missions somewhat bland and vacant. And, the story is not very well written.
 
On the run
-Length: Decent The mission lasts for 4-5 minutes. George is on his way dealing with some Da Naga Boys but then some sh*t happens.
-Difficulty: Easy. Just some bike chasing. It's not that hard.
-Variety: DecentThere are only a few skins, a few vehicles and no weapon was seen. It's an Intro anyway, so I wouldn't expect much.
 

For Justice
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 5-6 minutes. George and his holmes are eating at Burger Shot but then troubles happen.
-Difficulty: Easy. Again, just rape the W button and chase them like hell. It won't be difficult. Though be careful, don't lose their visual.
-Variety: DecentThough there are more actors and bikes than the previous mission, the variety hasn't improved much. But since it's just a short mission, I can ignore the variety for a second.

 

East Trouble
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 6-7 minutes. Luis, on his way to return George's car, spotted the guys that were causing troubles at Burger Shot. He immediately calls George and George immediately goes to Luis to give him some assistance.
-Difficulty: Medium. The fight is easy enough, but your allies will have low health. Don't let your allies be surrounded or they's dead. And if they's dead, you're dead. Also, the chasing part can prove quite a challenge.
-Variety: Very good. The variety is much better than the last mission, I must say. The hideout is simply yet beautifully made with bikes, cars, objects. etc. The enemies also use different skins, which is good, but the allies don't. Mostly the allies just use the same skins and such. One more thing, the amount of weapons seen in this mission are plenty, ranging from a must-have-multi-purpose knives to kill-then-bury shovels.
 

Worthless step
-Length: Decent. The mission lasts for 4-5 minutes. Sam is going to deal with the Triads and he needs George's help.
-Difficulty: Easy. This one is even easier than going to the fridge and grab some popcorn (sorry I don't have a better metaphor)
-Variety: Decent. This mission only consists of a few actors, a few guns and vehicles, no object in sight. This mission could have been done a lot better. 
 


Gang War
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 6-7 minutes. Da Naga Boys just threated Luis not to f*ck with them, and George, along with Hose, will show them that they are not afraid of threats.
-Difficulty: Medium. Though there are many enemies, most of them can be considered as "weeklings" because they're equipped with Colt .45s and such. You'll also have some backups with you, so this should be a walk in a pier. (Get it? Because you're taking a pier)
-Variety: Good. The variety has improved but not much since the last mission, even somewhat worse. There are only plenty of actors and weapons, no sight of objects nor vehicles anywhere. The war could have used more objects and cars as covers and such. 
 

Esplanade East
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 6-7 minutes.George is taking over Esplanade East
-Difficulty: Medium. There are a lot of enemies and as usual, if you want some back-up, you'll have to drive some long ass distance. If you wanna feel like Contra, "alone in the base" and sh*t like that, then just blast right in the front entrance with your almighty M4. But beware, they aren't exactly equipped with BB guns.
-Variety: Very good. The variety is very good in gang wars. The base is very well made and the cars and sh*t like that, just wow man. Though the enemies mainly use the same skins and the same weapons, but that doesn't make the variety any worse.
 
Easter Basin
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 6-7 minutes.George is taking over Easter Basin
-Difficulty: Medium. Same like any other gang war, you can either break in alone like James Bond and sh*t, or sacrifice some time and get some holmes with you. 
-Variety: Very good. I don't get this, why do gang war missions even have better variety than main missions? The amount of things in this mission is just f*cking massive. The objects, the cars, the actors, the weapons, etc. Damn, just damn.
 

San Fierro Bay
-Length: Good. The mission lasts for 6-7 minutes. George is taking over San Fierro Bay.
-Difficulty: Medium. This time, the amount of enemies will be the same, but you won't have any extra backup with you (actually, you do, but you need to travel a long ass distance to get them). At least you've got an M4, which would make your life a whole lot easier.
-Variety: Good. Just like in the last mission, no object around. But at least, this time, there are a lot of boats and such around. The enemies are also plenty and apperantly, have evolved, since now they're equipped with grenades, AKs and such.
 
Overall rating for chapter: 6.5/10. The variety of missions are just terrible. Some missions only use a few actors, a few cars and a few objects that is not even in plain sight. The gameplay is not repetive, but isn't exactly very interesting either. The story is just bland, nothing cool about it. This actually seem just like any regular gang-theme MP. You go here, you get orders, and you just do stuffs. And this "stuffs" aren't even that interesting. The only interesting part of this chapter are the gang wars, though some shootouts can't and won't make this chapter any better. Also, some dialogues don't make any sense. I read it and I can't understand anything.
If you want to get more attention and love for this MP, you are gonna have to improve a LOT in the next chapter. More mission, more variety, more gameplay, etc.
Sorry for being harsh but I guess it's necessary for you to realize what's wrong and what to fix, right?


Hello everyone, today I'm reviewing the mission pack The Street Life designer by AnDReJ98.
Without losing time, let's get down to business.
 
