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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:28 AM Edited by QuiCkNeSS, 31 July 2013 - 08:20 PM.

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Sure everyone remembers the beginning of the game, well then here and see the truth about what happened.

Mission packages that will take you on a journey back in time about what happened, so without too much talk I will look the trailer soon.

Trailer:

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:32 AM

The title is wrong, should be called Cj's mom instead of Mom's cj

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:02 AM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 07:32)
The title is wrong, should be called Cj's mom instead of Mom's cj

im from israel who care's smile.gif

the MP be ready Tomrow

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 02:37 PM

Whatever man, i'm just trying to help you.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 03:20 PM

QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 08:02)

who care's smile.gif

I care a lot, i wont be playing a mission pack whose author cant spell even a single sentence right, because it pretty much gives you the idea of how good the grammar in the missionpack itself will be. mad.gif

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 04:52 PM

QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 08:02)
QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 07:32)
The title is wrong,  should be called Cj's mom instead of Mom's  cj

im from israel who care's smile.gif

I do. And whats the story ? Ain't gonna tell bullsh*t about this MP ?

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 05:28 PM

QUOTE (Rytuklis @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 15:20)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 08:02)

who care's smile.gif

I care a lot, i wont be playing a mission pack whose author cant spell even a single sentence right, because it pretty much gives you the idea of how good the grammar in the missionpack itself will be. mad.gif

Listen in the MP its perfect with Story line and Speaking and more...

i mean when i say "who care" i mean my bad english.

i will update the topic soon.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 05:34 PM

I think you didn't understand what i and they are saying. We just are trying to help you with your grammar (i have some grammar mistakes too), if you are gonna make a Mission-pack in ENGLISH the grammar should be good, easy to understand if you don't handle very well the english accent, and if you upload your mission pack with a lot of mistakes on the grammar, people will not understand the story and that, if you don't know very well the english accent, you can learn, not from the goggle translator because it's sucks. I learn english from games, movies and subtitle movies, maybe you could do the same or look for someone who can teach you.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 06:39 PM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 17:34)
I think you didn't understand what i and they are saying. We just are trying to help you with your grammar (i have some grammar mistakes too), if you are gonna make a Mission-pack in ENGLISH the grammar should be good, easy to understand if you don't handle very well the english accent, and if you upload your mission pack with a lot of mistakes on the grammar, people will not understand the story and that, if you don't know very well the english accent, you can learn, not from the goggle translator because it's sucks. I learn english from games, movies and subtitle movies, maybe you could do the same or look for someone who can teach you.

im know english the but now all the words in the mp its ok this is GTA SA its low english ill show you the trailer soon as soon

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:09 PM

Trailer update !

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:38 PM

Learn some grammar and then come back

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:43 PM

QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:38)
Learn some grammar and then come back

i say it more one time, i dont born to english i learn english and im good in this subject its not my fold !.

*im just 16 yers old + steal learning in school

*im doing my best and dont use google translate.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:52 PM

QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:43)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:38)
Learn some grammar and then come back

i say it more one time, i dont born to english i learn english and im good in this subject its not my fold !.

*im just 16 yers old + steal learning in school

*im doing my best and dont use google translate.

Wow, 16 and you still have that bad english?

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 07:57 PM

QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:52)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:43)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 19:38)
Learn some grammar and then come back

i say it more one time, i dont born to english i learn english and im good in this subject its not my fold !.

*im just 16 yers old + steal learning in school

*im doing my best and dont use google translate.

Wow, 16 and you still have that bad english?

becuse i start learning englih in age 13

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:12 PM

The trailer 100% upload !

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:23 PM

Cj's mom gets shot.

CJ: Mom!

Mom: Yes CJ?

Sweet: HESOYAM

I don't get it.. it's a SERIOUS MISSION-PACK or a comedy?

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:24 PM

I fixed the url on your trailer..

But yes, I recommend working on your English, if you ever want people to understand your missions.

Good luck though.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:27 PM

QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:12)
The trailer 100% upload !

I just saw the trailer and stopped it when the gameplay started.
have you even played the real game?
-CJ's mom has another skin.
-CJ Wasn't there when she got killed.
-CJ's mom was killed with the green sabre, through driveby at ganton, not an ambush at a shop.
-CJ was in Ganton when it started, His mom was in willowfield, way behind his house. how the hell can he even hear that?
i think you gotta learn alot more than just english.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:30 PM

QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:27)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:12)
The trailer 100% upload !

