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#1

Posted 22 May 2013 - 12:47 AM Edited by Eminence, 23 May 2013 - 06:07 PM.

[removed - plagiarism]

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 09:58 AM

I'll bite. First line had me hooked. I just wish the first chapter had been longer.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 01:46 PM Edited by Eminence, 23 May 2013 - 06:08 PM.

Edit -- nice work with the plagiarism.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 02:51 PM Edited by Sweet., 23 May 2013 - 09:50 PM.

I've been following on this for awhile, I'm wondering if I should just post all 20 chapters written right now.

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 03:37 PM

Posting all 20 might be a bit overwhelming - maybe split it into 4 chapter blocks or something (if they're all around this size, that is). Or just post the next chapter and keep adding to it as people follow along. Doesn't really matter. smile.gif

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 04:59 PM

QUOTE (Eminence @ Wednesday, May 22 2013, 15:37)
Posting all 20 might be a bit overwhelming - maybe split it into 4 chapter blocks or something (if they're all around this size, that is). Or just post the next chapter and keep adding to it as people follow along. Doesn't really matter. smile.gif

Truth. Post a chapter every few days or something. happy.gif

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Posted 22 May 2013 - 05:46 PM

ill be adding more soon smile.gif

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 06:50 AM

I'm actually forward to some actual, blood thirsty vampires rather than the pussy Twilight sh*t. Please, post more.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:36 AM Edited by Eminence, 23 May 2013 - 06:07 PM.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 03:55 PM

This is a story written by Jordana J. Sacks, and the original author confirmed that this is not Sweet.'s story -- never even hearing of GTAForums. You're a real piece of work, buddy.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 08:45 PM


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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:44 PM

[5:39:54 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: wait
[5:39:57 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: what happened?
[5:39:59 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Everyone Loves Hodgy <3
[5:40:14 PM] VP: I hate you, you stile someone's work
[5:40:16 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Go To The Writer Section And Look At Forged In Blood
[5:40:21 PM] VP: ur a bad nugget
[5:40:37 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: lol
[5:40:40 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: whats forged in blood
[5:40:42 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: At least I Can Spell And Know Proper Grammar
[5:40:54 PM] VP: a story that he stole and took credit for, Tony caught him out lol
[5:41:20 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: I actually never took any credit
[5:41:27 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: omg here we go
[5:41:29 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: first fight
[5:41:30 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: I just posted it never said I own it
[5:41:31 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: GO
[5:41:46 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Why is this still called ravenwood?
[5:41:48 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT
[5:41:49 PM] VP: It was implied that you wrote it
[5:42:06 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: why, you dont want it names ravenwood?
[5:42:08 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: named*
[5:42:08 PM] *** VP has changed the conversation topic to "Workstealing Faggot Chat" ***
[5:42:17 PM] VP: tounge.gif
[5:42:19 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: It was implied that your momma sucked my dick last night
[5:42:24 PM] VP: Nah, it wasn't
[5:42:29 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: oh god, here we go
[5:42:30 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: lol
[5:42:34 PM] VP: You infered it but I didn't imply it
[5:42:49 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: So did your sister the dead bitch her corpse was good
[5:43:00 PM] VP: ur a bad nugget

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:45 PM

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:44)
[5:39:54 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: wait
[5:39:57 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: what happened?
[5:39:59 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Everyone Loves Hodgy <3
[5:40:14 PM] VP: I hate you, you stile someone's work
[5:40:16 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Go To The Writer Section And Look At Forged In Blood
[5:40:21 PM] VP: ur a bad nugget
[5:40:37 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: lol
[5:40:40 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: whats forged in blood
[5:40:42 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: At least I Can Spell And Know Proper Grammar
[5:40:54 PM] VP: a story that he stole and took credit for, Tony caught him out lol
[5:41:20 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: I actually never took any credit
[5:41:27 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: omg here we go
[5:41:29 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: first fight
[5:41:30 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: I just posted it never said I own it
[5:41:31 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: GO
[5:41:46 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: Why is this still called ravenwood?
[5:41:48 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT
[5:41:49 PM] VP: It was implied that you wrote it
[5:42:06 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: why, you dont want it names ravenwood?
[5:42:08 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: named*
[5:42:08 PM] *** VP has changed the conversation topic to "Workstealing Faggot Chat" ***
[5:42:17 PM] VP: tounge.gif
[5:42:19 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: It was implied that your momma sucked my dick last night
[5:42:24 PM] VP: Nah, it wasn't
[5:42:29 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: oh god, here we go
[5:42:30 PM] Viper | Sgt. Foley: lol
[5:42:34 PM] VP: You infered it but I didn't imply it
[5:42:49 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: So did your sister the dead bitch her corpse was good
[5:43:00 PM] VP: ur a bad nugget

lol lol.gif

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:46 PM

Cool that was Skype, mods please lock this

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:56 PM Edited by Ziggy455, 23 May 2013 - 09:58 PM.

