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cbiscuit93
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#1

Posted 03 July 2013 - 06:33 AM Edited by cbiscuit93, 03 July 2013 - 06:35 AM.

This is a thread for people who write their own hip-hop lyrics, weather they're serious about it or just messing around, to come and share their ideas with everyone.
This isn't a thread to discuss random rappers lyrics, or debate who has better bars. This is only for your own creations.

Obviously through text, you can't understand the intended flow, or something might not appear to rhyme to you, but you can get the gist, and also the discussion I had in mind is more focused on the subject matter of the material anyway.

A lot of people rap about a lot of different things, so it will be interesting to see all the different perspectives and styles everyone will bring.



A few random lines of my own include...

Anybody tellin' you ya' cool is sarcastic/
I tote ratchets,/
Big as Star Jones' mattress/

I hold tha' choppa' like the Hulk/
Pop ya' whole gang; cop my bodies in bulk/

I'm in the cut wit' the syrup 'N Sprite/
'Tha kush keep mah' ass coughin' like Walter White/

& Also smile.gif .....

GTA FIVE ON THA' MIND ALL 'DA TIME !!!!

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#2

Posted 05 July 2013 - 09:16 AM

QUOTE (cbiscuit93 @ Wednesday, Jul 3 2013, 06:33)
This is a thread for people who write their own hip-hop lyrics, weather they're serious about it or just messing around, to come and share their ideas with everyone.
This isn't a thread to discuss random rappers lyrics, or debate who has better bars. This is only for your own creations.

Obviously through text, you can't understand the intended flow, or something might not appear to rhyme to you, but you can get the gist, and also the discussion I had in mind is more focused on the subject matter of the material anyway.

A lot of people rap about a lot of different things, so it will be interesting to see all the different perspectives and styles everyone will bring.



A few random lines of my own include...

Anybody tellin' you ya' cool is sarcastic/
I tote ratchets,/
Big as Star Jones' mattress/

I hold tha' choppa' like the Hulk/
Pop ya' whole gang; cop my bodies in bulk/

I'm in the cut wit' the syrup 'N Sprite/
'Tha kush keep mah' ass coughin' like Walter White/

& Also smile.gif .....

GTA FIVE ON THA' MIND ALL 'DA TIME !!!!

icon14.gif that would sound real good over this instrumental


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Posted 05 July 2013 - 09:24 AM

As the days keep turning
And the world keeps burning
Yet my soul keeps learnin
Tears form from the castles around my heart
*sniffs line of coke*
Paper boy, Chuck Norris
Now I'm in china town, bok choy
Shoulda' took a pill, clamicil
I coulda' played for vanderbilt
Jody, Jody Hightower, Highwater
Jody jody, jody jody Highroller
I sip the syrup in my soda

Take it out-RiFF RaFF.

So inspirational. cryani.gif

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Posted 07 July 2013 - 10:17 PM

You shouldn't Reasonably Doubt me
It's been the Hard Knock Life since the age 3.
Now, it's La Familia and The Dynasty,
I built In My Lifetime, following the 3 Blueprints
Built my life story, no cheats, no hints
Even though it was a Gift and Curse
It was the only way to keep getting in a hearse
Then it burst, like a slug to the face
It was like, The Black Album, it was the final race
My last ride, time to retire,
But somewhere inside I had a deep desire
To return, but I felt I was done
Years later, I return, Kingdom Come
An American Gangster, Old School
But I'm a legend, it was time to write new rules
It could take me to Heaven or take me to hell,
But I took the Magna Carta, turned into a Holy Grail
I'm living life now, no more Jail
No more flipping pies or moving Fishscale
This world is taken, it's my to own
Now you Lil niggas, Watch The Throne




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Posted 08 July 2013 - 02:17 AM

QUOTE (KFranchise @ Sunday, Jul 7 2013, 22:17)
You shouldn't Reasonably Doubt me
It's been the Hard Knock Life since the age 3.
Now, it's La Familia and The Dynasty,
I built In My Lifetime, following the 3 Blueprints
Built my life story, no cheats, no hints
Even though it was a Gift and Curse
It was the only way to keep getting in a hearse
Then it burst, like a slug to the face
It was like, The Black Album, it was the final race
My last ride, time to retire,
But somewhere inside I had a deep desire
To return, but I felt I was done
Years later, I return, Kingdom Come
An American Gangster, Old School
But I'm a legend, it was time to write new rules
It could take me to Heaven or take me to hell,
But I took the Magna Carta, turned into a Holy Grail
I'm living life now, no more Jail
No more flipping pies or moving Fishscale
This world is taken, it's my to own
Now you Lil niggas, Watch The Throne

