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Posted 24 March 2014 - 07:36 AM Edited by ProDX34, 16 June 2014 - 09:42 AM.


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Hello everyone, This is my (standard) topic about the progress of The Proving of Dead Mission pack, be sure to comment and rate for feedback and improvements for better designing on the next part later, also you can suggest what kind of missions you wanted in here or comment about the missions
Sorry about the grammatical, i'm not so good about English so mistake may can be happened
 
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The story was begins from a profesional named Tony Lucas who going to Los Santos to meet his best friend Gerry Tobias and find another new life, while Tony's had a work in Liberty City years ago, suddenly he received a message that his mother has been killed by unknown subject, so Tony and Gerry will investigate with their own way to find the truth about the murderer of Tony's mother death
 
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Chapter 1 = Stayin' in Los Santos
Part 1..... 99%
Part 2..... 99%
Part 3..... 99%
Chapter 2 = Moving to San Fierro
Part 4..... 0%
(Part 4 may will continued if there enough feedback for part 3)
 
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This character list will kept up to date along with new part released
Protagonist
 
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Tony Lucas
 
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Gerry Tobias
 
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Angel Carliano
 
Currently Friends
 
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Alayna Mclaine
 
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Philip Mclaine (Dead)
 
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Nardo Jackson
 
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Carl Smith
 
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Tony's Father
 
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Bruno
 
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Cavalos Gang Member
 
Currently Neutral
 
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Mexican Ballers Gang
 
Currently Enemies
 
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Mercenary Gang : Ballas
 
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Mercenary Gang : Grove Street Families
 
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Russian Mafia
 
Antagonist
 
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Darco Forntzer
 
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Lian Benton
 
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Kent Reynold (Dead)
 
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Tony's Mother Murderer
 
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Part 1
Part 2
Spoiler
Part 3
 
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Part 1
 
Mission = 9
Objectives = 701
Actors = 462
Vehicles = 113
Pickups = 8
objects = 134
 
Part 2

 
Mission = 9
Objectives = 873
Actors = 715
Vehicles = 195
Pickups = 23
objects = 310
 
Part 3
 

Mission = 10
Objectives = 971
Actors = 748
Vehicles = 174
Pickups = 35
objects = 359
 
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Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Spoiler
Chapter #1 Complete Pack 
The Proving of Dead Chapter #1 Full Packhttp://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32579
 
Future Update
- TPOD mission Add-ons : Infection of Los Santos
 
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Special Thanks to :
Rockstar Games for this awesome game
PatrickW & Dutchy3010 for publishing this amazing modification
DYOM Users and Designers for playing this mission

Huzaifa khan
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#2

Posted 24 March 2014 - 07:59 AM

Wow! Looks amazing topic bro I'll play your missions :)

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Posted 24 March 2014 - 08:04 AM

Target13Productions talked about this in designers lounge. Good to see you're spreading your missions to GTAForums. Will try later. 


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Posted 24 March 2014 - 01:45 PM

Going 2 Try It :)

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Posted 24 March 2014 - 01:56 PM

So I've played the first 5 missions (excluding the very first) and so far there are two things that have really impressed me:

 

1. The cutscene angles. To be honest, I haven't seen beautiful angles like yours in a long while.

2. The race. And the one you've created is undoubtedly the best one I've seen in three years of playing DYOM missions. The routes are perfect, the track is chosen wisely. It's also great because of number of participants (around 10-12).

 

One thing you need to improve is your English. It's not the worst I've seen though, but the mistakes that you make are... stupid.

 

But overall this mission pack certainly needs to get more attention.


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Posted 25 March 2014 - 03:59 AM Edited by ProDX34, 25 March 2014 - 04:02 AM.

One thing you need to improve is your English. It's not the worst I've seen though, but the mistakes that you make are... stupid.

 

That's the main thing that i've currently trying to improve so sorry about this, but anyway thanks for the reviews :)


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Posted 25 March 2014 - 01:05 PM

Awesome,Amazing Missions :)

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Posted 25 March 2014 - 02:13 PM

Ok! Played the first 8 missions. the punctuality was not so good and English was a bit .. um you can say grammatical missions i had found. Overall, the usage of Objects, cars in Race mission, every actor were good. i found a bug - 

 

I think its 7th mission where we have to burn mexican ballers pig pan club. after beating every ballers, we have to burn out those whores. on that point, there is only 1 person left there to kill, but he is not outside the club nor inside the interior. i found everywhere carefully.


