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Viscosity
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#61

Posted 27 September 2013 - 05:54 AM Edited by Viscosity, 27 September 2013 - 05:56 AM.

@Alokik: Thanks its been a while, you weren't around I guess. Two answers hmm nice going with it, both of them might happen you never know. And your right about twist and GF Alokik.

I prepared a very funny mission on Abeer but now I am double minded no publishing it or not. I don't think Abeer will be happy if I publish it, not this time. Its a real incident and way too funny but its crosses the line.

@Abeer: I am apologizing from now in case I decide to publish it.


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#62

Posted 27 September 2013 - 07:47 AM Edited by Revolver1, 27 September 2013 - 07:47 AM.

Awwwww.... I thought I would have made it to something bigger... A more bad-ass character type, and seen throughout the MP, not just in a scene :(. Oh well, it's your decision.

And also... After playing it, I have a meme for you.

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I don't know if that's either good or bad, but whatever. My suggestions are choose your main character well for your next MP, because you might stumble across some fancy shooting ideas BUT your main character's limits doesn't allow that.

Now for the quiz:

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#63

Posted 27 September 2013 - 07:56 AM

 

Its time for Quiz, lets see who is smart enough to predict what will happen next.

 

2. He will decide not to go back home and start a new life.

                           OR

6. He will join a gang or some Mafia.

 

Wait, what?

Excuse me, but isn't Viscosity the MP creator? What is going on here, Alokik?


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#64

Posted 27 September 2013 - 08:12 AM

 

 

Its time for Quiz, lets see who is smart enough to predict what will happen next.

 

2. He will decide not to go back home and start a new life.

                           OR

6. He will join a gang or some Mafia.

 

Wait, what?

Excuse me, but isn't Viscosity the MP creator? What is going on here, Alokik?

 

Dude, I think he was answering the question, he just copied the whole thing Viscosity wrote.


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#65

Posted 27 September 2013 - 01:36 PM Edited by Syndrome, 27 September 2013 - 01:36 PM.

@Alokik: Thanks its been a while, you weren't around I guess. Two answers hmm nice going with it, both of them might happen you never know. And your right about twist and GF Alokik.

I prepared a very funny mission on Abeer but now I am double minded no publishing it or not. I don't think Abeer will be happy if I publish it, not this time. Its a real incident and way too funny but its crosses the line.

@Abeer: I am apologizing from now in case I decide to publish it.

 

You should publish it. We can just say 'Abeer' was the first random name you came across while thinking the characters names. Abeer from forums... it's just a coinsidence. :whistle: :whistle: :whistle: :rol: :p :wtf: :inlove: :ph34r: ;)


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#66

Posted 15 October 2013 - 06:15 AM Edited by Viscosity, 15 October 2013 - 06:16 AM.

Sorry for abandoning this topic like this, I wasn't simply getting time for designing and I also got bored of designing just like Abeer. He also left gta forum for some reason

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. So I guess won't stick around very long too.

 

@Abeer (if he ever read it)

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#67

Posted 15 October 2013 - 07:00 AM

I know who you are, I discover it a long time ago. I was just waiting for you to reveled yourself. You got me shocked when you said “we”. Does it mean your sister in it with you too? Let her know I am still angry at her and at you too for always teasing me about my situation and not helping me out.

 

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#68

Posted 15 October 2013 - 04:25 PM

i think soneone's secret is out now! @abeer i know about this from the start of this mission.

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Posted 18 October 2013 - 09:13 AM Edited by Viscosity, 18 October 2013 - 09:15 AM.

Yeah she is in alright. Some of the comments to you are made by her using my account.

 

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Seriously? :barf:  You're still in love with her? :panic:

She wants you to know that they were just friends thats all.

Let me give you an advice

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MOOD: Sympathetic


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#70

Posted 26 October 2013 - 06:39 AM Edited by Abeer, 26 October 2013 - 06:48 AM.

Yeah she is in alright. Some of the comments to you are made by her using my account.

 

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Seriously? :barf:  You're still in love with her? :panic:

She wants you to know that they were just friends thats all.

Let me give you an advice

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MOOD: Sympathetic

 

:panic: OMG What are you doing? This is a social network, every one can see this, :angry: ghrr

 

i think soneone's secret is out now! @abeer i know about this from the start of this mission.

 

Its not a secret, its nothing actually. Its just a stupid prank which should be ignored by everyone.


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Posted 29 October 2013 - 09:39 AM

 

Yeah she is in alright. Some of the comments to you are made by her using my account.

 

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Seriously? :barf:  You're still in love with her? :panic:

She wants you to know that they were just friends thats all.

Let me give you an advice

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MOOD: Sympathetic

 

:panic: OMG What are you doing? This is a social network, every one can see this, :angry: ghrr

Opps my bad. So what, nobody knows you in person. Atlest I didn't told them the funny part

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i think soneone's secret is out now! @abeer i know about this from the start of this mission.

 

 

Its not a secret, its nothing actually. Its just a stupid prank which should be ignored by everyone.

 

 And I thought you never lie. What happed? you changed. Is this love :inlove:

Don't even try because Alokik know everything, I told him through PM. Opps again.

 

MOOD: Amused


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Posted 29 October 2013 - 01:16 PM

How about we stop mocking Abeer and focus on the mission pack?

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#73

Posted 29 October 2013 - 01:52 PM

How about we stop mocking Abeer and focus on the mission pack?

How about no? I don't know why, but after reading their chat, I get a good laugh.


