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Rytuklis
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Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:42 AM Edited by Rytuklis, 30 August 2013 - 06:41 PM.

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STORY


What would you do, if the world suddenly turns against you? What would you do, if only what you wanted to do, was seek the truth, but the truth was too much for you to handle?
Follow the story of young and ambitious detective, who is ready to bring the crime lords to their knees.. But how can he succeed, when it turns out that he was kneeling the whole time himself?


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Posted 19 July 2013 - 07:50 AM

Pretty interesting. Good luck with this.

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:06 AM

It looks Interesting!! All the Best For your New Mission Series

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:06 AM Edited by thegtaman531, 19 July 2013 - 08:11 AM.

I was thinking about making a story simmilar to this. Good luck! icon14.gif
Edit: I noticed a little mistake - in the info it says his name is Daniel Parker, but in the characters it says his name is Daniel Peterson?

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:30 AM

QUOTE (thegtaman531 @ Friday, Jul 19 2013, 08:06)
I was thinking about making a story simmilar to this. Good luck! icon14.gif
Edit: I noticed a little mistake - in the info it says his name is Daniel Parker, but in the characters it says his name is Daniel Peterson?

Oh, I see. A little mix up, let me fix it tounge.gif

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 08:32 AM

Looks very good, good luck!

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 09:16 AM

First mission added

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 09:51 AM

One of the best dramatic intros i've seen, Rytuklis. I noticed some grammar mistakes but they don't matter much. This will be an awesome MP if you could catch that Heavy Rain feel. wink.gif

Rating: 9/10

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Posted 19 July 2013 - 10:30 AM

Good job, I'll give it 9/10, just because the moving cutscenes were overused.

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Posted 21 July 2013 - 04:32 AM

It looks really awesome, hope it is what it looks like :3
Nice, wish you the best luck with this!

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#11

Posted 30 August 2013 - 06:42 PM

This will be continued, story updated.




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