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The Odyssey
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Posted 15 January 2014 - 12:51 PM Edited by The Odyssey, 11 July 2014 - 01:07 PM.

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MISSION SERIES STATUS: FINISHED. 
 
Information
Welcome to the 5th Multi-Designers project. Unfortunately our last Multi-Designers project, Dream Hunters was not successful, so we hope that we can complete this one. 
 
If you're wondering what a Multi-Designers project is, here is some info. 
 
Basically, each user takes turns in creating a mission, which are all part of a story in a Mission Pack. Remember our missions are all connected to each other, so I suggest you play them in order. 
 
Rules

1.) Don't join this project unless you really can participate and if you are serious about this. Any trolling, rude behavior or breaking the rules will get you kicked out of the project. 
2.) Stick to the theme of the story. You can find it in this post.
3.) You are not allowed to make missions if it's not your turn cause you will mess up the order and the story.
4.) Try to be as grammatical correct as you can when writing the text in the mission. Use the internet translator if you need to.
5.) Respect and use the names and the skins of the characters that other participants gave to them.
6.) You MUST keep the main character alive. He must not die.
7.) You are permitted to make a twist in the story, as long as it isn't anything that will completely turn the story around.
 
 


 

Rules for making missions
When its your turn, you are allowed to make one mission. This mission must continue from the last mission(s). So it is preferred you play the previous missions before creating your one. You have 3 days to create your mission, and 6 days if your mission has glitches or problems that need fixing. (You must notify us on this) When you have completed the mission, post it in the comments and it will be added to the OP. After everyone has done their mission, the list starts again. 
 
Please also note this.
 
When Drake is a cop, his skin will be Skin_282.png
When Drake is a racer, his skin will be Skin_268.png

 
 
Credits
I would like to thank all designers for helping us with this successful project. There's been ups and downs, but overall this has been one of the most enjoyable Multi-Designer projects to date. Special thanks to these followig people (in no order)
 
-Chips237 
Arguably one of the most commited and active designers of the project. From giving feedback on most missions to designing the final one, RTJ wouldn't be as succesful without him. Great job!
 
-KD Himan
Another avid contributor. Designed great missions and tried his best to create a mission when it was his turn. 
 
-Doublepulse
Created many twists and turns in the story and progressed the plot. Another person who tried their best to create a mission when it was his turn. Great job.
 
-SatournFan
Another great mission designer. Was too, committed to the project. 
 
BeKowalaski
-He showed up late to the project, but still put in effort. 
 
-Viscocity
-Added plenty of comic relief to the story! :D
 
-RamiV2
While he wasn't active during the last few rounds, the first few he was committed and designed great missions. 
 
-SanAndreasDYOM
Same as above. 
 
I am sorry if I missed out on anyone noteworthy. 
 
 
 
Story
 
Drake Howell was an ordinary cop who fought crime - he majored in chasing after and arresting street racers and speeding drivers. However he stumbles into a mess. Drake interrupts the meeting of a street racing crew, and him and his partner are ordered to be killed. However the leader of the crew has a soft side. He will let Drake live if he joins their crew. Now the cop must both be a cop and a criminal, without blowing his cover, and living life on the fast lane. 
 
Characters
 

Name: Drake Howell 
Status: Protagonist
Description: The good cop gone bad, You play as Drake while he tries to keep his job as a cop without the authority finding he has a secret life street racing.
 

Name: Andy Moss
Status: Friend
Description: Drake's cop friend. He's worked with Drake for over 2 years
 
 
Name: Phil Warwick
Status: Enemy
Description: Undercover cop who works with Andy and Drake.  He is shown that he wants to kill Drake in the introduction.

 
Name: Nathan McFarlane
Status: Neutral
Description: Leader of the street racing crew. Threatens to kill Drake if he doesn't join his crew. 
 
Name: Roy Baker
Status: Neutral
Description: Nathans assistant. 
 
Name: Seth Dalton
Status: Friend
Description: High ranking member of the racing syndicate. Good friend of Andy and Drake.
 
Name: Mr. Fox
Status: Enemy
Description: Leader of The Faxus. Due to a small mistake, he is Drake and Andy's worst enemy. 
 
Name: John Secronom
Status: Friend
Description: FBI Agent who arrests Drake and Andy but allows them to be released if they kill Phil.
 
Name: Eric Holcomb
Status: Friend
Description: John Secronom's colleague and assistant. 
 
Name: Gary Howell
Status: Friend
Description: Drake's son. Wishes for his dad to get his life back on track, and away from the street racing business. 
 
