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Posted 17 September 2013 - 04:02 PM Edited by Spider262, 05 October 2013 - 04:09 PM.

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A big fire happened on the LV entrance, people are screaming and a lot of cars are burned, The way is closed and fire is took off but, Police has not come yet, After a while, Police arrived to the place and began the investigation, They found that Frank is killed, Want to know who is Frank? Play and Discover.

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Full Pack: Here

 

Chapter 1 (Finished):
Mission 1
Mission 2
Mission 3
Mission 4
Mission 5
Mission 6
 
Chapter 2 (In Progress):
Mission 1
Mission 2
Mission 3

Missions 4

 

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Chapter 1 review: Link by Revolver1

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-Credits are Spider262 for the mission and Graven for the logo-
-The MP is finished if I have new ideas I will start an Special Extra part-

-Spider262 Productions 2013-

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Posted 17 September 2013 - 04:27 PM

Hey, haven't seen you in a while. Welcome back.
OT: I don't understand your story. You said the PROTAGONIST was killed when he returned home, but if he's dead, why the hell is he the protagonist?

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Posted 17 September 2013 - 04:42 PM

Good Luck! for Your MP.

But You said Protagonist was dead so is your story is horror? 


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Posted 17 September 2013 - 08:38 PM

I mean it, He dead after he returned home, The missions will be someone of his family telling the story of him, Not the first time he had the mark A+ but, His stories as a police officer, The story is big, Likely to be 20 missions, Horror, Drama and Inspection is coming .. Promise

 

...Added first mission and GFX


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Posted 17 September 2013 - 11:22 PM

Im that case, you shouldn't have used the word protagonist.
Wth is with you using capital letters everywhere? Use it after a full stop (.) not (,)

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Posted 18 September 2013 - 09:39 AM

Im that case, you shouldn't have used the word protagonist.
Wth is with you using capital letters everywhere? Use it after a full stop (.) not (,)

 

I have done what you said and changed some parts of the STORY section, Thank you, I am not a native English speaker, Sorry!


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Posted 18 September 2013 - 10:32 AM

Can any one help me with a trailer?


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 02:27 PM

I thought you could do one yourself.

Btw, there is only one mission. To make a trailer you need at least like, what, a chapter? So people can take parts of your missions to make a trailer.


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 02:31 PM

Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 03:00 PM

Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school

You can't possibly finish all missions in three days. Unless if you are playing 24/24. lol

You can't arrange your time to make missions when school started? My school have started and even though this year is hard, I still have some spare time.


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 03:06 PM

Added new mission and changed some parts of the 

 

 

Sorry, That I was stupid, I will try to finish lots of missions in the last 3 days before school

You can't possibly finish all missions in three days. Unless if you are playing 24/24. lol

You can't arrange your time to make missions when school started? My school have started and even though this year is hard, I still have some spare time.

 

 

I will really but, The problem that I return at 4 and have to sleep at 10 or 11, So, When, I eat and do homework, I will not have very big spare time and also, I'm from diabetes, So, Some times, I can not do any thing. 


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 03:08 PM

-Added Second Mission

-Changed headers

-Added two new section (Only one is useful)

-Started Mission 3

-Bumped topic


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 07:01 PM

Mission 3 has been added and Game play Videos or Walkthroughs are finished and coming tomorrow


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 10:17 PM

Wow, i played the first and it's a really catching story, i liked it :3


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Posted 19 September 2013 - 10:26 PM

Mission 3 is available on DYOM database, Link tomorrow, I'm using mobile

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Posted 20 September 2013 - 02:10 PM

Mission 3 is available ... Mission 4 coming tomorrow


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Posted 22 September 2013 - 04:53 PM

-Removed Characters Section.

-Updated Media Section Status.

-Checked the links and verified them as working and made some changes.

-Added a new mission.

-Bumped post.


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Posted 28 September 2013 - 03:11 PM Edited by Spider262, 28 September 2013 - 04:04 PM.

Fifth mission added


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Posted 30 September 2013 - 03:15 PM

Why do not you play the sixth mission?


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Posted 30 September 2013 - 03:51 PM

Hi Dude.. Your Missions are Good,Very Good in fact.

Keep It Up


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Posted 30 September 2013 - 04:10 PM

Thank you!  :lol:


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Posted 04 October 2013 - 11:16 AM

Added the second mission in Chapter 2!

 

Note: While testing the mission, It crashed, Most of the DYOM missions by others crash, It is sometimes a problem of the game not the mission!


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Posted 04 October 2013 - 12:52 PM

New mission added for today, This is my weekend!


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Posted 04 October 2013 - 01:08 PM

I guess you didn't like my review, sorry if it hurted you but I just wanted to help you out by pointing out your mistakes and fix them in your future mission.

But still, I will play chapter 2 as soon as you made them all. Best of luck from me.


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Posted 04 October 2013 - 03:27 PM

I guess you didn't like my review, sorry if it hurted you but I just wanted to help you out by pointing out your mistakes and fix them in your future mission.

But still, I will play chapter 2 as soon as you made them all. Best of luck from me.

 

Which review?


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Posted 05 October 2013 - 09:29 AM

Revolver1 has made a review for the missions, I think it is like a guide for me for my next chapter, Read the review here: http://gtaforums.com...w/?p=1063587377


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 06:14 AM

Well, i played the whole story and it gets me confused in some parts!

But still being awesome! :3

Great job


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Posted 06 October 2013 - 06:45 AM

Well, i played the whole story and it gets me confused in some parts!

But still being awesome! :3

Great job

 

Some parts in this storyline, I'm confused of it myself, However, I will try to improve myself with my new coming series


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Posted 03 January 2014 - 07:02 PM Edited by Spider262, 12 April 2014 - 03:10 PM.

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