-Writing: Very good: Some grammatical and typical mistakes, that’s all. The rest is fine and the instructions are clear.
-Presentation: Very good: The cutscenes angles are just awesome, though they are kinda of short, try making ‘em more longer. Not everybody can read fast. Great use of animations too.
 
A mess
-Length: Good: Mission lasts 7-8 minutes  The triads made a set up and knew where is the rifas hideout and geore has to take care of it.
-Difficulty: Medium: Just take cover and shoot and it’s all gonna be fine.
Variety: Good: Great use of objects, although you could of added some more. Actors use different skins and weapons.
 
Just Drugs...
-Length: Very good: Mission lasts 9-10 minutes. George needs to act like a wolf and use his stealth skills to get The Triads’ drugs.
-Difficulty: Hard: If you have some infiltration and stealth skills, this will be a walk in the park but if you get caught, you’re dead meat.
-Variety: Very good: The warehouse is awesome done with the objects! The actors use different skins with varied weapons. Also, there was a little use of cars.
 
Random Bullsh*t:
-Length: Decent: Mission lasts 4-5 minutes. Sam and George have been attacked by the Triads, Sam's driving and George, of course, is shooting.
-Difficulty: Hard: They are almost everywhere, and they're using molotovs too. If you want my advice, just shoot everybody and don't think about anything else.
-Variety: Good: A lot of actors and vehicles were used in this mission, but less objects.
 
It aint going like that
-Length: Very good: Mission lasts 9-10, George, Mike, Sam, and the other two guys are planning to rob some army guns that some Italians have since it coats a lot.
-Difficulty: Medium: The first part is easy, only the timelimit is the problem. But driving the damaged van back to the hideout is somehow hard, especially for me :D
-Variety: Very good: A lot of objects, cars, actors were used in this mission.
P.S: This is one of best and unique missions I ever played BTW.
 
Photographer
-Length: Decent: Mission lasts for 4 minutes , George needs to take some photos of the Triads' and Nagas' leaders and some car.
-Difficulty: Hard: If you won't keep your head down and move silently, they'll kill you faster then you think.
-Variety: Good: Mission includes a lot of objects, triads, Da Nang Boys, Woozie and some cars.
 
Side Fun
-Length: Decent: Mission lasts for 4 minutes. George needs to plant some bombs in a Truck's way and of course with a timelimit.
-Difficulty: Easy: Everything's easy, just watch out for the timelimit or a red text will apear saying "MISSION FAILED"
-Veriety: Decent: Mission inculdes a decent number of actors and cars without any object.
 
Running away from hell:
-Length: Good: Mission lasts for 5 minutes. It's time to get the Triads out of train. With a car similiar to the one that George photographed, and with Jason's help, we're gonna make a lil' drive by.
-Difficulty: Medium: The only problem is Jason's health and the car, the drive by is easy.
-Variety: Decent: Mission inclues a good number of actors, a decent number of cars and objects.
 
Overall, this episode was almost great. If you compare it to the first one, you'd find a lot of improvements. The only problem is the Length of some missions, the rest's quite good. I give this Episode 8.5/10. Keep it up, mate :^:

 

 

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Posted 28 May 2014 - 03:48 PM

Good work. I'll look forward to playing this.


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 04:23 PM

Wow! I should play your missions :)  :santa:


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 04:33 PM

Will play this after i'm done with my MP, Good work!  :^:


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 04:41 PM

Thank you for your comments. I'm still updating the topic, missions are up!


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 04:52 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 10 July 2014 - 11:28 AM.

Deleted. - All informations at the main post & here.


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Posted 28 May 2014 - 09:38 PM

Everything is updated now. Work on the other two stories will be started once TCoBR is finished.


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Posted 29 May 2014 - 01:51 AM Edited by KD himan, 29 May 2014 - 01:51 AM.

Great work AnDReJ, i'll definitely play it because it says that you'd improved your Grammar in this remake. so i'll post my review some hours later or even a day.


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Posted 30 May 2014 - 01:46 PM

Amazing Dude I Am Realy Waiting For Missions :)


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Posted 30 May 2014 - 02:07 PM

Amazing Dude I Am Realy Waiting For Missions :)

AnDrej made many missions bro in episode 1 :D

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Posted 01 June 2014 - 03:49 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 14 June 2014 - 11:35 AM.

Update:

New missions are up! TCoBR is coming to the end, the next story will be less limited since it isn't remake, it's new story and it will have more & longer side missions/activities with better quality.
 
Also, i recommend to anyone who plays missions. If you wants better experience with this mission pack, you should load original San Andreas progress, then exit and get into design your own mission and run mission/storyline. This will make available spawning gangs on the streets, certain vehicles in certain areas, etc. This is just a suggestion, it's not necessary.


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Posted 01 June 2014 - 04:28 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 10 July 2014 - 11:29 AM.

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Posted 01 June 2014 - 05:05 PM

Very nice storyline keep up the great work Andrej


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Posted 03 June 2014 - 03:18 PM Edited by Alif Akbar, 03 June 2014 - 03:22 PM.

