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Posted 06 September 2013 - 09:38 PM

I've been thinking about what happens next. 

 

Where's Shelton?

Why did he feel like he had to make a deal with Malcolm?

Will Randy and Anton turn against Junior to save themselves?

 

I've kind of created this place call Pace City and there could be more to this story.  It's known now that All Day Security was a front for Junior's criminal activities.  Malcolm held a grudge against Junior for five long years and he finally got some justice.  Malcolm is out and Junior could be going away for some unknown amount of time.

 

I can see how the saga could continue or it ends with Junior getting exactly what he deserved.

 

I'm still thinking. Glad you enjoyed it.  :)


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Posted 07 September 2013 - 12:50 PM

Well, about your continue or end dilemma, the possibilities of what could happen is endless, if you can continue to keep it fresh and unique then that would be great. I'm really enjoying it at the minute. :D

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Posted 08 September 2013 - 08:42 PM

Well, about your continue or end dilemma, the possibilities of what could happen is endless, if you can continue to keep it fresh and unique then that would be great. I'm really enjoying it at the minute. :D

I agree.

Malcom is the key to this, imo. He's so underused in this. There's so much more he can bring to the table. Flashbacks to why he disliked Junior, or the process of how he went from being in prison to perhaps setting him up, perhaps in league with shelton via prison visits, etc....


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Posted 12 September 2013 - 04:57 PM

Actually, I have been playing around with a plot centered around Malcolm. If I can build it into something substantial, the story will continue.

I like to write a bit before posting so it may be a while if I decide to continue.

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#35

Posted 12 September 2013 - 08:37 PM

That's fine
I commend you for patience in writing lol




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