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XXXXXXXXXIII
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Posted 22 October 2013 - 03:00 AM Edited by XXXXXXXXXIII, 10 November 2013 - 02:00 AM.

Hi I new to using DYOM and have created only two missions so far. Can anyone check them over and give me comments on what should I improve to make it better? Thanks!

 

Mission 1: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28549

Mission 2: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28587

Mission 3: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28823

They are from the same story line, and yes I do expect them to be bad compare to yours. 

Route might not work from time to time. 


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Posted 22 October 2013 - 07:10 AM

Going to try your mission buddy


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Posted 24 October 2013 - 01:59 AM

Anyone? reply please :panic:


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Posted 26 October 2013 - 04:12 PM

its nice : ) keep it up dude : ) i like them : )


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Posted 26 October 2013 - 07:20 PM

Wow

Well... those are nice for a newbie in here :3

Awesome, when i first started, my missions were really sh*tty comparing to this. Yours are cool :) best of luck with DYOM


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Posted 10 November 2013 - 02:03 AM

New mission added, but it isn't good as the previous two... 

 

Also, after I make part 4, I want to start a series of mission using plots from the classic video game series Half Life. Any suggestions?  :evilgrin:


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Posted 10 November 2013 - 04:18 AM

Half life? amazing!! :3

I love that videogame





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