Hey, I played the 1st part of The Chronicles of Bryan Robinson

Well, what I can say is, it's like a simple GTA-esque storyline, you start from a scrap, first with your fist then with some guns. But every GTA-esque storyline are unique, I mean one's storyline would be different with the others, although they might be the same (rarely)

The part that I don't like here is the must-survive actor's health, which is I think 500, maybe ? Way too low, I know it adds the realism, but please, you're surrounded by 4-5 people that wanted you dead, and plus, some of them have guns. Once I fail the mission where you at the other part of SA (what bay ?) because the condition above

Presentations are good, the missions are unique, one is different with the others. I like the part when the stranger threw the bomb (never see it coming :D)

But afterall, still a good storyline to follow, I'm going to continue playing it if I have some time. My score : 4/5

Cheers

EDIT : Oh yeah, about Traid, is that how you spell in Serbia or you just want to make fun of Triad :D ? Because I think it's not typos because you keep repeating spelling like that

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Posted 03 June 2014 - 05:03 PM

Thank you for feedback, i appreciate it!

 

 

Well, what I can say is, it's like a simple GTA-esque storyline, you start from a scrap, first with your fist then with some guns. But every GTA-esque storyline are unique, I mean one's storyline would be different with the others, although they might be the same (rarely)

Yea, you're 100% correct. I've many storylines like this, so i felt somehow stupid while remaking this, but since it's remake, i couldn't change that much, though i already did, but it still should have feel like original. However, in next two stories, i'll have fully freedom to make it like i want now.

 

 

The part that I don't like here is the must-survive actor's health, which is I think 500, maybe ? Way too low, I know it adds the realism, but please, you're surrounded by 4-5 people that wanted you dead, and plus, some of them have guns. Once I fail the mission where you at the other part of SA (what bay ?) because the condition above

I set on many must survive actors 500 while on other less. It may be hard for some players, but since my friends from my country told me those missions were easy-med, i thought twice and decided to leave it as it is. But i will work on it in future. And yes, realism was also my point.

 

 

Oh yeah, about Traid, is that how you spell in Serbia or you just want to make fun of Triad :D ? Because I think it's not typos because you keep repeating spelling like that

 

Yeah that's how i say Triad, i should correct it, thanks for notifying me. And thanks overall for the feedback and high rating, i'm glad you're following the story.  :^:


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Posted 05 June 2014 - 09:35 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 14 June 2014 - 11:34 AM.

Update:
 
Three new missions are up! Play & give feedback!


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Posted 07 June 2014 - 09:42 PM

I can't believe that I didn't play this yet. Gonna play and give you feedbacks soon.


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Posted 14 June 2014 - 11:34 AM

Update:

 

Final mission & episode 2 storyline got finished and published. The Chronicle Of Bryan Robinson is completed, work on the next story will be started soon.

 

Play & give feedback!


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Posted 15 June 2014 - 01:14 PM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 15 June 2014 - 03:10 PM.

Ok, bro I play your episode 1 welcome home and what I said is that awesome work bro really enjoy a good time with your missions and very good story atmosphere. So that's why my rating is 5/5 to you :) :^:

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Posted 22 June 2014 - 06:47 PM Edited by Dyom 123, 22 June 2014 - 06:57 PM.