Name: Ryan Howell
Status: Friend
Description: Drake's brother. Owns an armory, which Drake and Andy use if they need weapons. 
 
Name: Kim Parker
Status: Friend
Description: Woman hired by the FBI to keep track on Drake and Andy

 

Name: Johnny Nixon
StatusFriend
Description: Protagonist of the 1st mulkti-designers project, making a cameo in this one. A friend of John and Eric. 
 
Name: Tenshi Wu
Status: Friend
Description: Seth's friend who is involved with the Phoenix Drake steals. Trying to get away from street racers wanting the Phoenix.
 
 
 
Name: Officer Rowley
Status: Enemy
Description: 

Spoiler

 
 
Name: Chris Anthony
Status: Neutral
Description: A man who organized one of the tournaments in San Fierro.
 
 
 




Missions
NOTE: It is recommended you are aware of the bugs that may ruin the experience of the mission pack if you do not know about them. To read about the bugs, click the link below.
 

 FULL .RAR FILE OF THE MISSION PACK: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32950
Chapter 1: Opposites Attracted 
1) Introduction - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29874
2) The Bad Cop - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29898
3) Test Drive - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29993
4) Tip Of The Iceberg - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30073
5) Caught To Escape - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30100
6) The Highway Ralley - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30171
7) One Way Or Another - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30232
8) A Cop or A Street Racer? - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30376
 

 
Chapter 2 - The Faxus
1) Pedal To The Metal - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30438
2) Heat Of The Moment - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30606
3) Backfire - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30744
4) The Meeting - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30877
5) Forced Into The Force -http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31024
6) Dirty Escapade - https://www.mediafir...1mv2o95gaj2lmg9
7) New Enemies, New Friends - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31316
8) Majestic Backstabbers - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31405
 
Chapter 3 
1) Trust, Believe and Prepare - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31608
2) Plans - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31708
3) Change Of Plans - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/31844
4)
https://www.mediafir...6iii8vo54y5hipm

5) The Path Less Travelled. - http://www.mediafire...wokm9/DYOM7.dat

6) The Lost - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32316

7) Down The Rabbit Hole - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32530

8) The Finish Line - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/32949
 
 

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#2

Posted 15 January 2014 - 12:55 PM

Very nice.

Going to play the Introduction ASAP.


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 01:07 PM Edited by Dr. John, 15 January 2014 - 01:07 PM.

Nice, I hope people make interesting missions. :)

 

Also, just a tiny suggestion: Never make a side story of your own. Like introducing some side characters and making missions on them. It really doesn't stays long in a group MP.

 

Also, all the best. I can give feedbacks one by one. I will play the first part for now. Also, Odyssey, there are a few typos. You might want to recheck on them.


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 01:50 PM Edited by Viscosity, 15 January 2014 - 01:52 PM.

@Odyssey: Nice intro, I loved chasing that infernus. Very well designed too

 

According to me there should be more of these type of chases and shooting happened before this incident occurred. And one more thing that I noticed, don't you think the Nathan was too easy on Drake, I mean it looked a little unusual to me.

 

Don't mind this is only my opinion  :lol:

 

All the best for your mission KD himan 


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 01:53 PM Edited by KD himan, 15 January 2014 - 02:21 PM.

Wow Man!  :santa:  This is Awesome. i will also stay tuned up for this ever if my exams are coming or anything. i must give time to this  :^: . I wish Good luck too Everyone.  :colgate: i am making my mission please wait. 


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 01:54 PM Edited by The Odyssey, 15 January 2014 - 01:56 PM.

@Odyssey: Nice intro, I loved chasing that infernus. Very well designed too

 

According to me there should be more of these type of chases and shooting happened before this incident occurred. And one more thing that I noticed, don't you think the Nathan was too easy on Drake, I mean it looked a little unusual to me.

 

Don't mind this is only my opinion  :lol:

Yeah, to be honest I kind of rushed the Nathan and Drake part because I'm going on holiday tomorrow morning, I needed to get the intro done so you guys didn't have to patiently wait for me to get back. :p


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 02:17 PM

I played the mission. I had real fun in finding the Infernus...it was right behind my ass. :bored: Wow, at first I thought "I am going to get lost in the jungles for sure" and then suddenly, that damn car comes out of nowhere. The mission was really short but was a nice way for an opening.


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Posted 15 January 2014 - 05:23 PM

Nice Intro. i really happy that i in this project and i make mission for it :santa:


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Posted 16 January 2014 - 07:40 AM

Nice intro.. KD himan can do the second one!


