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KD himan
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Posted 12 March 2014 - 08:30 AM Edited by KD himan, 14 March 2014 - 05:49 AM.

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                                                                                                ''Fight Like A Thunder, Drive like a Hawk!''

                                                                                                           

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                           This is my New Mission Pack based on Biker's Theme. The Mexican Cartel is still in Progress, but i need a brake from it 

                           And i made this one. i hope you all will like this. Missions are still in progress so i will publish them as soon as possible.

                                                                                            Please sorry for my Bad English.

 

 

                                                                                        Status ---- Not completed

 

 

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                           Sean Thompson, Leader of the The Thunder hawks Motercycle club were ambushed by unknown troops of CFA Agents in

                            Liberty city. Unfortunately His Dad Joseph Thompson Died in the Fight. after that accident, forcefully they have to move

                             in San Fierro to recruit their Club. now they are living in Bay side from past 2 Months. Sean's young brother, Kratos

                             Thompson was also grew up and most of the responsibility were on him. But He didn't know how long they have to 

                                                            Suffer in San fierro to grow up his Club as a tribute to his Father.

 

 

 

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                                                                                             Coming Soon. ( Work in Progress )

 

 

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                                                                                                  1. Kratos Thompson ( Zigzag )

                                                                             

                            Description - The Main Protagonist of the Story. He is one of the playable Character in Story. 

                                                                                                       

                                                                                                          Status - Alive                                  

 

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                                                                                                   2. Sean Thompson ( Maccer )

                           

                            Description - Kratos's elder brother. He owns the T.H.H Mothercycle club ( leader ) suffered from Ambush in VC

                                                    And settled down in San Fierro for their Club.

                                         

                                                                                                          Status - Alive                  

 

 

                      ________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

                                                                                                  3. Mike Gabriel ( Ozey )

 

                           Description - The Co. Leader of Thunder Hawks. he is a good friend of Maccer and very responsible person of the

                                                   Club. he mostly delivers supplies to G-Ball and other imports and exports.

 

                                                                                                          Status - Alive

 

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                                                                                                  4. ​Joseph Thompson

 

                           Description - The deceased Captain of the Thunder hawks Club. he is also father of Sean and Kratos. He was Died

                                                    in an ambush by CFA Agents in Vice city.

 

                                                                                                          Status - ​Deceased 

 

 

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                                                                                                  5. Leon Henry G-Ball )

 

                           Description - The most trusted supplier of T.H.H club. if you need any Weapon, armor or shelter, just call him for it.

                                                  he will come in his Van with supplies and you have pay him and get your stuff. seen in many missions.

        

                                                                                                          Status - Alive

 

 

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                                                                                                  6. John Carter ( Jester )

                           

                           Description - He will be seen after more time. he is a friend of Zigsaw and also helps him to works, supplies, gang wars

                                                  and a backstabber for officer Arnold James.

 

                                                                                                         Status - Alive

 

 

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                                                                                                 7. Oscar Fa Li ( The Snake )

                        

                          Description - he is the leader of San Fierro Da Nang Triad, never knows how to attend a perfect deal. always lose their

                                                  every Gangwar but still lives like a King.

 

                                                                                                         Status - Alive

 

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                                                                                                 8. Mike Mendez ( T - Bone )

 

                         Description - One of the dangerous gang's leader, San Fierro Rifas. messing with him is like calling your Death come to you.

 

                                                                                                         Status - Alive

 

                    _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

 

 

                                                                                                9. Officer arnold James

 

                         Description - The ''Copman'' of san fierro. the responsibility from mayer to protect the city is in his hands. some have spoof

                                                   that he was the cause of Zigsaw's Father's death.

 

                                                                                                          Status - Alive

 

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                                                                                               10. Suximu ( Si )

 

                         Description - The Leader of San Fierro Triads after the Death of Wu Zi Mu. occupations are selling drugs, black markets and

                                                other stuffs too.

    

                                                                                                         Status - Alive

 

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                                                  ( Note - Friendly characters were coloured in CYAN while enemies are in YELLOW.

 

 

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                                                                                      Not updated Yet ( Will be soon )

 

 

                                                   

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                                                                                               #1 - Greezed with Pig 

 

                                   

 

 

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                              Topic is not completed yet so please don't harsh. i know that this time topic is looking kinda empty.

                                                           In most of the missions, you will be given AK47 for better accuracy.

                                                                                           contains hard language.

                                                                 English may be not so good but still understandable.

                                                  The Missions will take some time maybe because of my PC Problems. 

                                                                                  Feel free to report any Bug / Glitches.