I respect the concept icon14.gif

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Cold steel tucked away; hidden deep in the fleece/
It's CBiscuit; I lay it down, 'N represent foh' mah' peeps/
I struggle haaard.../
Juss' trynna' get off the weed/
Trynna' get a job 'N remember how it felt to get off the week/
You talk big - Big when the bill due, you hard to be seen/
When dudes battle for girls, you come out underneath/
It breaks mah' heart to see these young families broken 'N weak/
You can't walk around mah' street without hearin' em' weep/
- - - Fathers chokin' back tears; Tellin' they kids can't eat/
But where to find that next rock has got em' worried the least/
It's a damn shame when you compare it to the governor's speech/
But I guess lies is what it takes to win that office & seat/
So often I beat../
Women foh' dey' purses 'N beads/
'N there's no catchin' me; Nah, I'm known to burn officers feet/
Capsule kept next to his cheek has got him feelin' his teeth/
But on the real it's only so he don't feel the grief/
'N These kids is growin' up fast man, it's hard to believe/
That the same dude who's robbin' you could go to school witchya' niece/
- - - But that's the world we live in; Money keeps it spinnin'/
If rhymes was the currency I'd ball in the billions/

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 01:23 AM

I told you that the .38 hot
He think that .38 not,
He get 38 shots
I just shipped in 38 Glocks
When that 38 pop
It take out 38 blocks
What you think I got that .38 for
Cause that .38 raw
Give em 38 more
Pops told let that .38 loose
Bring your homies, I'll take out 38 troops

Everybody rappin, Everybody rhyming
But they like smartphones, everybody got em.
He what? Who hot?
You not
I pull up in that blue drop, two shots
Make him stretch like tube socks
I live out
.45 with the hollows, follow at home
I take the Twitter route
I'm like a sniper
Gimme a clean shot
That thing pop
Don't jump for the Juice, that's sh*t that got Raheem shot.

Check the resume
He always got hos with him
Smoke alotta sour
Always got Os with him
And I bang my hood, always got the 4s with him
Cheerio box your whole set, they all get hole in em

We are not the same, I am a martian
I will off him
Get a coffin
Bang Bang, write him off, toss him

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 07:20 PM

HAAAAAAAAANH
i wanna f*ck you hard on the sink
my name ain't Cam'ron but i always wear pink
get so much pot you can call me Link
going down your street like Nelly
i ride the beat welly and my flow aint smelly
you a big l and i ain't talkin cool j
HAAAAAAAAAANH

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 07:52 PM

QUOTE (Adam_ @ Saturday, Jul 13 2013, 19:20)
HAAAAAAAAANH
i wanna f*ck you hard on the sink
my name ain't Cam'ron but i always wear pink
get so much pot you can call me Link
going down your street like Nelly
i ride the beat welly and my flow aint smelly
you a big l and i ain't talkin cool j
HAAAAAAAAAANH

Kanye adlib lol

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Posted 13 July 2013 - 09:51 PM Edited by UrbanTheEmcee, 08 August 2013 - 04:24 PM.

Check me out baby girl, my city screams for me
Little do they know they literally scream for me
So you ain't got to worry, please go back to sleep
Cause all this chaos was created by me
Therefore it can be extorted by me
And then I'll use my power to stop all this madness
Sit back, and receive all this gladness
Cause I am truly there Hero to be
What they don't know want really hurt em' right
But they don't know me, and I could hurt em' nice
I found the dark side way pass the light
And the only way back is to murder night
So I search for my foes, forever stay on my toes
Cause once you lose sight, that's when they send you a rose
Or they send you your mama, whichever comes first
But when it's all said and done, there will be no drama
What up to karma, you said that you got me
A couple years later, and you still ain't had me
My angels got my back, so whenever I ride
I'm taking off on wings of the holy divine

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Posted 08 August 2013 - 04:25 PM

In the spirit of GTA V, I wrote a couple verses. One is through Franklins perspective, the other through a new character.

