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Posted 06 January 2014 - 11:45 AM Edited by DChumber1, 22 January 2014 - 11:06 AM.

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A Boy Namely "Mike" Was Living With His Brother & Parents At Whitewood Estates, Las Venturas. He Was Outside The House On Hills. A Gang Came & Killed His Parents. His Brother Called Him.He Came House & Cried.He Said That He Will Get Revenge && The Revenge Begins

 

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1.Mike: A 17 Years Old Boy Living In Las Venturas With His Parents & One Brother.(Player)
2.Ricky: The Brother Of Mike & 16 Years Old Boy. (Seen As Enemy From 5th Mission)
3.Sweet: The Leader Of Ninjas Gang. (Who Killed Mike's Parents)
4.Jimmy: An Old Friend Of Mike. (Seen From 5th Mission)

 

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((Mission Pack Here))
1.Introduction
2.Preparing Day
3.Preparing Day 2
4.Searching For Home
5.Knowing The Truth(Only Based On Cutscenes)
6.An Old Friend
7.Grabbing The Weapons
8.Getting The Revenge

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Posted 06 January 2014 - 11:19 PM

The introduction wasn't bad. The cutscenes were a little awkward but I liked the sort of narration aspect you put into it. Looking forward to the next missions.

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Posted 07 January 2014 - 12:15 AM

Well I'm kind of agree with RamiV2 hahaha

But looking forward to it :) keep the good work

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Posted 07 January 2014 - 04:52 AM

Thanks #RamiV2
Thanks #Martin_GDF
Well, I Am Working On 2nd Mission.

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Posted 07 January 2014 - 07:50 AM Edited by DChumber1, 07 January 2014 - 07:51 AM.

Well I'm kind of agree with RamiV2 hahaha

But looking forward to it :) keep the good work

 

 

The introduction wasn't bad. The cutscenes were a little awkward but I liked the sort of narration aspect you put into it. Looking forward to the next missions.

 

 

The Revenge Mission.2 (Preparing Day) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Please Play 2nd Mission Also :)

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Posted 07 January 2014 - 06:10 PM

The missions feel a little too short to be honest. I would suggest making them longer (: 


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Posted 08 January 2014 - 03:17 AM

Ok@RamiV2
Now I Am Working On Trailer Then I Will Make 3rd Mission !

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Posted 08 January 2014 - 03:44 AM

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

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Posted 08 January 2014 - 05:03 AM

The second is nice, but short... but still being good work :)


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Posted 08 January 2014 - 05:13 AM Edited by DChumber1, 08 January 2014 - 05:14 AM.

Ok,, Next Missions Will Be Longer !!!


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Posted 08 January 2014 - 11:23 AM

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 Bro,, How To Display Same Pics & Links In End Of Every Comment ???


The Revenge Mission.3 (Preparing Day 2) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Well I'm kind of agree with RamiV2 hahaha

But looking forward to it :) keep the good work

 

 

The introduction wasn't bad. The cutscenes were a little awkward but I liked the sort of narration aspect you put into it. Looking forward to the next missions.

 

 

The Revenge Mission.2 (Preparing Day) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Please Play 2nd Mission Also :)

 

 

 

The missions feel a little too short to be honest. I would suggest making them longer (: 

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

 

The second is nice, but short... but still being good work :)

 

The Revenge Mission.3 (Preparing Day 2) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Posted 08 January 2014 - 05:20 PM

Alright, I will check it out as soon as I have time :)


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Posted 08 January 2014 - 10:49 PM

The third mission is okay. I like the idea you had but I think you should lower the health on the targets. It takes forever to kill them.


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Posted 09 January 2014 - 03:26 PM Edited by DChumber1, 09 January 2014 - 03:27 PM.

The third mission is okay. I like the idea you had but I think you should lower the health on the targets. It takes forever to kill them.

 

 

Alright, I will check it out as soon as I have time :)

Next Mission Coming Soon..!!!!!


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Posted 09 January 2014 - 03:44 PM

Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

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Posted 09 January 2014 - 04:18 PM

Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

 

 

The third mission is okay. I like the idea you had but I think you should lower the health on the targets. It takes forever to kill them.

 

 

Alright, I will check it out as soon as I have time :)

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

 

The Revenge Mission.4 (Searching For Home) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

Thanks For Suggestion..!!! I Will Read Tutorials....!!!


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Posted 09 January 2014 - 04:19 PM

 

Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

 

 

The third mission is okay. I like the idea you had but I think you should lower the health on the targets. It takes forever to kill them.

 

 

Alright, I will check it out as soon as I have time :)

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

 

The Revenge Mission.4 (Searching For Home) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Yeah... I think T13 is right... you should modify your screenshots or images with something more related to the MP, The Revenge is about 2 brothers that got their parents killed by a gang and they want revenge... so butterflies and flowers are not the best thing to decorate a thread!


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Posted 09 January 2014 - 04:21 PM Edited by Target13Productions, 09 January 2014 - 04:22 PM.

Its not tutorials, You can start a thread in that forum & request for some GFX.

