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Posted 14 August 2013 - 01:09 PM

*Note*: I, I recently got out of my Block (yay, finally), but It'd take another week of heavy metal and 700 page books to get me on track, but in the mean time, here's something to enjoy.


Terlien Islands: Since 1950, Terlien Islands, an Island on the gulf, has been the haven of criminal activity. Recently Qui Chu, the Chinese criminal mastermind, escaped the joined forces of the UN to these Islands, since these Islands do not allow the Armed forces of the rest of the world, India,China,U.S,U.K,Russia,France,Italy,Germany,Denmark,Ireland and Scotland have sent their Mercenaries, soldiers for hire, to capture Qui Chu, will it be easy money, or will Qui Chu trap them in his twisted game of chess?

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Posted 14 August 2013 - 02:27 PM

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What is this?

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Posted 14 August 2013 - 03:43 PM

OH NO YOU DIDNT! (Cookies to whoever gets that)

This seems like something like The Bar, but based on Mercenaries (the games)??

I don't think this forum's busy enough for another MP writing game tbh, but hey, if you can explain this better, it might work. So far this seems like a literary fart; just a quick blurt of random information that has no point

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Posted 14 August 2013 - 04:13 PM

QUOTE (Mokrie Dela @ Wednesday, Aug 14 2013, 15:43)
OH NO YOU DIDNT! (Cookies to whoever gets that)

This seems like something like The Bar, but based on Mercenaries (the games)??

I don't think this forum's busy enough for another MP writing game tbh, but hey, if you can explain this better, it might work. So far this seems like a literary fart; just a quick blurt of random information that has no point

1) Not based on the games. (I haven't even played them) tounge.gif
2) I was going to post the whole thing, the map, areas,plus a character, but, Damn you Power Cut angry.gif

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Posted 17 August 2013 - 04:40 AM

This is a good concept, but clearly needs work.

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 09:46 AM

QUOTE (Osric @ Saturday, Aug 17 2013, 04:40)
This is a good concept, but clearly needs work.

Aight thanks, Can you help me out, I'm in need of moderators.

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 06:18 PM

QUOTE (aritrabose @ Tuesday, Aug 20 2013, 09:46)
QUOTE (Osric @ Saturday, Aug 17 2013, 04:40)
This is a good concept, but clearly needs work.

Aight thanks, Can you help me out, I'm in need of moderators.

Sure, I can help.

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Posted 20 August 2013 - 07:12 PM

I'm sorry... where is the content here? There is nothing.

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Posted 21 August 2013 - 08:55 PM

To reiterate what Eminence stated, there is a lack of content within this 'mini-game'. If you want to create a small writing minigame that at least works, you need a premise, and perhaps some better formatting. Take a look at The Bar for some pointers, because at the moment this isn't really going to work as a writing game.

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Posted 31 August 2013 - 04:50 PM

QUOTE (aritrabose @ Wednesday, Aug 14 2013, 11:13)
1) Not based on the games. (I haven't even played them) tounge.gif

Sounds like bull. The coincidences are too strong.

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Posted 01 September 2013 - 06:56 AM

QUOTE (universetwisters @ Saturday, Aug 31 2013, 16:50)
QUOTE (aritrabose @ Wednesday, Aug 14 2013, 11:13)
1) Not based on the games. (I haven't even played them) tounge.gif

Sounds like bull. The coincidences are too strong.

It aint bull, I don't have a Bandwidth Broadband, it got shot in 2011,all the Mercenaries Disks in the game shop are Steam. If there's a coincidence, then tell me where, I'll be happy to remove, plus, the maps I am making for this one are not yet complete.

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Posted 01 September 2013 - 04:34 PM

QUOTE (aritrabose @ Sunday, Sep 1 2013, 01:56)
QUOTE (universetwisters @ Saturday, Aug 31 2013, 16:50)
QUOTE (aritrabose @ Wednesday, Aug 14 2013, 11:13)
1) Not based on the games. (I haven't even played them) tounge.gif

Sounds like bull. The coincidences are too strong.

It aint bull, I don't have a Bandwidth Broadband, it got shot in 2011,all the Mercenaries Disks in the game shop are Steam. If there's a coincidence, then tell me where, I'll be happy to remove, plus, the maps I am making for this one are not yet complete.

The fact that a sh*tton of armies are going after an Asian guy. If that isn't enough of a coincidence, I don't know what is.

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Posted 02 September 2013 - 11:56 AM

QUOTE (universetwisters @ Sunday, Sep 1 2013, 16:34)
QUOTE (aritrabose @ Sunday, Sep 1 2013, 01:56)
QUOTE (universetwisters @ Saturday, Aug 31 2013, 16:50)
QUOTE (aritrabose @ Wednesday, Aug 14 2013, 11:13)
1) Not based on the games. (I haven't even played them) tounge.gif

Sounds like bull. The coincidences are too strong.

It aint bull, I don't have a Bandwidth Broadband, it got shot in 2011,all the Mercenaries Disks in the game shop are Steam. If there's a coincidence, then tell me where, I'll be happy to remove, plus, the maps I am making for this one are not yet complete.

The fact that a sh*tton of armies are going after an Asian guy. If that isn't enough of a coincidence, I don't know what is.

Okay, what should I do, please help, don't want it to be a ripoff.




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