So an AnDReJ98, here's the review of the first episode of TCoBR.
Welcome Home
Writing : very good : Some typing mistakes but covered with the good language and vocabulary. The idea is easy to understand
Presentation : very good : Well accurated and timed cutscenes. I especially liked the cutscene that shows the dynamite flying in the air and the explosions with the slow motion cutscene
Length : decent : it can be done in 2 minutes. the player takes the role of Brian Robinson going to a hotel in Queens. But he gets out of it because it was destoyed. you don't have the chance to play only once just make your way out of the hotel.
Difficulty : very easy : you can find a fire extincter to get out of the hotel and there is not much fire to extinct
Variety : Good: the actors are different, i did not notice similar actors or cars. there is not too much objects including the explosions and fire.
Old Chapter
Writing : Very good : the main idea is comprehensive in general. There's some typing mistakes that can be found in this mission though.
Presentation :Very Good: the cutscenes are well accurated and timed. Good choosing for the actors animations.
Length : quite good : It could be done in 3 minutes. as Bryan Robinson, You'll be going with your friend John shopping then you'll return home.
Difficulty : Very Easy : You have nothing to do but to drive to the supermarket then going back home
Variety : Decent : there is no pickups. the actors including Bryan and John.
New times, New people
Writing : Quite excellent : better than the first two missions, I can barely notice some mistakes but..that's good!
Presentation : Very good : As usual, well timed and accurated cutscenes with different animations for actors.
Length : good : It can be done in 4 minutes and 50 seconds exactly depending on your shooting and driving skills.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to shoot the bottles with the timing, you should be well habituated on shooting unless you'll fail.
Variety : Decent : there are only one weapon pickup, almost 7 bottle objects. And actors including Bryan, John and the Triads leader.
Confusion
Writing : Excellent: there are no such mistakes noticed. good language and grammar.The idea is easy to understand.
Presentation : Very Good : Good scenes and well timed. the animations are well choosen that fits the situation.
Length : Short : It can be done in 3 minutes and 10 seconds exactly depending on your fighting skills. You have the chance to play only once to defend John against the enemies
Difficulty : Easy : The enemies have a low health, they can be killed easily. Besides, they're equipped with some shovels and bats.
Variety : Decent :  there are a very small amount of objects ingame. There are only 2 car used but the actors were different including Brian, John, and the enemies.  
Little Flashback
Writing : Very Good : Some spelling mistakes but they're not clear, good language and vocabulary used. That's all.
Presentation : Quite Good : As every time, the designer make the cutscenes well accurated and timed. Also, the animations were good but there is nothing new or surprising.
Length : Short : It can be done in 2 minutes and 18 seconds exactly. The whole mission is composed of cutscenes.
Difficuly : Easy peasy ! : because you have no chance to play the missions, you just have to watch the cutscenes, which is a very boring thing.
 Variety : Could Be Better : there are no objects used. Besides, there are only two cars. the actors including Brian and Black
Steal the stolen :
Writing : good : good writing but with some typing mistakes like "Traids" and "robison"... However it does not affect too much on the idea.
Presentation : good : well accurated and timed cutscenes. there is only one that is not well timed but it is not very important nad not affecting on the idea. Aswell, i liked when you put the rifa gang members surprising you.
Length : good : it can be done in 3 minutes and 50 seconds exactly. but can last for 4 minutes or more if you don't find the car so fast. you have to drive to some place, then you have to kill the Rifas and finally bring back woozie's car
Difficulty : quite medium : the only hard thing (for the normal players) is the low health of the Triad member, if he dies, you lose. That's all.
Variety : quite good : there is 2 pickups ingame + just one object. The actors including Woozie, the Traids, Brian and the Rifas
Complicated victory :
Writing : very good : good language and vocabulary used in the mission. but there are some spelling and typing mistakes. Although, they are not affecting on the main idea.
Presentation : very good : As usual, the designer knows how to accurate the cutscenes. Besides, I liked the stealth part of this missions in which there are actors surprising the player. Keep it up.
Length : quite Long : it can be done in 10 minutes. You have to steal some files from SF army base and take them to Woozie. Taking out the enemies is the most thing that takes some time to do.
Difficulty : Quite hard : The placed actors have 500 health and high accuracies. So if you get detected, you'll be dead in a few seconds. I couldn't complete this mission only after few tries.
Variety : Very good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, the Triads, the army and Da Nang Boys. Pickups including silencer, knife, armor and health. The most thing that i liked in this missions is how good the objects were placed in the ship. And at the end when the whole ship explodes.
Party on the ship :
Writing : Good : Good writing but always the designer writes instead of "Triads" "Traids". Anyway, in general the grammar was good taking apart some other mistakes
Presentation : Very good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Also a nice use for them. And I also like the shootout by the helicopter at the beginning. Very amazing presentation.
Length : Very good : It can be done in 6 minutes and 30 seconds exactly, depending on your skills. You have to kill all the Da Nang Boys to clear the ship.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to kill all the actors. You shall be carefull because there are some hidden actors, so you must wipe them out slowly to avoid getting killed.
Variety : quite good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, The Triads and Da Nang Boyz. I did not notice any pickup while i was playing. In general it was a unique mission.
Cleaning the hood :
Writing : very good : The designer knows how to write correctly taking apart some typing mistakes or some missing letters.
Presentation : quite good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. But the problem is there are not so much action. So there isn't such a surprising or epic things.
Length : very good : it can be done it 6 minutes depending on your fighting and driving skills. You have to drive to Bayside and fight some villagers.
Difficulty : Easy : You have to fight some guys, but you have to be fast or else you'll  fail the mission because your friend will die.
Variety : Decent : actors including Bryan, John, and the villagers. Pickups including a pistol and health. I did not notice any objects used unlike the other missions.
The Game Just Started :
Writing : Excellent : No such mistakes noticed. I encourage the designer to keep up like this. Besides, He's using a good vocabulary.
Presentation : good : Nice use of cutscenes. As everytime, the designer have to ability to well accurate and time them. good work! However, there is not something surprising the player. You just have to watch the cutscenes.
Length : Decent : It can be done in 2 minutes and 19 seconds. It's all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : The player has no chance to play so he must just watch the cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan, Black, and 2 unknown guys. No such objects or pickups used. Only 1 car noticed ingame.
Outro :
Writing : Excellent : Like the previous one, no mistakes found. A good grammar and vocabulary used.
Presentation : Quite good : Like all the missions. Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Good Work! But the only boring thing is the mission is all cutscenes
Length : Too short : It can be done it 30 seconds! It is very short since it is an outro and it is all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : Like the previous mission, the player has no chance to play, only watching cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan and John. Only 1 car in use and 3 pickups found.
 