(Up Earrly)

A niggas pockets got fatter, so the streets got to talking
They see me with the glock so I just minimized their options
Run up if you want to but remember that it's Families
The whole set got hollow tips and they want you (Uncle Sammy)
Lamar on his bullsh*t, and Mike keep calling
Trevor trying to push weight, that country boy ballin
I'm looking to a mansion in the hills these days
Day dream gets interrupted by the sound of semi spray
What the f*ck I gotta do to live life like athletes
Without having these mutha f*ckn pigs come at me
I figured I just rob sh*t, kill quick, f*ck it
Throw a grip to pigs and never think sh*t of it
That 64 looking good baby girl get in
Riding through Los Santos while I'm getting some trim
Got the radio blasting whatever the f*ck
Drop the breezy at the strip after getting my nut
It's like 5 past 12, and I'm ready to eat
Then Mike leaves the text (You know were to meet)
I hop back in the ride, and hit the freeway quick
It always a good feeling when your palm start to itch


(24 hours in South Los Santos)

A couple pigs got hit by the spot, now that sh*t is on lockdown
It's World War cause everybody gripping them glocks now
Slim talking bout how he moving them packs south
He got caught selling soap, so them fiends pushed his ass out
The Governors on TV crying bout crime waves
Cause cars is getting stolen like it's 9 to 5 days
The homie just made bail and he back on the damn strip
About an hour later he got shot in the damn hip
Lamar bout to clip up and ride by for revenge
But let a breezy walk by, he'll be talking sh*t again
Corey's bitch tripping, saying he gone catch a case
Leroy got word and slapped the bitch in the face
Niggas on the set straight laughing, getting on his case quick
So Corey turned around and shot Leroy in the basement
Franklin coming round the spot looking like money
Niggas think he snitchin cause he acting real funny
A promoter brought his ass through dressed in all purple
An undercover stopped him, said these niggas here will murk you
Homie got in his whip and hit about 60
Came back the next day in an all green Bentley
Shots rang out, then the block got iffy
Then Lamar pulled up in his new Bentley

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Posted 09 August 2013 - 02:52 PM Edited by the7ftmidget, 09 August 2013 - 03:00 PM.

Last year a wrote a parody song to the motto by drake, a version of the song that represnts me and my sick mind... I forgot most of it, but as soon as i get home ill find the page where i wrote it. For now ill post the first few lines that i still remember


To the beat and rhyme scheme of "The Motto" by Drake:

Penis in my hand,
Still dont get it, do ya?
Im like the government, all i wanna do is screw ya.
Go inside of your pussy liiiiiiips,
Pump my cum and leave you with a sticky cooter



Ill post the rest when i get home from work.

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Posted 14 January 2014 - 08:37 PM

Last year a wrote a parody song to the motto by drake, a version of the song that represnts me and my sick mind... I forgot most of it, but as soon as i get home ill find the page where i wrote it. For now ill post the first few lines that i still remember


To the beat and rhyme scheme of "The Motto" by Drake:
 

Penis in my hand,
Still dont get it, do ya?
Im like the government, all i wanna do is screw ya.
Go inside of your pussy liiiiiiips,
Pump my cum and leave you with a sticky cooter



Ill post the rest when i get home from work.

 

 

Damn, when I said it would be interesting to see other peoples perspectives on hip-hop, I wasn't expecting that sh*t.


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Posted 24 January 2014 - 03:48 AM Edited by Liteskeen Facebutt, 24 January 2014 - 04:02 AM.

I don't care if this sh*t is too late but here's one of my old, middle school sh*t.

 

"Too fast, furious on a bitches wake.

Stay awake, sh*tting on the counter of a Steak And Shake.

Uh, chrome headed little muffler f*cker.

I'm a strung-out f*cker, with no one to f*ck with."

 

 

Yeah.


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Posted 29 April 2014 - 05:34 PM

I've heard some MCs get ideas for lyrics from their dreams. They write their dream diary and when they write a new song, they use some ideas for lyrics from there. I've tried it myself, it really does!





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