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#1

Posted 07 July 2013 - 12:05 PM Edited by thegtaman531, 30 August 2013 - 11:33 AM.

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Snakes may perish, but they are never forgotten.







Story

As the 90's drew to a close the Ballas and Vagos were no longer the threatening gang of Los Santos. A new biker gang emerged called The Perished Snakes. Founded by protagonist Teddy Scottman the gang is now in it's 13th year. New gangs are emerging, they are no longer the biggest threat of the town. Will the members rat out the snakes and join a more powerful gang? Will the gang become merely a memory? Who is a rat, and who is a snake?

The Gang

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Character NameCharacter Description
Teddy Scottman
Role: President
Wields a: Baseball Bat
Freeway Color: Black
Short description: Protagonist of the game and leader of the Perished Snakes. Arrogant and not afraid to f*ck sh*t up.
Status: alive

Devin King
Role: Vice President
Wields a: Silenced pistol
Freeway Color: Red
Short description: Teddy's childhood friend. He wants to rank up to president really bad, but only knows the president must either die or leave the club for that to happen. Keep an eye on him.

Status: Alive
Lenny Steven

Role: Treasurer
Wields a: Combat Shotgun
Freeway Color: Green
Short Description: The friendliest of the group. Tries his best to stay loyal to his gang.
Status: alive

Bruce Campbell
Role: Secretary
Wields a: Tec-9
Freeway Color: Blue
Short description: A badass Australian. Unfortunately you won't hear his accent because he is indeed deaf.
Status: Alive

Jesse "JJ" Jones
Role: Enforcer
Wields a: Knife
Freeway Color: Brown
Short description: Call him JJ. He is the master at stealth, from all the practice he has with that knife.
Status: Alive

Ashley Stuart
Role: Road Captian
Wields a: Molotov Cocktail
Freeway Color: Yellow
Short Description: She's a mad, mad, mad, woman. Don't f*ck with her. She holds a molotov, so she aint afraid to set your ass on fire.
Status: Alive



Rules & Guidelines

  • You MUST ride with your fellow snakes at all times. Drifting away or riding on your own may cause a snake to get lost and fail a mission.
  • Never betray or kill a snake.
  • Respect the clubhouse.
  • You are permitted to get paint jobs for your bike at a Pay 'n' Spray. Just do not get any bikes mixed up.
  • Never forget a perished snake.


Missions - Chapter 1 - The Gang and Their Life

Introduction - The Perished Snakes MC

Mission 1 - Cut Loose

Mission 2 - War in Los Santos

Mission 3 - The Infestation

Mission 4 - Burn your Bridges

Mission 5 - Slow Ride

Mission 6 - Project Z

Mission 7 - The Betrayal

WinRAR file with all the missions - http://www.mediafire...u6d3cgic6u8nldh

Missions - Chapter 2 - Under a watchful eye

Mission 1 - Revenge is not so sweet

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Posted 07 July 2013 - 12:08 PM

Oh sh*t nice. Im gonna play them once you have a whole chapter finished, since I have to download DYOM missions from my PC (Have internet) to my laptop (No internet) to play, and I don't want to download per mission at a time.

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Posted 07 July 2013 - 01:14 PM Edited by Target13, 07 July 2013 - 01:18 PM.

Cool! I'm gonna make commentary for this.

I Was gonna start a Skullz MC Mission Pack because there was no other real hardcore MC Mission Pack.
but i cancelled the idea because i had many other MP to make. Good Luck with this!

EDIT: I Just played the Intro & I Loved it!!!

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Posted 09 July 2013 - 11:30 AM Edited by thegtaman531, 09 July 2013 - 11:32 AM.

New mission released!
Cut Loose
Make sure you check out the mission and give feedback!

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Posted 09 July 2013 - 12:50 PM

QUOTE (Revolver1 @ Sunday, Jul 7 2013, 12:08)
Oh sh*t nice. Im gonna play them once you have a whole chapter finished, since I have to download DYOM missions from my PC (Have internet) to my laptop (No internet) to play, and I don't want to download per mission at a time.

Why don't you install SA in your PC?

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Posted 09 July 2013 - 01:11 PM

Thanks T13!
Also, could someone please point out cons + pros and rate the mission out of 10? That would mean a lot.

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Posted 09 July 2013 - 01:20 PM

QUOTE (thegtaman531 @ Tuesday, Jul 9 2013, 13:11)
Thanks T13!
Also, could someone please point out cons + pros and rate the mission out of 10? That would mean a lot.

I Think that Zizo does that often, i just do Commentary.

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Posted 10 July 2013 - 09:55 PM

Played 1st and 2nd mission. They're just fine but put more interesting stuff for the introduction. For the 2nd mission, I suggest that you start 'em with cutscenes. No, I mean, every missions. Anyway, good work. icon14.gif

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Posted 11 July 2013 - 07:36 AM

What program did you use to make them without the backround?

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Posted 11 July 2013 - 07:48 AM

QUOTE (StuntmanDYOM @ Thursday, Jul 11 2013, 07:36)
What program did you use to make them without the backround?