 

 

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                                                                         Me ( for making missions with Headers and Logo )

 

                                                                                               Chips237 for reviews

                                                                                            

                                                                                                    Mission 1

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KD himan
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#2

Posted 12 March 2014 - 08:38 AM

''Topic Under Construction.''


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#3

Posted 12 March 2014 - 08:39 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 12 March 2014 - 08:40 AM.

Hey! KD this (MP) thunder hawks looks great and awesome i know you tell about this MP in FB Good Luck bro :) :happy:
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#4

Posted 12 March 2014 - 01:19 PM

Sounds intersesting enough. I'll try as soon as you've started the mission :)

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#5

Posted 12 March 2014 - 03:46 PM

Smells Nice....I Will Play For Sure :)
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#6

Posted 12 March 2014 - 03:48 PM

 @ Huzaifa - Thank you very much for feedback.

 

@ Grovallas - Thanks for response. yeh, this is going to be better.

 

@ DChumber - Thanks for reply, missions will be uploaded soon as possible.


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#7

Posted 13 March 2014 - 02:55 AM

Yeah KD its Looking Great I Like It The Story Is Amazing Great :D

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#8

Posted 13 March 2014 - 03:15 AM

Hey Keshav, this is looking great, definitely I'm gonna try it when it comes out :)

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#9

Posted 13 March 2014 - 06:26 AM

Nice Topic Bro

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#10

Posted 13 March 2014 - 10:28 AM Edited by KD himan, 13 March 2014 - 10:50 AM.

Thanks everyone for response. Update! First mission Increased!
 
Mission Name - Greezed with Pig
 
Mission Difficulty - Easy
 
Mission Link - Click Here
 
Mission Data -  Objectives - 86
                           Actors - 35
                           Objects - 07
                           Cars - 09
                           Pickups - 01
 
Mission Blueprint - Warning! Spoiler
 
                                                                                                  Mission Walkthrough -

 

                               


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:17 PM

I'd really suggest you turn this into a storyline and release it in a storyline format instead of mission pack. We really lack some good storylines apart from The Flats, and this seems like this could be a great one as well, but making it a mission pack somehow kills it :/


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#12

Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:26 PM

I would change the tagline because hawk is a bird and birds... don't drive, they fly. Except you've meant it to be some kind of metaphor.


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Posted 13 March 2014 - 01:41 PM Edited by KD himan, 13 March 2014 - 01:41 PM.

@Rytuklis - Thanks for your nice complement but i know if i turn it into a storyline, some people do not play it much because people get board by driving in freeroam, so thats why i choose it as a Mission.

 

I would change the tagline because hawk is a bird and birds... don't drive, they fly.

 

I don't know that you will take that quote and MP Name serious. i named it because it suits on Biker clubs. so in club ''Angels of Death'', Angles does not drive, they  also only fly.


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#14

Posted 14 March 2014 - 03:02 AM

Sorry for double post, but please guys response how is my first mission? i'll greatly appreciate your comments.


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#15

Posted 14 March 2014 - 05:31 AM

I actually kind of agree with making this as a storyline. It would be nice to cruise around Bayside with those bikes.


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#16

Posted 14 March 2014 - 08:31 AM

 

so in club ''Angels of Death'', Angles does not drive, they  also only fly.

Well AoD didn't have a stupid tagline as some kind of their motto, while the MC presented in your MP supposedly does.


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Posted 14 March 2014 - 08:39 AM

Great Dhiman your first mission is amazing :) I'm waiting for your next mission Good Luck  :^:


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Posted 14 March 2014 - 09:39 AM Edited by KD himan, 14 March 2014 - 09:41 AM.

 

 

so in club ''Angels of Death'', Angles does not drive, they  also only fly.

Well AoD didn't have a stupid tagline as some kind of their motto, while the MC presented in your MP supposedly does.

 

I am not genius in making taglines. but still that was my first attempt, and i think it is stupid only for you because other designers/player are not fighting for these ''little'' things in presentation, the only thing they want to play and comment the missions.

 

@Huzaifa - thanks for playing and comment. :)


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Posted 14 March 2014 - 11:14 AM

I'll give you feedback when you make some more missions. Also, i support the storyline feature as many here do so it would be nice making it in storyline. Anyway keep it up and good luck!


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Posted 14 March 2014 - 12:45 PM

I'll give you feedback when you make some more missions. Also, i support the storyline feature as many here do so it would be nice making it in storyline. Anyway keep it up and good luck!

thanks for the complement! okey i will make more missions then you can feedback them.


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#21

Posted 17 March 2014 - 02:08 AM

Nice Mission Man!

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