Tell them what you need & how it should look then they will make it for you.


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Posted 10 January 2014 - 02:42 AM

I'm thinking that you are Gay... xD

Whhy butterflies on the pics?... and hearts?... Wow!


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Posted 10 January 2014 - 03:11 PM

I'm thinking that you are Gay... xD

Whhy butterflies on the pics?... and hearts?... Wow!

 

 

Its not tutorials, You can start a thread in that forum & request for some GFX.

Tell them what you need & how it should look then they will make it for you.

 

 

The third mission is okay. I like the idea you had but I think you should lower the health on the targets. It takes forever to kill them.

 

 

Alright, I will check it out as soon as I have time :)

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

The Revenge Mission.5(Knowing The Truth) Released !

Mission Link Here !

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Posted 10 January 2014 - 07:23 PM

I suggest you see this. It can make your screenshots a whole lot better.

 


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Posted 11 January 2014 - 04:29 AM

@RamiV2
Try My New Mission !

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Posted 11 January 2014 - 12:33 PM

The Revenge Mission.6(An Old Friend) Released !

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Posted 15 January 2014 - 04:25 PM

The introduction wasn't bad. The cutscenes were a little awkward but I liked the sort of narration aspect you put into it. Looking forward to the next missions.

 

 

Well I'm kind of agree with RamiV2 hahaha

But looking forward to it :) keep the good work

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

 

Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

 

 

I'm thinking that you are Gay... xD

Whhy butterflies on the pics?... and hearts?... Wow!

The Revenge 7th Mission Is Out Now....!!!!

Mission Link Here.!!

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Posted 16 January 2014 - 03:44 PM

The introduction wasn't bad. The cutscenes were a little awkward but I liked the sort of narration aspect you put into it. Looking forward to the next missions.

 

 

Well I'm kind of agree with RamiV2 hahaha

But looking forward to it :) keep the good work

 

 

Looking good, I'll try the missions.

 

 

The second is nice, but short... but still being good work :)

 

 

Your mission is about taking revenge on a gang.

But why are there butterflies on the banners?

 

Butterflies, Flowers & Abstract. Feels more like a Barbie MP to me.

I'm not judging the missions but i'm saying that the Decoration of the thread really matters.

Get yourself some proper GFX here...

http://gtaforums.com...ests-tutorials/

 

 

I'm thinking that you are Gay... xD

Whhy butterflies on the pics?... and hearts?... Wow!

 

 

The Revenge 8th(Final) Mission And Full Mission Pack Is Out Now....!!

8th Mission Here..!!

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Mission Pack Here..!!


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Posted 19 January 2014 - 05:45 AM

Ok, so I played through this last night and thought it was an alrighty Mission pack.

The Revenge is embedded with a fast-paced storyline that keeps you hooked till the end. If you're looking for a well-polished and grammar error-free gameplay, then you'd be disappointed.
The story is about two brothers namely Rick and Mike who seek revenge againts those who murdered their parents.

Here are my feedbacks about each mission.

Intro - awesome cutscenes/camera angles. Loved it.
The vehicles were turned off in this mission so I had to run all the way from the hill to my house. It kinda pissed me off.
There's a cutscene inside the house which shows the dead bodies of our parents. It was kinda half-baked. Coulda used some work there.

2nd mission - Good choice of weather.

3rd mission - Not sure if it's just me, but the mission crashed to the desktop.

4th mission - i couldnt help but f*cking LOL at asking the owner to sell their house. T'was flat-out stupid, sorry. They could have asked if there's a RENT AVAILABLE!

5th mission - awesome cutscenes. Don't skip 'em or else you'll miss the twist. Oh and the twist was kinda dumb. Coulda used some work.

6th mission - This mission is not necessary. You could have just used cutscenes instead of throwing gameplay here and there. Are you an Indian? Cause it reminded me of those India movies.

7th mission - Long driving was frustrating. Need to cut them down a tad.

8th mission - Final mission, this. Again, the long driving was frustrating. I was like 'srsly?' when it asked us to get to Los Santos. You need to improve the shooting combat. Way too many enemies made it boring. You could have atleast made a f*cking armor spawn here and there.

Overall, this was an average action themed storyline. Good luck with your feature MPs.

2.5/5.

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Posted 19 January 2014 - 12:41 PM

@Shiva: Nice review it made me try out the missions, maybe you can be a mission reviewer (VergilDD, hope u remember me ;) )

@DChumber: I'll ply the missions and let u knw wht I think.
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Posted 19 January 2014 - 01:22 PM

@Shiva: Nice review it made me try out the missions, maybe you can be a mission reviewer (VergilDD, hope u remember me ;) )

lol thanks, but that's not a review. Just my thoughts and what's that word, ah, ramblings!

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Posted 19 January 2014 - 03:26 PM

lol thanks, but that's not a review. Just my thoughts and what's that word, ah, ramblings!


What's so much to ramble about??
And try my new mission pack link can be found in signature ;)

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Posted 19 January 2014 - 07:57 PM

I crash in the 3rd mission. Do you know what's the problem?





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