I just saw the trailer and stopped it when the gameplay started.
have you even played the real game?
-CJ's mom has another skin.
-CJ Wasn't there when she got killed.
-CJ's mom was killed with the green sabre, through driveby at ganton, not an ambush at a shop.
-CJ was in Ganton when it started, His mom was in willowfield, way behind his house. how the hell can he even hear that?
i think you gotta learn alot more than just english.

That's the point man, an other started game.

THIS IS A NEW START !


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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:36 PM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:23)
Cj's mom gets shot.

CJ: Mom!

Mom: Yes CJ?

Sweet: HESOYAM

I don't get it.. it's a SERIOUS MISSION-PACK or a comedy?


I fixed the url on your trailer..

But yes, I recommend working on your English, if you ever want people to understand your missions.

Good luck though.

1) its both.

2) and thank you, you can give me the html code ?

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:45 PM

QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:30)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:27)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:12)
The trailer 100% upload !

I just saw the trailer and stopped it when the gameplay started.
have you even played the real game?
-CJ's mom has another skin.
-CJ Wasn't there when she got killed.
-CJ's mom was killed with the green sabre, through driveby at ganton, not an ambush at a shop.
-CJ was in Ganton when it started, His mom was in willowfield, way behind his house. how the hell can he even hear that?
i think you gotta learn alot more than just english.

That's the point man, an other started game.

THIS IS A NEW START !

Oh i see, it's an new world with people with cheats in their lifes and CJ who can hear things very far away. biggrin.gif

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 08:49 PM

QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:45)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:30)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:27)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:12)
The trailer 100% upload !

I just saw the trailer and stopped it when the gameplay started.
have you even played the real game?
-CJ's mom has another skin.
-CJ Wasn't there when she got killed.
-CJ's mom was killed with the green sabre, through driveby at ganton, not an ambush at a shop.
-CJ was in Ganton when it started, His mom was in willowfield, way behind his house. how the hell can he even hear that?
i think you gotta learn alot more than just english.

That's the point man, an other started game.

THIS IS A NEW START !

Oh i see, it's an new world with people with cheats in their lifes and CJ who can hear things very far away. biggrin.gif

Men. Leave him alone, he's just getting started just like everyone when they started making missions with easy story telling.

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 09:20 PM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:49)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:45)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:30)
QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:27)
QUOTE (QuiCkNeSS @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 20:12)
The trailer 100% upload !

I just saw the trailer and stopped it when the gameplay started.
have you even played the real game?
-CJ's mom has another skin.
-CJ Wasn't there when she got killed.
-CJ's mom was killed with the green sabre, through driveby at ganton, not an ambush at a shop.
-CJ was in Ganton when it started, His mom was in willowfield, way behind his house. how the hell can he even hear that?
i think you gotta learn alot more than just english.

That's the point man, an other started game.

THIS IS A NEW START !

Oh i see, it's an new world with people with cheats in their lifes and CJ who can hear things very far away. biggrin.gif

Men. Leave him alone, he's just getting started just like everyone when they started making missions with easy story telling.

thank's man,if you have tips for me feel free to say smile.gif

and i think to post my army missions to (MP) What you say ?

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 09:32 PM

Do whatever u think it's best for you tounge.gif

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Posted 30 July 2013 - 10:55 PM

QUOTE (TheXProyect @ Tuesday, Jul 30 2013, 21:32)
Do whatever u think it's best for you tounge.gif

ALLRIGHT !

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Posted 31 July 2013 - 06:07 PM

@Stuntman: Why shouldn't hear CJ the gunshots? It was an AK-47, so first listen the sound to a AK-47 in real then tell me you don't hear it from the next street...

@Quickness: So, it's a remake of the story in GTA: San Andreas? Then please write it in your thread.

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Posted 31 July 2013 - 08:20 PM

The MP Been Upload !

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Posted 31 July 2013 - 08:33 PM

QUOTE (RussianMobster @ Wednesday, Jul 31 2013, 18:07)
@Stuntman: Why shouldn't hear CJ the gunshots? It was an AK-47, so first listen the sound to a AK-47 in real then tell me you don't hear it from the next street...

@Quickness: So, it's a remake of the story in GTA: San Andreas? Then please write it in your thread.

Yes, Play on MP please and rate smile.gif

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Posted 31 July 2013 - 09:11 PM

If this is a parody, it's great, if this is a normal story, it's crap. Sorry if this hurted you.

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Posted 31 July 2013 - 09:16 PM

QUOTE (povke @ Wednesday, Jul 31 2013, 21:11)
If this is a parody, it's great, if this is a normal story, it's crap. Sorry if this hurted you.

im thinking about both !

will be more chapter very soon.




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