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MadMarshMallow
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Posted 05 May 2014 - 05:10 AM Edited by MadMarshMallow, 10 July 2014 - 10:54 PM.

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STATUS : DROPPED

 

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Hello guys, it's been 3 months(I guess..) since my last post in this forums, and finally.. I'm coming back to design some more missions before it's too late. I'll start from a scratch and so here's it.. my newly made mission pack. Play with the soundtrack for the better experiences. Enjoy.

 

 

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The story is set at the state of San Andreas, where crimes spread all over the towns. Clair Whitaker is a man who has devoted his life to be a private
investigator for his whole life. He has solved many cases than any other detectives in the state, giving him the award, "The Most Successful" by the
president.

Once again, a homicide happened on a fine night. But this time, it's not just like some other cases, it's a case that will be put his skills to the test. Clair will face
unexpected challenges that will be his greater struggle.

 

 

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Clair Whitaker
Just married a week ago to a girl named Ivy Pearson. He's the most successful detective in San Andreas that's trusted by the Police Department to solve the mysteries.

Duncan Boyd
Old friend of Clair and just retired from his unprogressing career to join Clair in his adventures. They've been a partner for 3 months.

Reyes Larsen
Detective of LVPD that's been doing a tour in Los Santos about the crimes rate. He's one of the popular investigator.

 

 

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CHAPTER 1

1.Prologue: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31917

2.Weeping Spirits: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31960


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#2

Posted 05 May 2014 - 05:14 AM

Welcome back again TripleM. Looking forwards to it!  :^:


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 05:16 AM

Err.. I don't understand the plot?


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 05:31 AM

@KD Himan Thanks, dude. Don't forget to put your feedbacks.

 

@Chips It's unclear? Hmm....

 

This topic is kinda messed up 'cause I'm in such a hurry. Will modify it later. Thanks for checking up this mission pack.


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 06:04 AM Edited by Boris The Vodka, 05 May 2014 - 06:04 AM.

Err.. I don't understand the plot?

The plot is about a private investigator who has been claimed 'The Most Successful' by President himself. The rest must be clear, I think.


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 07:58 AM

Awesome man! Will try soon. 


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 09:02 AM Edited by KD himan, 05 May 2014 - 09:03 AM.

Off Topic : Sorry couldn't download the SD because my internet haven't ability to download 6 MB! soon i'll get a good modem with good internet. 

On topic : I played the mission without SD, IDK how it'll feel with playing sounds you give me. anyway, the mission was pretty nice, object placing for every clue was perfect and english was very nice, the presentation was very amazing for e.g That broken bobcat and deadbody indicates the realistic crime scene. cool. i am waiting for upcoming once.

 

4/10. :^:  

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Posted 05 May 2014 - 01:05 PM

Sounds interesting :) Looking forward to it!


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 05:25 PM

Off Topic : Sorry couldn't download the SD because my internet haven't ability to download 6 MB! soon i'll get a good modem with good internet. 

On topic : I played the mission without SD, IDK how it'll feel with playing sounds you give me. anyway, the mission was pretty nice, object placing for every clue was perfect and english was very nice, the presentation was very amazing for e.g That broken bobcat and deadbody indicates the realistic crime scene. cool. i am waiting for upcoming once.

 

4/10. :^:  

The mission was excelent, but you gave it a 4 ? lol


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 07:50 PM

Welcome back TripleM,looking forward to this!


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Posted 05 May 2014 - 08:03 PM

Will play it later. Anyway, it's good to see you back, i hope you will stay here little longer!


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#12

Posted 06 May 2014 - 12:22 AM

Looks really nice, good job!


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Posted 06 May 2014 - 05:42 AM Edited by Shahonix, 06 May 2014 - 04:10 PM.

I'm playing this ;)

 

Edit :

 

Played the Prologue. It was awesome. Your choice of music really fits into the situation. Your creativity using objects and camera angles are pure awesomeness. 4.5/5 :^:

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Posted 06 May 2014 - 08:53 AM

 

Off Topic : Sorry couldn't download the SD because my internet haven't ability to download 6 MB! soon i'll get a good modem with good internet. 

On topic : I played the mission without SD, IDK how it'll feel with playing sounds you give me. anyway, the mission was pretty nice, object placing for every clue was perfect and english was very nice, the presentation was very amazing for e.g That broken bobcat and deadbody indicates the realistic crime scene. cool. i am waiting for upcoming once.

 

4/10. :^:  

The mission was excelent, but you gave it a 4 ? lol

 

Oh i am really sorry, that was a very idiotic mistake, it is out of 5 Lol.


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Posted 06 May 2014 - 10:15 PM

Thanks for a warm welcome, guys. And yes, Andrej. I'm staying here for a while before the start of my university life. :D

 

@KD himan If it was 4/10, I would be mad for real. (I'm kidding.. ;) ) And that was a pretty long feedback from you. Thanks a lot.

 

@Shahinix Long time no see, Shark. Appreciated the high rating, though.


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#16

Posted 06 May 2014 - 10:54 PM

Awesome dude!

I'm glad that one of the best designers came back with a new MP

I played the first chapter and I was impressed, keep up the good work man :)


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Posted 08 May 2014 - 03:22 AM Edited by MadMarshMallow, 08 May 2014 - 03:23 AM.

2nd mission uploaded! Play and enjoy! Feedback is appreciated!

 

@Martin Thanks for playing, Martin. :)


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Posted 08 May 2014 - 10:22 AM

I play your first and second mission both are amazing and awesome I really like the story 5/5 Stars :) waiting for next mission :santa:


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Posted 09 May 2014 - 10:16 PM

@Huzaifa Thanks for the feedback and rating. Stay tuned for the upcoming mission.





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