Overall, I enjoyed playing this storyline. It's so fun to play and comprehensive in general. It has an easy understandable language. But the most thing that I hated is the short missions at the beginning. And especially the cutscene missions. Because it's sometimes boring to play a mission full of cutscenes. The player always want something epic and unique. Taking apart that, everything is fine. Keep it up.
Rating : 7/10

So an AnDReJ98, here's the review of the first episode of TCoBR.
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Welcome Home[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Writing[/color] : [color=#ffa500]very good[/color][/b] : Some typing mistakes but covered with the good language and vocabulary. The idea is easy to understand[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color]: [color=#ffa500]very good[/color] [/b]: Well accurated and timed cutscenes. I especially liked the cutscene that shows the dynamite flying in the air and the explosions with the slow motion cutscene[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color]: [color=#ffa500]decent [/color][/b]: it can be done in 2 minutes. the player takes the role of Brian Robinson going to a hotel in Queens. But he gets out of it because it was destoyed. you don't have the chance to play only once just make your way out of the hotel.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color]: [color=#ffa500]very easy[/color][/b][color=#ffa500] [/color]: you can find a fire extincter to get out of the hotel and there is not much fire to extinct[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety[/color] : [color=#ffa500]Good[/color][/b]: the actors are different, i did not notice similar actors or cars. there is not too much objects including the explosions and fire.[/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Old Chapter[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Writing [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Very good[/color] :[/b] the main idea is comprehensive in general. There's some typing mistakes that can be found in this mission though.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color]:[/b][color=#ffa500][b]Very Good[/b]:[/color] the cutscenes are well accurated and timed. Good choosing for the actors animations.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color]: [color=#ffa500]quite good[/color] :[/b] It could be done in 3 minutes. as Bryan Robinson, You'll be going with your friend John shopping then you'll return home.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Very Easy[/color] [/b]: You have nothing to do but to drive to the supermarket then going back home[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Decent [/color][/b]: there is no pickups. the actors including Bryan and John.[/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]New times, New people[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Writing [/color]:[color=#ffa500] Quite excellent [/color][/b]: better than the first two missions, I can barely notice some mistakes but..that's good! [/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Very good [/color][/b]: As usual, well timed and accurated cutscenes with different animations for actors.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color]: [color=#ffa500]good[/color][/b][color=#ffa500] [/color]: It can be done in 4 minutes and 50 seconds exactly depending on your shooting and driving skills.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Medium [/color][/b]: It's kinda hard to shoot the bottles with the timing, you should be well habituated on shooting unless you'll fail.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Decent [/color]:[/b] there are only one weapon pickup, almost 7 bottle objects. And actors including Bryan, John and the Triads leader.[/font]
[b][size=5][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Confusion[/font][/size][/b]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Writing [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Excellent[/color]:[/b] there are no such mistakes noticed. good language and grammar.The idea is easy to understand. [/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Very Good [/color][/b]: Good scenes and well timed. the animations are well choosen that fits the situation.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Short [/color][/b]: It can be done in 3 minutes and 10 seconds exactly depending on your fighting skills. You have the chance to play only once to defend John against the enemies[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Easy [/color]:[/b] The enemies have a low health, they can be killed easily. Besides, they're equipped with some shovels and bats.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Decent [/color]:[/b]  there are a very small amount of objects ingame. There are only 2 car used but the actors were different including Brian, John, and the enemies.  [/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Little Flashback[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Writing [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Very Good[/color] :[/b] Some spelling mistakes but they're not clear, good language and vocabulary used. That's all.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Quite Good[/color] :[/b] As every time, the designer make the cutscenes well accurated and timed. Also, the animations were good but there is nothing new or surprising.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Short [/color][/b]: It can be done in 2 minutes and 18 seconds exactly. The whole mission is composed of cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficuly[/color] : [color=#ffa500]Easy peasy ![/color][/b] : because you have no chance to play the missions, you just have to watch the cutscenes, which is a very boring thing.[/font]
 [font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety [/color]: [color=#ffa500]Could Be Better [/color][/b]: there are no objects used. Besides, there are only two cars. the actors including Brian and Black[/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Steal the stolen :[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]good [/color][/b]: good writing but with some typing mistakes like "Traids" and "robison"... However it does not affect too much on the idea.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Presentation [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]good [/b][/color]: well accurated and timed cutscenes. there is only one that is not well timed but it is not very important nad not affecting on the idea. Aswell, i liked when you put the rifa gang members surprising you. [/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Length [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]good [/b][/color]: it can be done in 3 minutes and 50 seconds exactly. but can last for 4 minutes or more if you don't find the car so fast. you have to drive to some place, then you have to kill the Rifas and finally bring back woozie's car[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Difficulty [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]quite medium[/b][/color] : the only hard thing (for the normal players) is the low health of the Triad member, if he dies, you lose. That's all.