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efendie
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Posted 19 June 2013 - 07:35 AM Edited by efendie, 22 June 2013 - 02:33 PM.

CANCELED

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Posted 19 June 2013 - 11:23 AM

2 new mission added !

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Posted 19 June 2013 - 12:03 PM

This is actually good, but the grammar makes it boring.

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Posted 19 June 2013 - 12:19 PM

QUOTE (Chips237 @ Wednesday, Jun 19 2013, 12:03)
This is actually good, but the grammar makes it boring.

sorry my english bro.İ will fix it.

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Posted 20 June 2013 - 09:13 AM Edited by efendie, 20 June 2013 - 01:18 PM.

QUOTE
new mission added !

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Posted 21 June 2013 - 09:30 AM

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Posted 22 June 2013 - 09:37 AM

story : 7/10 This is good story but i don't understand why they are make a rob.
grammar:5/10 your grammar make's borning this game.fix it.
image:8/10 mods good show your story.
fluidity:7/10 good but You can do better.

general: 6/10 you can do better bro.you may fix your grammar.




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