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#1

Posted 16 February 2014 - 03:03 AM Edited by The Odyssey, 30 March 2014 - 08:56 AM.

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This tale follow the story of Jason Payne and his his battle against anarchy. It takes place in 2014. The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the rich need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crisis.
 
Jason and his good friend Tommy are planning to make their mark on society and end this reign on terror. However, after Jason's family is kidnapped, the anonymous kidnapper demands one thing. For Tommy to be dead. 

 



 

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PAYNE FAMILY
NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION
Jason Payne
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Protagonist of the MP. A family man, brave, loyal and tough. An excellent gunman.
Kate Payne
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Jason's wife. Caring and smart, but very afraid. Relies on husband a lot..
Ian Payne
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Jasons son. Weak yet caring.
Sara Payne
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Jasons daughter. Very sweet but fragile.
DAVIS FAMILY
 
NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION
Tommy Davis
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A man Jason met in the midst of the war. Loyal, caring, and a good friend to Jason.
Deb Davis
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Tommy's Mum. Strict yet paranoid.
Digit
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A friend of Elliot who is a hacker and a technological expert. Due to his computer skills, he aims to track down the army leader.
Elliot Davis
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Tommy's brother and Deb's and Harolds son. Good gunman.
Harold Davis
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Debs husband.
Doc Jones
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A doctor who assists the family's hospital.
THE RED MIST
 
NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION
Dominic Oldman
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A high ranking member of The Red Mist. Powerful
Carter Brown
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A gunman who assists Jason in taking down the Army Leader.
Cpl. Andrew Brick
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Another high ranking member of The Red Mist. Loyal and kind.
 
U.S ARMY
NAMESTATUSDESCRIPTION
Melvin Scar
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Leader of the U.S Army and one of the antagonists in the MP. Started the war.

 



 

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Chapter 1: Bringing down the leader
 
 
MISSION 1:  Introduction
MISSION 2: Scavenged
MISSION 3: Red Mist
MISSION 4: Dam Busters
MISSION 5: Homecoming
MISSION 6: Death At Sea
 
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Coming soon.
 
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-Dutchy and Patrick for DYOM
-Graven for headers
-Chips237 for winning the Name A Mission Pack Contest
-MadMarshMallow for the inspiration for this MP (Max Parker) 
KD Himan for the trailer
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Posted 16 February 2014 - 03:26 AM Edited by KD himan, 16 February 2014 - 03:47 AM.

very nice presentation and cool screenshots . i am going to play the first chapter! good luck for the upcoming once.  :)

 

EDIT: I played the first 2 missions, do not take it serious but don't you think that tommy's mom is younger then her? she is a young ped model. by the way, very nice mission, i like the way you made the whole earthquake scene. :pp  


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 03:33 AM

Hi bro, looks cool! I'll try this on!


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 04:32 AM

Quite unrealistic setting, but I'll try this out when I get free time.


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 05:59 AM Edited by The Odyssey, 16 February 2014 - 06:21 AM.

Thanks guys, please give feedback too. :)

 

Also remember to report any bugs you find. 

 

@KD Himan, Lol, I guess so. I didn't really think about that while making the mission. 


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 07:25 AM Edited by Huzaifa khan, 16 February 2014 - 07:26 AM.

This looks awesome story I will play this (MP) :)

And awesome screenshots also :santa:

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Posted 16 February 2014 - 07:59 AM

Here is the trailer by me , i hope you may like it :p

 


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 08:51 AM Edited by The Odyssey, 16 February 2014 - 08:58 AM.

Here is the trailer by me , i hope you may like it :p
 


Great trailer!

However I would like 1 thing to be changed.

 

Can you change the thumbnail of the video? Only because it matches the logo, and the trailer is right next to the logo so it doesn't look very appealing. 


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 10:14 AM

Okey i changed it by making a simple header in Photoshop. but look, you had given link to the trailer.... please put the ''URL'' of video in the topic so that video can appear... :)


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Posted 16 February 2014 - 01:18 PM

Nice topic look! I'll check this out and give you detailed feedback.


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Posted 18 February 2014 - 07:54 AM

Would anyone be wiling to create a video walkthrough? Preferably someone who is experienced in video making and commentaries.

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Posted 19 February 2014 - 09:09 PM

Very Good Mission and Story Good Luck With Other Chapter :)


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Posted 22 February 2014 - 05:17 AM

Thanks.

 

Any more feedback guys? 


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Posted 22 February 2014 - 11:15 AM

I'll give you feedback tomorrow or more later. Have some problems right now. I've played the first few missions, but i'll give you feedback when i play all of them from chapter 1.


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Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:15 AM

Didnt play the game but a very interesting story plot

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Posted 03 March 2014 - 05:28 PM

The main part is like it's written by Quasier. I'd recommend you change it to something else like: The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the poor need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crysis. You don't need this, but seriously, we know you're too good, but this is just a simple story. But the action and gameplay is great!


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Posted 03 March 2014 - 05:53 PM

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Story - 6/10

 

Gameplay - 9/10

 

Presentation - 8/10

 

Cutscene & animation - 10/10

 

Overall - 8.5/10

 

Good luck and keep it up!  :^:

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Posted 04 March 2014 - 08:02 AM

The main part is like it's written by Quasier. I'd recommend you change it to something else like: The United States has commanded that all U.S. Citizens, other than the poor need to be exterminated due to big debt and an economic crysis. You don't need this, but seriously, we know you're too good, but this is just a simple story. But the action and gameplay is great!

That's a much better description. Thanks. 

 

@AnDReJ98 Thanks for the feedback :) 

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Posted 08 March 2014 - 01:32 PM

But it's not finished, we didn't find out what happened to his family!


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Posted 08 March 2014 - 03:05 PM

But it's not finished, we didn't find out what happened to his family!


Exactly, It's not finished yet. I'm working on chapter 2 now.




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