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Variety [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]quite good[/b] [/color]: there is 2 pickups ingame + just one object. The actors including Woozie, the Traids, Brian and the Rifas[/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Complicated victory :[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]very good[/color] [/b]: good language and vocabulary used in the mission. but there are some spelling and typing mistakes. Although, they are not affecting on the main idea.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color][/b]: [color=#ffa500][b]very good[/b][/color] : As usual, the designer knows how to accurate the cutscenes. Besides, I liked the stealth part of this missions in which there are actors surprising the player. Keep it up.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color][/b]: [b][color=#ffa500]quite Long[/color][/b] : it can be done in 10 minutes. You have to steal some files from SF army base and take them to Woozie. Taking out the enemies is the most thing that takes some time to do.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color][/b]: [b][color=#ffa500]Quite hard[/color][/b] : The placed actors have 500 health and high accuracies. So if you get detected, you'll be dead in a few seconds. I couldn't complete this mission only after few tries.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Variety :[/color][color=#ffa500] Very good[/color][/b] : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, the Triads, the army and Da Nang Boys. Pickups including silencer, knife, armor and health. The most thing that i liked in this missions is how good the objects were placed in the ship. And at the end when the whole ship explodes[/font].
[b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][size=5]Party on the ship : [/size][/font][/b]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]Good [/color][/b]: Good writing but always the designer writes instead of "Triads" "Traids". Anyway, in general the grammar was good taking apart some other mistakes[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color][/b]: [b][color=#ffa500]Very good [/color][/b]: Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Also a nice use for them. And I also like the shootout by the helicopter at the beginning. Very amazing presentation.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Length [/color][/b]: [b][color=#ffa500]Very good[/color][/b] : It can be done in 6 minutes and 30 seconds exactly, depending on your skills. You have to kill all the Da Nang Boys to clear the ship. [/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color][/b]: [b][color=#ffa500]Medium [/color][/b]: It's kinda hard to kill all the actors. You shall be carefull because there are some hidden actors, so you must wipe them out slowly to avoid getting killed.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Variety[/b][/color] : [b][color=#ffa500]quite good[/color][/b] : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, The Triads and Da Nang Boyz. I did not notice any pickup while i was playing. In general it was a unique mission.[/font]
[size=5][b][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Cleaning the hood :[/font][/b][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing[/b][/color] : [color=#ffa500][b]very good[/b][/color] : The designer knows how to write correctly taking apart some typing mistakes or some missing letters.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Presentation [/color][/b]:[color=#ffa500] [b]quite good[/b][/color] : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. But the problem is there are not so much action. So there isn't such a surprising or epic things.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Length [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]very good[/color][/b] : it can be done it 6 minutes depending on your fighting and driving skills. You have to drive to Bayside and fight some villagers.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ff0000]Difficulty [/color][/b]: [color=#ffa500][b]Easy [/b][/color]: You have to fight some guys, but you have to be fast or else you'll  fail the mission because your friend will die.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Variety [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]Decent [/b][/color]: actors including Bryan, John, and the villagers. Pickups including a pistol and health. I did not notice any objects used unlike the other missions.[/font]
[size=5][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b]The Game Just Started : [/b][/font][/size]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]Excellent [/color][/b]: No such mistakes noticed. I encourage the designer to keep up like this. Besides, He's using a good vocabulary.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Presentation [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]good [/b][/color]: Nice use of cutscenes. As everytime, the designer have to ability to well accurate and time them. good work! However, there is not something surprising the player. You just have to watch the cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Length [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]Decent [/b][/color]: It can be done in 2 minutes and 19 seconds. It's all cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Difficulty [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]Easy Peasy![/b][/color] : The player has no chance to play so he must just watch the cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Variety [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]Decent [/color][/b]: Actors including Bryan, Black, and 2 unknown guys. No such objects or pickups used. Only 1 car noticed ingame.[/font]
[b][size=5][font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif]Outro : [/font][/size][/b]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Writing[/b][/color] : [b][color=#ffa500]Excellent [/color][/b]: Like the previous one, no mistakes found. A good grammar and vocabulary used.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Presentation [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]Quite good [/b][/color]: Like all the missions. Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Good Work! But the only boring thing is the mission is all cutscenes[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Length [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]Too short[/color][/b] : It can be done it 30 seconds! It is very short since it is an outro and it is all cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Difficulty [/b][/color]: [color=#ffa500][b]Easy Peasy![/b][/color] : Like the previous mission, the player has no chance to play, only watching cutscenes.[/font]
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][color=#ff0000][b]Variety [/b][/color]: [b][color=#ffa500]Decent [/color][/b]: Actors including Bryan and John. Only 1 car in use and 3 pickups found.[/font]
 
