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Mieguy
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Posted 10 October 2013 - 08:06 PM Edited by Mieguy, 11 October 2013 - 04:56 PM.

Hello guys,

 

i opened this thread so you can give me feedback on the mission series i created. I am relatively new to DYOM. Have played missions before but never created missions. But then i started making some missions and yet the first 2 missions weren't perfect. The Explosions didnt work right and in mission 2 a soldier gets killed. But in mission 3 it was perfect (perfect in the meaning how it was supposed to be like).

 

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The story is loosely based on my book "Space Galaxies: Time and Space" but with minor modifications because you can't make space Battles in GTA: San Andreas. The first part of the Story is just a little big explaining and constructing the bigger story. When the time travel starts (app. at mission 10 or 11) the real story begins.

 

It tells the Story of Mayor Jack Christopher, US Air Force soldier at Kensington Airbase, New York, USA. After humankind is starving because there is not enough food for all humans, Jack is send out to go on a diplomatic mission to the planet Gyrol. On the planet he gets in trouble and it looks unevitable to get back in time into the past. But is time travel really safe?

 

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(sorted by appearance/importance)

 

Jack Christopher

 

Jack is the main character of the series and the person which you take control of. His parents were killed in a car accident and he has befriended with Pete. Jack is a Mayor in US Air Force (First Appearance: The Negotiator)

 

Pete Gumbell

 

He is the grand-grandson of Paul Gumbell, Inventor of the time machine. Pete is a friend of Jack and the guy who controls the time machine when operating in 2139. Pete is also the inventor of the "Fast-Forward"-Button to get back to the Future without a second machine. Pete will accompany Jack on its later travels. Pete is Lieutenant in US Air Force. (has not appeared yet)

 

The General

 

His Name is unknown at the beginning of the story

Spoiler
. Ke is the superior of Jack and Pete and the General at Kensington Airbase. (First Appearance: The Negotiator)

 

Liane Forbes

 

FBI-Agent Liane Forbes is the security guard and escort of Jack Christopher. Her Grandfather was the pilot of the moon ferry. (First Appearance: Difficulties)

 

Arek Tewil

 

Arek Tewil is the actual President of Planet Gyrol. He likes to torture and kill his people. Its rumored that his leadership is a dictatorship. (First Appearance: The Riot)

 

 

Isis

 

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

 

Glacias

 

Glacias is a little ice elf living on the Planet Haraznaz.

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Leyila Osmond

 

Leyila Osmond is an orphan Jack meets in

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Thomas Edison

 

Thomas Alva Edison invented the light bulb and the phonograph. He was born in 1847.

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Imhotep

 

Imhotep served under the pharao Djoser as chancellor and high priest of the sun god Ra at Heliopolis.

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Oberst Hamann

 

Oberst Hamann is a 

Spoiler
soldier born
Spoiler
Unlike General Berezinov he can fly a space ship. (not appeared yet)

 

General Berezinov

 

General Berezinov is a 

Spoiler
soldier born in Smolensk who thinks he can fly a space ship.
Spoiler

 

Melissa Bourgeoise

 

She is the daughter of

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Kan Kanook

 

Kan Kanook comes from the Planet Lothedar. He is a Volt-Car-Racer and a long-time friend of Jack. Kan is 19 years old. (not appeared yet)

 

Pora Vergé

 

Pora Vergé is the arch-enemy of Kan and he comes from the Planet Cicarthé. He is best known for cheating in Volt-Car-Races and he kills competitors that are better than him.

Spoiler
(not appeared yet)

 

Colour code:

 

Players Characer

Friend

Enemy

 

 

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Chapter 1 - Prolog:

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28407

 

Chapter 2 - The Negotiator

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28402

 

Chapter 3 - Difficulties

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28405

 

Chapter 4 - The Riot

 

http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/28417

 

Some mission have and future missions will have Easter Eggs. For example you can find Big Smoke in Chapter 4.

 

 

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Dutchy3010 and PatrickW - For creating DYOM

http://www.flamingtext.com- For headers

Revolver 1 - For showing me his headers he created @ Flamingtext


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Posted 11 October 2013 - 03:07 AM

Just a suggestion - you might want to make your topic look prettier by having headers and logos. Such as "Story" "Characters" "Missions"

You can request for such headers Here.


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Posted 11 October 2013 - 08:45 AM

Okay thats a nice idea. but i want to use an artwork where i first have to ask for permission. So i can't post the request today. Thanks for the idea, i like headers.


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Posted 11 October 2013 - 09:50 AM

Okay thats a nice idea. but i want to use an artwork where i first have to ask for permission. So i can't post the request today. Thanks for the idea, i like headers.

I wouldn't mind letting you use mine. I like to help newbies, so use it if you want, or use the link I put in the Credits part, you'll find more there.


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Posted 11 October 2013 - 04:54 PM

Chapter 4 is uploaded. First Post was edited to include the link.

 

@revolver1: Thanks, i have put your headers in.


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Posted 12 October 2013 - 07:16 AM

these are just website generated headers, request headers in gfx section, no need to ask permission or smth you talk about, lol


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Posted 12 October 2013 - 07:28 AM

No thats not what i was talking about. I wanted to use a specific artwork and as the base rules of Header request says ripping is forbidden, i cant use it.

 

 

I asked the creator of the artwork and he said that his artwork is only allowed to be used for a specific game and the adjacent mod it was created for.

 

However i need a space theme and i doubt that anybody here has a space game :lol: prove me wrong and i post the request.


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Posted 12 October 2013 - 08:14 AM

This looks so much like fictional story... I think this kind of theme is impossible to do in DYOM and GTA SA in general, but hey, I would like to see you try.





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