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Posted 26 June 2013 - 08:25 PM Edited by Target13, 02 July 2013 - 11:31 AM.


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A Gang Of Cowboys in Bone County worry about the safety of their town Betty Shore, A Biker Gang called The Bone County Bikers are taking over all peaceful towns in the County. John Cooper promises everyone in the town that Betty Shore will be safe.



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John Cooper
John is one of the Bravest man in his town. After coming out from Jail he decided to become good. He helps the Local Sheriff & Does everything to keep Betty Shore peaceful. He formed a gang called the Bone County Cowboys with all the Town People to keep Bone
County safe & Betty Shore safe.

Adam Wesley
Adam is the Vice President of the Gang. He is also the planner. He plans routes & knows all the ways out. He provide John with back up,

Father Micheal
Micheal is the priest in the Local Church. but he also is a soldier in the Gang. He believes that he is helping God by killing the Devils on Earth.

Carlson Jones
Carlson is the Mechanic. He fixes cars & bikes & provides John with Transportation.

Bertha Jones
Bertha is Carlson's adopted Daughter. She is going to Law school & is smart around the cops.

Grandma Lisa
Lisa is John's Grandmother. She is the best baker in the town but has a serious drinking problem.

Pete
Pete is a mechanic in Las Payasadas. he is a friend of Carlson & provides him with Oil. he decides
to move to Betty Shore since its the only town not taken over by Bikers.

Shawn 'Big Shawn' Davis
Shawn was formally a popular Cowboy in Fort Carson. After Fort Carson was taken over by Bikers,
he lost his Popularity because he couldn't save his Town. He Moved to Las Venturas where he lost
weight, Wore Decent Clothing & Got Rich. Now he owns a Casino & is willing to Help John save Betty Shore.

Big Papa
Big Papa is a fat biker who planned all the kidnapping. He lives in Tierra Robada. He's brother is Sharp Snake

Sharp Snake
Sharp Snake is Big Papa's brother. After seeing his Brother die, he swore revenge on the Cowboys.


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1-Welcome To Betty Shore
2-Local Sunday
3-Protecting Motels
4-Big Shawn
5-Saving The Ladies
6-The Final Fight


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Leo28 (For his Inspiring Cowboy Hero series)
PatrickW & Dutchy3010 (Design Your Own Mission)
Target13 (Missions & GFX)
DYOM Community (For all the Support)


Thanks for the support everyone! The first MP has ended & the second one will start soon. Stay Tuned for the upcoming DLC Cowboys Vs Zombies , Featuring a new Protagonist & a new story with a lot of twists!

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Posted 26 June 2013 - 08:57 PM

I'm definitely playing this, it looks promising wink.gif
Good luck with the mission pack

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Posted 26 June 2013 - 09:07 PM

I'm going to play it. Better don't let me down.
Hehe... I think its best to just make missions and ignore other things

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 02:33 AM

Oh damn, I was actually working on something like this, good luck though.

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 08:35 AM

QUOTE (Prince Gumball @ Thursday, Jun 27 2013, 02:33)
Oh damn, I was actually working on something like this, good luck though.

Oops, Sorry Man.

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 09:06 AM

@Prince - The fastest one always wins tounge.gif .

On topic - Now this is what you should do here, not create useless topics, but make missions packs wink.gif . Best of luck with this, might try it out.

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 09:16 AM

Sounds pretty cool.
Will play when I get CLEO back

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 09:20 AM

@thegtaman531

Lost your Cleo? confused.gif

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Thanks Man. Looking Forward to your feedback.

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 10:00 AM

QUOTE (Target13 @ Thursday, Jun 27 2013, 09:20)
@thegtaman531

Lost your Cleo? confused.gif

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Thanks Man. Looking Forward to your feedback.

No, I deleted cleo so I could have a free game for a while because my game was getting over-modded.

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 03:01 PM

I played first three missions. They are challenging and entertaining. But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall

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Posted 27 June 2013 - 06:23 PM

Nice first missions. But like Nihhichi said, aways put the talking character's name in any sentence. The story overall is great, keep 'em coming.

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Posted 28 June 2013 - 04:03 AM Edited by Yezz007, 28 June 2013 - 04:06 AM.

I played the first three mission, you have a good story icon14.gif
You can put "attack direct" behavior on the enemies, so this is unlike a gun training, sometimes they are not shooting back when i shoot them.
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....But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall

The characters names are written when needed, It is unnecessary to write the characters's name in those camera position,
The story is clear.

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Posted 28 June 2013 - 06:53 AM

So, i played the missions as promised. The idea seems okay , but it's realised not that well. You have to focus on the story more. And some grammar issues, but they're better than most of the newcomers' . I guess i would give it a 7/10. Not bad for a new face around here.

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Posted 28 June 2013 - 11:10 AM

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I played first three missions. They are challenging and entertaining. But I had a little trouble understanding the story in missions. You should write the names of characters talking because I think people will get confused. Its nice overall

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Nice first missions. But like Nihhichi said, aways put the talking character's name in any sentence. The story overall is great, keep 'em coming.


What i always do is that when the Cutscene Camera is pointing at one Actor then i don't add the name in the Dialog cause its clear who's talking. but when i'm pointing at more then Two Actors then i add the names. Thanks for the feedback by the way.

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I played the first three mission, you have a good story 
You can put "attack direct" behavior on the enemies, so this is unlike a gun training, sometimes they are not shooting back when i shoot them.


Okay, Thanks for the tip.

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So, i played the missions as promised. The idea seems okay , but it's realised not that well. You have to focus on the story more. And some grammar issues, but they're better than most of the newcomers' . I guess i would give it a 7/10. Not bad for a new face around here.


I Knew there were Spelling Issues but Grammar? well I Will look into it, Thanks for the rating....I Guess.




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