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#74

Posted 29 October 2013 - 02:54 PM

This forums in general and this topic is for DYOM, not for mocking.

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#75

Posted 02 November 2013 - 02:55 PM Edited by Viscosity, 02 November 2013 - 02:56 PM.

New mission uploaded please play and tell me how it was

 

@Revolver: Play the mission to see what happened to Ky because you came between me mocking Abeer, just kidding.

@Abeer: "You rape what you sow". Get ready for the next mission because its going to be an embarrassing one.

 

I was wondering if any of you like to help by designing the next mission for me if I provide them with script (dialogs), through pm. I would be thankful if do so.


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Posted 03 November 2013 - 03:38 PM Edited by Abeer, 03 November 2013 - 03:43 PM.

I was wondering if any of you like to help by designing the next mission for me if I provide them with script (dialogs), through pm. I would be thankful if do so.

 

Lol no one responded :lol: Ha ha. Do you want me to help you out cat?

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Mood: Feeling sorry for someone

 

This is fun :breadfish:


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#77

Posted 03 November 2013 - 05:10 PM

@Abeer: I don't need anyone's help :angry:

 

New mission uploaded please play and let me know your feedback.

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#78

Posted 04 November 2013 - 06:50 AM

@Abeer: I don't need anyone's help :angry:

 

New mission uploaded please play and let me know your feedback.

 

Oh cat don't be resent, you mission are much more popular then mine, just look at the difference in number of downloads and you even became a better designer then me.

 

Tip:

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And don't mix up your fantasies with my realities.

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#79

Posted 05 November 2013 - 11:10 AM

@ Abeer: I did't ask for your help...

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@ Everone else: What's up you guys why isn't anyone commenting were my mission bad? If so atleast guid me. (If you don't guy want to help me I understand but  atleast say no)

 

Mood: Feel like killing Abeer for mocking me


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#80

Posted 09 November 2013 - 11:43 PM

@Viscosity I feel like you should take your time when designing the missions. Make sure that everything makes sense and can be read clearly. If this MP means a lot to you, take the time to create the story and develop the characters accordingly. I like seeing a female designer around the forums. I want you to be great and stand out. The last missions I played were a bit scattered and short. I do however like how you did the route points. 

 

Cutscene advice: Refer to your favorite shows or movies and make a reference of what you've seen. There are so many possibilities when you're looking to make a special scene unique and cinematic. 

 

I wish you the best of luck with the rest of the MP and future projects. 


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#81

Posted 10 November 2013 - 12:49 AM

I think the real love story is in this topic -.-

Come on guys, focus on the MP and stop mocking Abeer xDDDDD


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#82

Posted 11 November 2013 - 03:53 AM

@Platinum Card: Your right, I just got little excited while making mission and rushed it up. I will take my time do my best in the next one. Thanks for your support and advice. I also took you advice of "+n+" in your earlier post, which was a big help and improvement. Thanks

 

@Martin_GDF: You’re right, the storygets real interesting from here.

 

From now on, I won't mock Abeer.

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MOOD: Feel like starting a topic on mocking Abeer :lol:

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#83

Posted 14 January 2014 - 05:12 PM

I am back! Sorry for this infinite gap.

 

New mission uploaded please try it and let me know how it was. And really sorry to action seekers, I promise there will action in the next mission  :die:


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#84

Posted 15 January 2014 - 03:52 PM

Good Luck with the MP, It's a very different theme from other MP i 've played.

I'll try this for sure.

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Posted 15 January 2014 - 04:41 PM

Good Luck with the MP, It's a very different theme from other MP i 've played.

 

Thanks, I am glad you like the theme. Love is the best theme. 

 

I'll try this for sure.

 

Please do try, you'll have a lot of fun, I am expecting feedback's  :r*:


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#86

Posted 15 January 2014 - 05:39 PM

At last this MP is back, I missed it.


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#87

Posted 16 January 2014 - 05:16 AM


At last this MP is back, I missed it.

 

I missed it too 'Mr.Lucas'  :lol:

 

Too bad Alokik isn't around, his role is starting.


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#88

Posted 16 January 2014 - 06:59 AM Edited by Abeer, 16 January 2014 - 06:59 AM.

I am back! Sorry for this infinite gap.

 

Oh man! what did I do to deserve this?

 

:cry: Welcome Back  :catloaf:


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#89

Posted 16 January 2014 - 08:28 AM Edited by Viscosity, 16 January 2014 - 08:29 AM.

 

I am back! Sorry for this infinite gap.

 

Oh man! what did I do to deserve this?

 

:cry: Welcome Back  :catloaf:

 

 

Someone is really happy to see me!

 

Looks like someone's secrate is on the line

 

Stay tuned  :devil:


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#90

Posted 16 January 2014 - 01:45 PM Edited by DragonWarrior (DnW), 17 January 2014 - 02:01 AM.

I played your first chapter and I'd like to give my Feedbacks. The missions were good and I liked them.à

1. About 3/4 of the missions were cutscenes, atleast 2/4 must be gameplay.
2. Some missions were very short and ended up in nearly about 2mins.
3. Try making the conversations a little shorter with high detail.

Overal I liked them I could give a 6/10 stars. I'll play the next chapters and leave some feedbacks, I hope you make the future missions more exciting with more gameplays. And there you don't need things like killing for make a mission exciting. Don't misunderstand my Feedbacks.  :colgate: 

Edit: Forgot to mention, in the mission we practise shooting a Dummy I ran out of ammo you should have put unlimited ammo.




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