Paint.net.
All you need to do is select magic wand, remove the background and save as a .png file.

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Posted 11 July 2013 - 02:36 PM

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Posted 12 July 2013 - 01:46 PM

Hey guys.
I'm having trouble with the 2nd mission.
You see, I've completed it but sometimes it crashes after a certain part
But other times it doesn't crash.
Would it be because of my computer, or DYOM?
Also, Here's a preview screen for my new mission.
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Posted 13 July 2013 - 03:12 AM

New mission is out!
War in Los Santos
Tell me if it has crashing problems and I'll fix it in the final version.
Also rate and remember that feedback is always appreciated icon14.gif

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 01:19 PM

Commentary was going perfect! But my Bitchy sister interrupted!

I NEED A BREAK FROM THIS FAMILY! My Own Computer? is that too much to ask?

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 01:44 PM

QUOTE (Target13 @ Saturday, Jul 13 2013, 13:19)
Commentary was going perfect! But my Bitchy sister interrupted!

I NEED A BREAK FROM THIS FAMILY! My Own Computer? is that too much to ask?

Haha that sucks. It doesn't have to be a perfect play throgh, you can redo some parts if you want.

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Posted 15 July 2013 - 09:23 PM

Hey man, It noticed that whenever I have to return to the clubhouse in the first Mission my game crashes. So i can't make the Commentary. Sorry dude. I Really wanna help you but my Stupid #@$@ PC doesn't let me.

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Posted 16 July 2013 - 01:22 AM Edited by thegtaman531, 16 July 2013 - 02:35 AM.

QUOTE (Target13 @ Monday, Jul 15 2013, 21:23)
Hey man, It noticed that whenever I have to return to the clubhouse in the first Mission my game crashes. So i can't make the Commentary. Sorry dude. I Really wanna help you but my Stupid #@$@ PC doesn't let me.

It's probably the mission. I have no clue why, sometimes it works sometimes it doesn't ', I haven't found out the cause of the crash yet.
If you want you can still upload the video. All that happened after that objective was 1 cutscene, then the mission finished.

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Posted 17 July 2013 - 06:34 AM

New mission released!
The Infestation
Make sure you give feedback and rate, I like constructive criticism. smile.gif

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Posted 11 August 2013 - 07:33 AM

Hey guys.
I might finish this MP before The Submerged Ghost because I want to finish an MP before the end of the year, because that's when the GTAforums awards will take place, and one of the awards is best DYOM MP.
And I won't have much time to work on it because GTA V comes out next month, so I'll be busy playing that.
What do you guys think?

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Posted 11 August 2013 - 08:40 AM

QUOTE (thegtaman531 @ Sunday, Aug 11 2013, 07:33)
Hey guys.
I might finish this MP before The Submerged Ghost because I want to finish an MP before the end of the year, because that's when the GTAforums awards will take place, and one of the awards is best DYOM MP.
And I won't have much time to work on it because GTA V comes out next month, so I'll be busy playing that.
What do you guys think?

You can try to complete this one and join the contest if you want.

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Posted 11 August 2013 - 04:53 PM

Amazing man... no other words to describe this!
AMAZING :'3

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Posted 12 August 2013 - 09:43 AM

So I've decided to continue with this MP. Just because I don't know how long the submerged ghost will be, and I want to finish an MP beofre the end of this year.
New Mission out - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27240
And I fixed the crashing in Cut Loose - http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27241

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Posted 12 August 2013 - 11:10 PM

I think you should work more in this one and later keep going with the Submerged Ghost tounge.gif

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Posted 17 August 2013 - 03:22 AM

New mission released: http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27331
By the way, I haven't told you guys this yet, but I'm making this MP into a storyline. Like where you can free roam between missions and stuff.

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Posted 17 August 2013 - 03:41 AM

Nice... i will make the storyline version of Military Story when i finish it too :333
Nice missions man, keep up the good work... only mission 4 is kinda buggy

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Posted 24 August 2013 - 08:38 AM

New mission is out!
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27477
-This will be the final mission before the main plot will occur. Have fun.
-Driving too fast on the way to the party may cause the game to crash.
-Updated front page with new section "Rules and Guidelines"

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Posted 25 August 2013 - 04:39 AM Edited by thegtaman531, 25 August 2013 - 05:17 AM.

And the final mission of Chapter 1 has been released!
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27490
I'll make a WINRAR file now so you can download all the 8 missions into one game.
Edit: The WinRAR file has been uploaded. Check it out.

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Posted 30 August 2013 - 11:35 AM

1st mission of chapter 2 released!
http://dyom.gtagames.nl/show/27593
Please give me feedback, I appreciate it. smile.gif
And can somebody make a trailer for this MP? Any song will be fine, just make sure it sets the biker mood. Like a K-Dst song.

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Posted 30 August 2013 - 04:52 PM

played everything. very good

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Posted 01 September 2013 - 06:17 AM

I will have to delay this MP due to glitch problems.




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