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Do you want this MP to continue?

  1. Of course! (Yes) (1 votes [50.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 50.00%

  2. Yes (Yes) (1 votes [50.00%] - View)

    Percentage of vote: 50.00%

  3. Would be nice (Neutral) (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  4. No (No) (0 votes [0.00%])

    Percentage of vote: 0.00%

  5. Never! (No) (0 votes [0.00%])

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#1

Posted 12 February 2014 - 02:35 PM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 12 July 2014 - 01:30 PM.

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Theme Song 

 

Mission Pack Statues: My story just began

Topic still not completed

Genre: Action-Adventure/Mystery/Sad

 

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My name is Scarlet James. A guy left alone in the world, my family was killed by a Mafia group. My father was a police officer, he taught me handle guns. I never thought that I'm gonna need that. The mafia who killed my family was one of the Dangerous, Merciless, Most Wanted mafia group by the Police all over the world. While my father was on a investigation he was killed along with my family, I was at school at the moment. I need find this Mafia group and bring them to justice, not for revenge, I'm not the revenge taking type guy, all had happened, what's the point of taking revenge? Finding them won't be easy, the world is big... huge! And this is my story... 
 
 
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Scarlet's Family
Scarlet James: The protagonist in the story. Seeking revenge for killing his family.
Raymond James: Elder brother of Scarlet James, missing after the murder incident of the family.
Luvis James: Scarlet's Father, a police officer working for the SFPD.
Mary James: Scarlet's Mother.
 
Scarlet's Friends
Alex Johns: Scarlet's best Friend, studied in the same class. Computer genius. Lives with his Grandmother.
 
Others
FactorX Mafia: The mafia who killed Scarlet's family.
Sgt.Cooper: Sargent of the SFPD.
 
- To be Updated.
 
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Chapter1: Prologue

Chapter2: Gathering Information
Chapter3: New Hopes
 
- To be Updated.
 
 
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- A review by Chips237 on the first 3 Episodes of Chapter 1. 
 

 

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Writing [X]

Decent

Amazing writing at the first mission, but in the preceding missions grammar went downfall. A lot of mistakes in the next two missions. I hope this would improve.

Presentation [/]

Excellent

Amazing story and cutscenes. The MP name implies it as being apocalyptic, but it is entirely something else. Good work by the designer here. Also, the cutscenes and animations were very well timed.

Length [/]

Decent

Mission time is around 4 to 5 minutes, depending on your skill. The boat race and the shooting contributes to the time.

Difficulty [/]

Hard

This MP is easy in the first mission, but became instantly hard in the preceding ones. You need to be fast, as the next missions involve shooting and stealth.

Variety [/]

Very Good

This is a good concept. Revenge is overused though, but still a good use of actors, vehicles and animations.

 

 
 
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- Don't use any Cheats.
- Use the resources given within the missions.
 
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- Rockstar Games for creating GTA San Andreas.
- Dutchy3010 & PatrickW for creating DYOM.
GunWrath for making the Cover and Headers.
- And for you all for playing my missions.

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#2

Posted 12 February 2014 - 02:45 PM

Looks interesting, I'll play the prologue when it comes out.

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#3

Posted 12 February 2014 - 04:40 PM

Looks interesting, Good Story I'll play the prologue when it comes out.


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#4

Posted 12 February 2014 - 05:35 PM

Its looks interesting man I'll Play   :santa: :) when it comes out


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#5

Posted 14 February 2014 - 09:32 AM

@Odyssey: Thanks bro, don't forget to play the other Chapters too.

@alibatman: Dont forget to leave feedbacks.

@Khan: Leave feedbacks too.

 

Chapter.1 Episode.1 Weekend released.


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#6

Posted 18 February 2014 - 10:23 AM

Chapter.1 Episode.2 Last Goodbye released.


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#7

Posted 18 February 2014 - 08:39 PM

I WANT RER Remake :( ._. jajaja.. Good work with this...


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#8

Posted 19 February 2014 - 04:02 PM

I WANT RER Remake :( ._. jajaja.. Good work with this...

 

Sorry dude, I'll try my best.


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#9

Posted 23 February 2014 - 09:06 AM

New Episode released, Ep.3 Finding Alex.

And a Remake of first mission 'cause some people had troubles with it.


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#10

Posted 24 February 2014 - 01:09 AM

In 1st Mission I Get Failed Again And Again

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#11

Posted 24 February 2014 - 08:56 AM

In 1st Mission I Get Failed Again And Again

 

What happens actually?


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#12

Posted 24 February 2014 - 03:40 PM

When The Race Begins, Mission Failed

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#13

Posted 24 February 2014 - 05:55 PM

When The Race Begins, Mission Failed

 

Did you try the remake?


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#14

Posted 25 February 2014 - 03:44 AM

Not Yet

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#15

Posted 25 February 2014 - 04:39 AM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 25 February 2014 - 04:39 AM.

Not Yet

 

I've fixed the Bug, try other missions too.


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#16

Posted 25 February 2014 - 07:40 AM

Ok

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#17

Posted 27 February 2014 - 03:40 AM

Waiting For Next Mission :)
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#18

Posted 15 March 2014 - 02:55 PM

Topic updated, missions coming soon.


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#19

Posted 12 July 2014 - 12:38 PM

Poll added for deciding whether the Story should be continued or No.

 

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#20

Posted 12 July 2014 - 01:27 PM

Poll added for deciding whether the Story should be continued or No.

 

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Good to know you will still go on with your project even if it won't be so ''famous''.

Never played it, but i voted Yes because the song and the theme looked amazing, it got me at the part where it said that he needs to bring them to justice, not get revenge.





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