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 21:46)
Cool that was Skype, mods please lock this

You implied it was your work when you stated that you'd been working on it for a "while.".


Sort yourself out, you mong.

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So did your sister the dead bitch her corpse was good


You're not even worth the amount of sh*t I could give you on this. Do us a favour and f*ck off out of here.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:58 PM

[5:41:30 PM] Sweet | Gamer | Writer: I just posted it never said I own it

You're a lil bitch.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 09:59 PM

Well there goes my chance In writer section lol.gif

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:01 PM

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 21:59)
Well there goes my chance In writer section lol.gif

Shouldn't have acted like a complete, story-stealing fool. You'd have had a chance. It was nice knowing you for the brief time we did. Now please, just leave. icon14.gif

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:02 PM

Later Guys devil.gif

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:03 PM

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 21:59)
Well there goes my chance In writer section lol.gif

Very much so. Ain't nobody gonna take anything you write seriously from this point on. Probably go off and steal summore work. Come on, you're like, a child who just decided to write a story about mid-century England, using words I've barely even heard of myself. Get the faaack outta here. Plus you talk of using stellar grammar and such, but I saw nothing of the sort when I shuffled through your total number of posts.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:03 PM

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:02)
Later Guys devil.gif

Don't let the door hit your stupid ass on the way out.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:05 PM

I <3 You All

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:07 PM

IS THIS THE SECOND COMING OF GTA-KING

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:07 PM

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:05)
I <3 You All

There's not really a way around this either. You can never post a story here again without people giving you sh*t. Stealing other people's work is kind of a big no-no. And please don't start with the GTA-King replies. You f*cked up, you were caught, just leave with some dignity.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:10 PM

QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:07)
IS THIS THE SECOND COMING OF GTA-KING

At least King put effort in to writing a thought out, lengthy story, albeit he was a c*nt who begged people to read it and vote for it via pm, but still, this takes the cake. Having to inform some woman on another website that some 12 year old sh*t head has been blagging her work on another forum isn't something many people wanna have to do. You could've at least changed the damn character's names! All I had to do was google the first line of it and it came up right away! You stupid sh*t!

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:12 PM

QUOTE (TonyZimmzy @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:10)
QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:07)
IS THIS THE SECOND COMING OF GTA-KING

At least King put effort in to writing a thought out, lengthy story, albeit he was a c*nt who begged people to read it and vote for it via pm, but still, this takes the cake. Having to inform some woman on another website that some 12 year old sh*t head has been blagging her work on another forum isn't something many people wanna have to do. You could've at least changed the damn character's names! All I had to do was google the first line of it and it came up right away! You stupid sh*t!

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a thought out, lengthy story


That sh*t was sh*t.

Can't believe all it took was a Google.
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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:13 PM

QUOTE (Sweet. @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 23:05)
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So that's why you messaged me saying that you f*cked my mum and that she has a dirty pussy and that you f*cked my dead sister? You're a bad nugget. Eat sh*t and f*ck off.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:14 PM

QUOTE (Ziggy455 @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:12)
QUOTE (TonyZimmzy @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:10)
QUOTE (Sgt. Foley @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 22:07)
IS THIS THE SECOND COMING OF GTA-KING

At least King put effort in to writing a thought out, lengthy story, albeit he was a c*nt who begged people to read it and vote for it via pm, but still, this takes the cake. Having to inform some woman on another website that some 12 year old sh*t head has been blagging her work on another forum isn't something many people wanna have to do. You could've at least changed the damn character's names! All I had to do was google the first line of it and it came up right away! You stupid sh*t!

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a thought out, lengthy story


That sh*t was sh*t.

Can't believe all it took was a Google.
suicidal.gif

I can't say I read more than half of the first chapter happy.gif I assumed as it was quite lengthy that he at least had a good plot. I dunno. It was definitely sh*t, hence not finishing it.

And yeah, I copy n pasted the first line in Google and it came up right away. Had he just tweaked the names, it wouldn't of, thus leading me to find nothing and thinking it was his story to begin with.

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#29

Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:46 PM

Forged in Blood accurately describes my urine content to be honest, and that's still better than this thread.

I hope Sweet has Sweet dreams from GTAF, he won't be coming back.

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Posted 23 May 2013 - 10:59 PM

QUOTE (AceRay @ Thursday, May 23 2013, 23:46)
Forged in Blood accurately describes my urine content to be honest, and that's still better than this thread.

I hope Sweet has Sweet dreams from GTAF, he won't be coming back.

He will, on his many, many, many other accounts.




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