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What if I died?
Started by Flachbau, Aug 03 2013 01:25 AM
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#2
Posted 03 August 2013 - 01:36 AM
Unsure whether just writing a creative piece or something you feel strongly about. If the latter, I'm sure plenty of people would definitely care. I'm not a fan of playing critic -- especially on poetry as I know very little regarding it, but it seemed good. Jumping from slicing bread to a rubber ball threw me off, though. Seemed like an odd transition of items... ?
#3
Posted 03 August 2013 - 01:40 AM
QUOTE (TonyZimmzy @ Friday, Aug 2 2013, 20:36) |
Unsure whether just writing a creative piece or something you feel strongly about. If the latter, I'm sure plenty of people would definitely care. I'm not a fan of playing critic -- especially on poetry as I know very little regarding it, but it seemed good. Jumping from slicing bread to a rubber ball threw me off, though. Seemed like an odd transition of items... ? |
Well honestly, I felt like writing something about what one of my friends has gone through. You could say it was a creative piece but then again it did happen to someone. I had nothing to think of after "like bread.." so I jumped to something that just popped into my head. It was completely random.
#4
Posted 03 August 2013 - 01:43 AM
QUOTE (Antagonista @ Saturday, Aug 3 2013, 01:40) | ||
Well honestly, I felt like writing something about what one of my friends has gone through. You could say it was a creative piece but then again it did happen to someone. I had nothing to think of after "like bread.." so I jumped to something that just popped into my head. It was completely random. |
Solid. I often do this myself. Maybe that's why I was so thrown off by it... never usually see other people do it.

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