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Posted 26 March 2014 - 05:41 AM

I think its 7th mission where we have to burn mexican ballers pig pan club. after beating every ballers, we have to burn out those whores. on that point, there is only 1 person left there to kill, but he is not outside the club nor inside the interior. i found everywhere carefully.

Hmm... when i've testing 7th mission many times, it should be running fine, didn't found any kind of bug like this but i'll keep watching this one and trying to fix it when possible... 


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Posted 26 March 2014 - 09:31 PM

Ok, played a bit. First, this is awesome, story is great and missions that really fits the story are unique and varied. Cutscene & visual effects are perfect. You're very original designer, it's like every missions has it's mini story that fits actual story. It felt like another game (plus story is better than GTA V's story for now), and second mission is the best race mission i've ever seen, perfect routes and police blockades, i just can't say more. For future, make parts in zip file so lazy people like me can download all missions in one pack! Anyway good luck!

 

Story - 4.5/5 (some grammar errors and sometimes little off topic but it's great!)

 

Gameplay 4.8/5

 

Cutscene/Visual/Animations - 5/5

 

Variety in missions - 5/5

 

Overall - 4.8/5


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Posted 30 March 2014 - 04:23 PM

I played all missions, and my favourite is that race.. I just, keep playing it over and over again. You did great job, I have to admit. It's deffinetly the best race I have ever played. Other missions are great too. Just, practice a bit on your English. 5/5 from me.


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Posted 31 March 2014 - 09:18 PM

I like your missions, but please don't use the phrase noob, 'cause it's only used in gaming (plus if you called a criminal a noob he would smash your head on your car's hood). Anyways, everything else was fine, just there's not that much shooting action, more like a fighting game.







BTW: You got that Buffalo mod on Gamemodding.net eh? I have the same mod :D.


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Posted 01 April 2014 - 01:04 PM Edited by ProDX34, 08 April 2014 - 08:39 PM.

But please don't use the phrase noob, 

 Ye i recognize it but i'm too lazy to change that phrase, but i think it isn't much problem


BTW: You got that Buffalo mod on Gamemodding.net eh? I have the same mod :D.

Maybe,because i forget where i download that buffalo mod lol :p

 

And Thanks for the great feedback AndreJ and everyone, it's really impress me up :D


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Posted 11 April 2014 - 11:41 AM

I've completed TPOD Part 1. Really impressive! I like the story and the environments you used. What i very like was the cutscenes and the camera settings. The angle, distance, and height. You've calculated it with really good :D
Also, the gameplay of each mission wasn't making bored. Everything is neat! 

This is kind of mission i've been looking for!

My favourite part was the last one (when Tony was about to kill all the russians). Don't worry about rates, i will rate each mission of TPOD Part 1. Keep it good, man! :)

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Posted 14 April 2014 - 06:35 AM

The Proving of Dead Part 2 is finally completed, check the first topic for the links of the missions, Please download, have fun, and comment... :)

 

I've decided to make some little change about the main topic but who's care?!

- Removed Achievements because it seems not useful

- Added Statistic

 

i'm currently designing missions for TPOD Part 3 but I've paused it, because i looking forward for more comments and feedbacks about TPOD part 2 first, Until it's had enough then i'll continue it


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Posted 14 April 2014 - 12:07 PM

Those mission were good, VERY good (besides those grammar issues, but it'll fix when time passes). The only problem is the last mission of Part 2.

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Posted 15 April 2014 - 02:08 PM

Say hello to time as it passes you :beerhat:


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Posted 16 April 2014 - 05:00 AM Edited by ProDX34, 16 April 2014 - 05:03 AM.

The only problem is the last mission of Part 2.

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It's strange..., i mean... i had testing many times in my MP especially this mission, and about sniping part, well... it's tricky but it's still be able to completed, I have set Tony and Gerry health to 500 so it have a better time to kill all enemies

 

EDIT : Maybe there's something i forgot which bug can be occurred, i'll try fix this soon


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Posted 02 May 2014 - 10:34 AM

Alright... after long time enough Part 2 released. It's time for The Proving of Dead Part 3

Here some Screenshots of TPOD Part 3, The last chapter in Los Santos...

 

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The Proving of Dead Part 3 is still in progress, Trailer and Mission Pack will be published in this month, so stay tuned...

 

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Posted 02 May 2014 - 11:40 AM

Great Screenshots bro awesome :)


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Posted 29 May 2014 - 07:34 PM

Late Update :

 

Added a Trailer of The Proving of Dead Part 3, Mission Pack will be ready for published at Middle or early of June, so stay tuned...

