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AdamArtz
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Posted 06 May 2014 - 06:35 PM Edited by AdamArtz, 08 June 2014 - 05:35 PM.

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(Not sure if the picture is working)

 

 

This is not like the movie :p

 

Status: Work In Progress, need to finish Chapter 2

 

 

Plot:

I really don't know how to explain this. 

Four characters (beside two), not aware of each other meet each other through a spoiler I cannot write.

 

Shannon: One of the main protagonists who lives in Vinewood. He works for Allen.

Allen: Shannon's "boss" friend. Allen is a car racer who owns a big ass industry at Ocean Docks. 

Gerard: A car racer as well. He lives in Las Venturas and owns a factory which gets shut down by Las Venturas' mayor. He has a "slight" cry problem where he runs into his bedroom and cries his lungs out. Happens when he gets declined offers.

Gabriel: FBI Agent who lives in San Fierro and is requested to pick up Las Venturas' mayor from the airport.

 

Antagonist:

Las Venturas' Mayor: Main villain. He is evil and he kills people at nights without others to know. He flies to San Fierro and Los Santos to talk to their mayors about his vicious plan on getting all car racers and drifters out of San Andreas and hell maybe even kill them all.

 

Missions:

Chapter 1:

Days -

DYOM site: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31947

 

Loko - DYOM site:

 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31950

 

Gold - DYOM site:

 http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31971

 

 

Hounded -

 

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32070

 

 

This Sorrowful Life - 

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32416

 

Corrupted -

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32417

 

Internment -

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32418

 

Gravedigger -

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32425

 

Chapter 2:

 

 

Allen's Story -

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32445

 

Gabriel's Story -

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32446

 

Gerard's Story -

DYOM site:

 

 

Shannon's Story -

DYOM site:

 

 

You Already Know What You Are -

DYOM site:

 

 

Breaking In and Out (Part 1) -

DYOM site:

 

 

Breaking In and Out (Part 2) - 

DYOM site:

 

 

Breaking In and Out (Part 3) - 

DYOM site:

 

 

Breaking In and Out (Part 4 and final) - 

DYOM site: 


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Posted 06 May 2014 - 07:20 PM

It looks great bro I should try it and give you feedback :)

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Posted 06 May 2014 - 07:22 PM

It looks great bro I should try it and give you feedback :)

Thanks mate :)


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Posted 06 May 2014 - 10:57 PM

I played the first chapter and it was good, needs kind of work but it was good. Just keep it up!

 

3/5


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Posted 07 May 2014 - 06:07 AM

I play your first mission nice 4 stars waiting for next one :)


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Posted 07 May 2014 - 07:26 AM Edited by AdamArtz, 07 May 2014 - 07:29 AM.

I played the first chapter and it was good, needs kind of work but it was good. Just keep it up!

 

3/5

Thanks mate :) And just out of interest, where did it need work?

 

I play your first mission nice 4 stars waiting for next one :)

Thanks man :)

 

 

Mission #2 - Loko - is out now. http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31950


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Posted 08 May 2014 - 12:09 PM

Mission #3 - Gold - is out now.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31971


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Posted 13 May 2014 - 02:51 PM

Sorry for the delay but mission #4 Hounded is out now and I updated links because of the DYOM problem. (Still uploaded the mission to DYOM if it works for others)

DYOM site:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32070

 

MediaFire:

https://www.mediafir...zjjnfx4484v7ja2

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 02:57 PM

Hey! Bro i'll check your mission its looks good :)

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 03:50 PM

Hey! Bro i'll check your mission its looks good :)

But you already did XD


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Posted 13 May 2014 - 06:13 PM

Hey bro if you want to make your topic unique add some screenshots of your mission so your topic looks great :santa:

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Posted 13 May 2014 - 07:30 PM

Alright, played a bit (first 4 missions), the introductions of each the characters were good, but while i'm playing 4th mission, i found some of things which revisions are needed :

1. I called "Robot" Enemies, Even a player equipped with M4, facing the enemies with strongest health are so unrealistic (unless if you can say that they're juggernaut...)

2. Far distance, Driving from Desert to Los Santos with Sentinel. Perhaps some player can sleep while driving...

 

And every missions were seems short, next time if you can make your mission longer (but not driving with long distance), it will be more interesting...

Hope you can make better mission soon :)

 

3/5


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Posted 14 May 2014 - 04:14 AM

Alright, played a bit (first 4 missions), the introductions of each the characters were good, but while i'm playing 4th mission, i found some of things which revisions are needed :

1. I called "Robot" Enemies, Even a player equipped with M4, facing the enemies with strongest health are so unrealistic (unless if you can say that they're juggernaut...)

2. Far distance, Driving from Desert to Los Santos with Sentinel. Perhaps some player can sleep while driving...

 

And every missions were seems short, next time if you can make your mission longer (but not driving with long distance), it will be more interesting...

Hope you can make better mission soon :)

 

3/5

 

I have to say the 4th mission wasn't my idea and I had something else in mind. 

I like to keep some of them short, it's 'cause the plot won't go anywhere xD


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Posted 14 May 2014 - 10:38 AM

Goodluck with it, I'll play them when i'll get some time.  :^:


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Posted 14 May 2014 - 12:51 PM

Goodluck with it, I'll play them when i'll get some time.  :^:

Thanks man :) 


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Posted 07 June 2014 - 01:10 PM

OP updated with:

Final mission being splitted into four parts.

Removed MediaFire links because the DYOM site problem has been fixed.

 

What's new:

The final mission 'Gravedigger' will be online in a few hours.

Three new missions have been released.

This Sorrowful Life:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32416

 

Corrupted:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32417

 

Internment:

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32418


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Posted 07 June 2014 - 02:59 PM

I should play your new mission and give you feedback :)

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Posted 07 June 2014 - 03:46 PM

Final mission of Chapter 1, Gravedigger, has been released online.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32425

Have fun.

Chapter 2's first two missions will be released tomorrow. Going on a fast phase.


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Posted 08 June 2014 - 05:35 PM

Allen's Story and Gabriel's Story is up.

Allen: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32445

Gabriel: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32446





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