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Posted 16 January 2014 - 11:08 AM Edited by KD himan, 16 January 2014 - 11:34 AM.

First Mission Complete. Sorry It Contains Only 49 Objectives.  :/  i was about to add more objectives in it but My Elder sister was stopping me from watching Internet and about to make me Study. so thats why it has less objectives. but please rate and comment how it is..

 

Link For The Mission - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29881

 

I hope You Like it.  :colgate:

 

EDIT : Please dont play this mission man please dont, i made a huge big mistake damn! i edit that dyomtemp. file and it rumbled my all objective text wrongly  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  please sorry everyone..... i need to fx it  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:  :cry:


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Posted 17 January 2014 - 01:15 AM

Unfortunately I'm not home right now so I can't check out the mission. Tell us when you've fixed and Martin_GDF can have his turn.

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Posted 17 January 2014 - 01:44 PM Edited by Chips237, 17 January 2014 - 01:51 PM.

4.3/10

 

+

1. Excellent use of objects and vehicles.

2. Precise timing of animations and cutscenes.

 

-

1. Too many grammatical, spacing and writing errors.

2. Mission too short, and has no gameplay at all.

 

EDIT: My review does not change. Sorry for spoiler.


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Posted 17 January 2014 - 01:48 PM Edited by KD himan, 17 January 2014 - 01:59 PM.

Okey so i had made the mission Remake ( Fixed Text Issue ) Sorry it has No Gameplay.  :yawn:  Link For The Mission 

 

Bugs and Glitches - A Bug can occur after the Cutscene Objective - ''Its Ok Thanks''. after This objective, the Game may freeze for few seconds. Thats only One Glitch.


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Posted 17 January 2014 - 03:12 PM Edited by Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM, 17 January 2014 - 03:12 PM.

Eh. Not bad, Now martincho can continue..


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Posted 19 January 2014 - 03:14 AM

Sorry... I was on travel, so I couldn't make the mission, I will start it later, ok?

I've just arrived home xDDD


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 12:38 PM

Waiting for Martincho..


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Posted 20 January 2014 - 01:03 PM

Is it tooo late to join?

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Posted 20 January 2014 - 01:44 PM

Yep. Its closed cuz we started the mission-pack already.


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Posted 21 January 2014 - 02:48 AM

Martin, It has been 3 days so I'm giving you a few more hours to complete your mission or your turn will be skipped. 


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Posted 21 January 2014 - 11:28 AM Edited by Vinesh AKA SanAndreasDYOM, 21 January 2014 - 11:28 AM.

I think he's busy in the work or IRL.

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Posted 22 January 2014 - 02:11 AM Edited by The Odyssey, 22 January 2014 - 02:12 AM.

It's been 4 days. Sorry Martin, we will have to skip your turn. You can submit a mission when the list restarts. 

 

Ramiv2, it is your turn to create a mission. 

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Posted 22 January 2014 - 02:30 AM

It's been 4 days. Sorry Martin, we will have to skip your turn. You can submit a mission when the list restarts. 

 

Ramiv2, it is your turn to create a mission. 

I'll get working on it. Is there an objective limit ?


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Posted 22 January 2014 - 02:34 AM

 

It's been 4 days. Sorry Martin, we will have to skip your turn. You can submit a mission when the list restarts. 

 

Ramiv2, it is your turn to create a mission. 

I'll get working on it. Is there an objective limit ?

 

No, but make sure there isn't too many, or the game may crash. Aim for 80 or less. 


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Posted 22 January 2014 - 10:43 AM

Give your best, RamiV2


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 05:43 AM

Sorry guys I was really busy, I got work now with my father and lots of friends and bla bla you know!

Em... so I think you gave it to Rami alright? Great :)


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 06:30 AM

I kept it short since it's only the third mission. 

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/29993


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 09:10 AM Edited by Chips237, 23 January 2014 - 09:12 AM.

8.0/10

 

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1. Amazing grammar, punctuation and capitalization.

2. Very well made cutscenes.

 

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1. Saw a few grammatical errors, and also a few animation errors.


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 01:48 PM

this is awsum !


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Posted 23 January 2014 - 02:17 PM

8.0/10

 

+

1. Amazing grammar, punctuation and capitalization.

2. Very well made cutscenes.

 

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1. Saw a few grammatical errors, and also a few animation errors.

It's your turn to create a mission btw. :) 


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Posted 25 January 2014 - 03:07 PM Edited by Chips237, 25 January 2014 - 03:13 PM.

There is a very severe glitch that happened to my mission.

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/30030





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