 

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Posted 30 May 2014 - 10:36 AM

Realy Great Topic Waiting For more Missions 


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Posted 31 May 2014 - 11:03 AM

Yeah, really liked the missions so far, everything is so well done.

The only thing that could be improved on is English. 

 

I will definitely play part 3, it was very enjoyable so far


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Posted 31 May 2014 - 04:03 PM

Yeah, really liked the missions so far, everything is so well done.

The only thing that could be improved on is English. 

 

I will definitely play part 3, it was very enjoyable so far

Real thanks for your comment, but i'm sorry for bad English in previous parts... i'll try to improve it in next part.


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Posted 01 June 2014 - 10:27 AM

I just played the first part

Basically, the wrong part in your missions are only the grammar. Not trying to be Nazis here, but hey, who will understand English in such a wrong grammar ? And also, those uppercase and lowercase letters which make me crazy about it (lol jk, a bit annoying but well...)

Anyway, other than that, BEAUTIFUL. The story, cutscene angles, moving cameras, mission, animation, objects, and other elements of the mission, they are EXCELLENT. I give 8.5/10 for this part, recomendded for you all

And just want to ask, in the 1st mission, isn't the car supposed to move when Toby introduced Los Santos ?

And in Indonesia,
Kerja bagus, bro. Lanjut terus ! :) (Good work, bro. Keep it going)

Cheers

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Posted 04 June 2014 - 10:55 AM

I just played the first part

Basically, the wrong part in your missions are only the grammar. Not trying to be Nazis here, but hey, who will understand English in such a wrong grammar ? And also, those uppercase and lowercase letters which make me crazy about it (lol jk, a bit annoying but well...)

Anyway, other than that, BEAUTIFUL. The story, cutscene angles, moving cameras, mission, animation, objects, and other elements of the mission, they are EXCELLENT. I give 8.5/10 for this part, recomendded for you all

And just want to ask, in the 1st mission, isn't the car supposed to move when Toby introduced Los Santos ?

And in Indonesia,
Kerja bagus, bro. Lanjut terus ! :) (Good work, bro. Keep it going)

Cheers

Thanks for your comment, but about grammar issue, well... you can say that since i admitted there's lot of mistake grammars in previous part because i'm too lazy to fix them all but it'll may improved a bit in part by part.

And again, thanks for your great feedback, be sure to check out part 3 when it released...

 

About your asking, Car suppose to be moved when Gerry make conversation with Tony, if it bug then i'll check it later (and again, it's Tony, not Toby (Minecraft player from mcspotlight))

 

Indonesia :

Terima kasih atas komentarnya, aku akan berusaha untuk bagian selanjutnya (Thanks for your comment, i'll try to improve for the next part)

 

:)


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Posted 05 June 2014 - 03:55 AM

Added New Characters and Gangs in OP, Those will be showed up in Part 3.

Character :

-Bruno

-Darco Forntzer

-Lian Benton

 

Gang :

-Cavalos Gang Member

-Grove Street Families

-Ballas


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Posted 06 June 2014 - 03:56 PM

Unexpected news. Tomorrow, i'll decide to release the whole missions of The Proving of Dead Part 3.

 

So... for the beginning, the first mission has been released!

 

A New Beginning


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Posted 06 June 2014 - 04:13 PM

Unexpected news. Tomorrow, i'll decide to release the whole missions of The Proving of Dead Part 3.

 

So... for the beginning, the first mission has been released!

 

A New Beginning

Oh man, can't wait to play it. Expect a feedback soon.


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Posted 06 June 2014 - 04:52 PM Edited by AnDReJ98, 06 June 2014 - 04:52 PM.

Played A New Beginning. When i compare part 1 & 2 i can see you focused more on story in part 2, what's better for mp started like this IMO. This mission (like all of you) has greatly cutscene & animations, in that category i'd give you 5/5.

 

While i didn't like the shooting with ballas. I mean, i killed them all at first, but for some players it would be petty hard. You gave us pistol, while most of them had AK-47, and their health was 250, while player don't even have a good cover. Anyway, it turned to be good. More story focused, with great animations & cutscene. While there were some grammar mistakes, i really didn't mind them since i could understand everything, and i sometimes do same, too lazy to fix it so nevermind.

 

And one more thing, if you wanted to keep characters secret in cutscene, you already showed his face (boss), i suggest you to set camera position more down next time. Anyhow, this is just small tip. Good work and good luck!

 

Overall: 4.5/5





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