[font=lucida sans unicode , 'lucida grande', sans-serif][b][color=#ffd700]Overall, I enjoyed playing this storyline. It's so fun to play and comprehensive in general. It has an easy understandable language. But the most thing that I hated is the short missions at the beginning. And especially the cutscene missions. Because it's sometimes boring to play a mission full of cutscenes. The player always want something epic and unique. Taking apart that, everything is fine. Keep it up.[/color][/b][/font]
[b]Rating : 7/10 [/b]

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Posted 22 June 2014 - 06:56 PM

So an AnDReJ98, here's the review of the first episode of TCoBR.
Welcome Home
Writing : very good : Some typing mistakes but covered with the good language and vocabulary. The idea is easy to understand
Presentation : very good : Well accurated and timed cutscenes. I especially liked the cutscene that shows the dynamite flying in the air and the explosions with the slow motion cutscene
Length : decent : it can be done in 2 minutes. the player takes the role of Brian Robinson going to a hotel in Queens. But he gets out of it because it was destoyed. you don't have the chance to play only once just make your way out of the hotel.
Difficulty : very easy : you can find a fire extincter to get out of the hotel and there is not much fire to extinct
Variety : Good: the actors are different, i did not notice similar actors or cars. there is not too much objects including the explosions and fire.
Old Chapter
Writing : Very good : the main idea is comprehensive in general. There's some typing mistakes that can be found in this mission though.
Presentation :Very Good: the cutscenes are well accurated and timed. Good choosing for the actors animations.
Length : quite good : It could be done in 3 minutes. as Bryan Robinson, You'll be going with your friend John shopping then you'll return home.
Difficulty : Very Easy : You have nothing to do but to drive to the supermarket then going back home
Variety : Decent : there is no pickups. the actors including Bryan and John.
New times, New people
Writing : Quite excellent : better than the first two missions, I can barely notice some mistakes but..that's good!
Presentation : Very good : As usual, well timed and accurated cutscenes with different animations for actors.
Length : good : It can be done in 4 minutes and 50 seconds exactly depending on your shooting and driving skills.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to shoot the bottles with the timing, you should be well habituated on shooting unless you'll fail.
Variety : Decent : there are only one weapon pickup, almost 7 bottle objects. And actors including Bryan, John and the Triads leader.
Confusion
Writing : Excellent: there are no such mistakes noticed. good language and grammar.The idea is easy to understand.
Presentation : Very Good : Good scenes and well timed. the animations are well choosen that fits the situation.
Length : Short : It can be done in 3 minutes and 10 seconds exactly depending on your fighting skills. You have the chance to play only once to defend John against the enemies
Difficulty : Easy : The enemies have a low health, they can be killed easily. Besides, they're equipped with some shovels and bats.
Variety : Decent :  there are a very small amount of objects ingame. There are only 2 car used but the actors were different including Brian, John, and the enemies.  
Little Flashback
Writing : Very Good : Some spelling mistakes but they're not clear, good language and vocabulary used. That's all.
Presentation : Quite Good : As every time, the designer make the cutscenes well accurated and timed. Also, the animations were good but there is nothing new or surprising.
Length : Short : It can be done in 2 minutes and 18 seconds exactly. The whole mission is composed of cutscenes.
Difficuly : Easy peasy ! : because you have no chance to play the missions, you just have to watch the cutscenes, which is a very boring thing.
 Variety : Could Be Better : there are no objects used. Besides, there are only two cars. the actors including Brian and Black
Steal the stolen :
Writing : good : good writing but with some typing mistakes like "Traids" and "robison"... However it does not affect too much on the idea.
Presentation : good : well accurated and timed cutscenes. there is only one that is not well timed but it is not very important nad not affecting on the idea. Aswell, i liked when you put the rifa gang members surprising you. 
Length : good : it can be done in 3 minutes and 50 seconds exactly. but can last for 4 minutes or more if you don't find the car so fast. you have to drive to some place, then you have to kill the Rifas and finally bring back woozie's car
Difficulty : quite medium : the only hard thing (for the normal players) is the low health of the Triad member, if he dies, you lose. That's all.
Variety : quite good : there is 2 pickups ingame + just one object. The actors including Woozie, the Traids, Brian and the Rifas
Complicated victory :
Writing : very good : good language and vocabulary used in the mission. but there are some spelling and typing mistakes. Although, they are not affecting on the main idea.
Presentation : very good : As usual, the designer knows how to accurate the cutscenes. Besides, I liked the stealth part of this missions in which there are actors surprising the player. Keep it up.
Length : quite Long : it can be done in 10 minutes. You have to steal some files from SF army base and take them to Woozie. Taking out the enemies is the most thing that takes some time to do.
Difficulty : Quite hard : The placed actors have 500 health and high accuracies. So if you get detected, you'll be dead in a few seconds. I couldn't complete this mission only after few tries.
Variety : Very good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, the Triads, the army and Da Nang Boys. Pickups including silencer, knife, armor and health. The most thing that i liked in this missions is how good the objects were placed in the ship. And at the end when the whole ship explodes.
Party on the ship :
Writing : Good : Good writing but always the designer writes instead of "Triads" "Traids". Anyway, in general the grammar was good taking apart some other mistakes
Presentation : Very good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Also a nice use for them. And I also like the shootout by the helicopter at the beginning. Very amazing presentation.
Length : Very good : It can be done in 6 minutes and 30 seconds exactly, depending on your skills. You have to kill all the Da Nang Boys to clear the ship.
Difficulty : Medium : It's kinda hard to kill all the actors. You shall be carefull because there are some hidden actors, so you must wipe them out slowly to avoid getting killed.
Variety : quite good : Actors including Bryan, Woozie, The Triads and Da Nang Boyz. I did not notice any pickup while i was playing. In general it was a unique mission.
Cleaning the hood :
Writing : very good : The designer knows how to write correctly taking apart some typing mistakes or some missing letters.
Presentation : quite good : Well timed and accurated cutscenes. But the problem is there are not so much action. So there isn't such a surprising or epic things.
Length : very good : it can be done it 6 minutes depending on your fighting and driving skills. You have to drive to Bayside and fight some villagers.
Difficulty : Easy : You have to fight some guys, but you have to be fast or else you'll  fail the mission because your friend will die.
Variety : Decent : actors including Bryan, John, and the villagers. Pickups including a pistol and health. I did not notice any objects used unlike the other missions.
The Game Just Started :
Writing : Excellent : No such mistakes noticed. I encourage the designer to keep up like this. Besides, He's using a good vocabulary.
Presentation : good : Nice use of cutscenes. As everytime, the designer have to ability to well accurate and time them. good work! However, there is not something surprising the player. You just have to watch the cutscenes.
Length : Decent : It can be done in 2 minutes and 19 seconds. It's all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : The player has no chance to play so he must just watch the cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan, Black, and 2 unknown guys. No such objects or pickups used. Only 1 car noticed ingame.
Outro : 
Writing : Excellent : Like the previous one, no mistakes found. A good grammar and vocabulary used.
Presentation : Quite good : Like all the missions. Well timed and accurated cutscenes. Good Work! But the only boring thing is the mission is all cutscenes
Length : Too short : It can be done it 30 seconds! It is very short since it is an outro and it is all cutscenes.
Difficulty : Easy Peasy! : Like the previous mission, the player has no chance to play, only watching cutscenes.
Variety : Decent : Actors including Bryan and John. Only 1 car in use and 3 pickups found.
 
Overall, I enjoyed playing this storyline. It's so fun to play and comprehensive in general. It has an easy understandable language. But the most thing that I hated is the short missions at the beginning. And especially the cutscene missions. Because it's sometimes boring to play a mission full of cutscenes. The player always want something epic and unique. Taking apart that, everything is fine. Keep it up.
Rating : 7/10 

 

Fixed it for you.

I'll play your missions when I have time, it looks interesting.


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Posted 22 June 2014 - 07:20 PM

Thank you for the review & tips. The Street Life (new EFSF story) is in the progress.


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Posted 22 June 2014 - 07:24 PM

I was thinking of play this but I couldn't find the download link on the main topic, so i thought it's not released yet, now that I saw that one of these stories are released, I'll give it a try tommorow since ill go to sleep now :S


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Posted 22 June 2014 - 07:56 PM

Oh, another mistake from me. I wanted to make topics in a row, but new forum update didn't allow me. Anyway, since you like storyline feature (like me), i suggest you to download Episode 1 & 2 since they are storylines.


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Posted 23 June 2014 - 02:19 PM

Started playing the storyline, haven't finished it yet though. So far like it, especially your effort added into cutscenes. The intro scene near the hotel was simply epic! Though the dialogue feels a little fake, that's what bothered me the most. Neverthless, i'm genuinely enjoying this storyline.


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Posted 28 June 2014 - 06:24 PM

Played the whoie thing, I liked it, thought the dialogue mostly felt very faked and there were lots of plotholes. I give it a 7/10 :)


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Posted 28 June 2014 - 06:47 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 28 June 2014 - 06:47 PM.

Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to improve on this, though plot, actually idea could not be a big problem, but implementing it and connecting to the missions sometimes goes out of path. That's my old problem, anyway thanks!


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Posted 25 July 2014 - 09:08 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 25 July 2014 - 09:08 PM.

Update:

 

The Street Life has been in progress lately. Five new missions have been released, more informations you can find at wiki page on main post.

 

Also, it's recommended to load progress (or start normal non-DYOM game) before playing those missions. It will cause spawning gangs on the streets like in original San Andreas. It will also add the feel of missions.

Storyline will be published once all missions for episode 1 are done.

 

Play, give feedback and rate!


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Posted 25 July 2014 - 09:34 PM

Great, awesome! Gonna play them later and give you feedback! I'm now working on my MP "Wrongfully Accused". Goodluck!  :lol:


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Posted 26 July 2014 - 12:40 PM

Great, awesome, fantastic MP AnDReJ98, I can't wait to play The Street Life as soon as I'm done with TCoBR.





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