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Posted 18 May 2013 - 09:08 AM Edited by efendie, 20 May 2013 - 09:37 AM.

FOREWORD
Hello guys this is my first mission pack.But not complete verry verry verry verry new mission.each episode's are 5 part.İm now design only 1 mission.
STORY
Brian is searching job.but he cant find it.oh wait ?a office job !But in san fierro.Everything is going well but rifa boy's try to kill brian.But failed.He earn some money. but her mother doesn't mind.He want to some money and girlfriend.But some problems it stops....

characters

BRİAN
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gang: Ally
age:20
Living in:San Fierro
Status: Live
İnfo:The only playable character.He need to work because he needs money to marry but first he need to find a girlfriend.He is verry strong.But he cant use weapon.

FRANKLİN
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gang: none
age:35
Living in:San Fierro
Status: Dead (Operation Ship)
İnfo:He is f*cking rich and boss of Brian.He cant use weapon.Cant run fast.But he have some bodyguard's.

Maria
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Gang: None
age:50
Living in:Las Ventruas
Status: Live
İnfo:the mother of Brian.Only seen intro mission.

Max
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Gang: Bull's
age:25
living in:San fierro
Status: Unknown
İnfo:King of bull gang.He is professional weapon user.He is friend brian.

Rodney
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Gang: Police Team
Age:36
Living in:San fierro
Status: Live
İnfo:The main Target in the game .Best weapon user in police team.He is old bank robber.ButRodney accepted in police team.

Sancho
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Gang: Police Team
Age:40
Living in:San fierro
Status: Live
İnfo: The 2nd main target in the game.He is Sherrif of swat and police team.He don't like drive car.And favorite word is "Dumbass".

Michael
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Gang: None
Living in:San Fierro Los Santos.
Status: Live
İnfo:Son of Franklin.He is escape to Los Santos because Rifa boy's try to kill Michael.Friend of Brian.


More characters will be add.

Gangs
S.w.a.t :Are Enemies in San Andreas.
Army :Are Enemies in San Andreas.
Rifa's :Your best enemies is rifa boy's.
Bull's :Are allies in San Fierro.Clothes like a baseboll man.Little gang,building in 2013 march.But brian dont know this gang.Brian member of bull boy's.


MORE GANGS WİLL BE ADD.

CHAPTER I FİNİSHED !
1.A new boy ?
2.Operation Ship
3.Max,no !
4.Throwing to Los Santos ep.1
5.Throwing to Los Santos ep.2

CHAPTER II
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.

GAMEPLAY'S
Part 1
Part 2

ChangeLog:
Franklin's status updated (18.05.2013.15:55)
Part 1 gameplay added (18.05.2013 12:00)
New character (Max) added (18.05.2013 14:57)
New mission added(Operation Ship) (18.05.2013 14:57)
New mission added (Max,no !)(18.05.2013 17:35)
New gang added(S.W.A.T AND ARMY)(18.05.2013 17:35)
New mission added (Throwing to Los Santos ep.1)(19.05.2013 15:49)
New character (rodney) added (19.05.2013 15:49)
New Mission added(Throwing to Los Santos ep.2) (20.05.2013 10:17)
New character(Sancho) added (20.05.2013 10:17)
Max's status updated (20.05.2013 10:17)
New character (Michael) added (20.05.2013 10:17)
Chapter I Finished ! (20.05.2013 10:17)

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Posted 18 May 2013 - 11:49 AM

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Posted 18 May 2013 - 11:52 AM

QUOTE (efendie @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 11:49)
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This topics only been up for a few hours, give it some time, mate.
My mission packs been up for a few days and I haven't got a single comment yet.
I will probably try it later when im not so busy.

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Posted 18 May 2013 - 11:58 AM

QUOTE (thegtaman531 @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 11:52)
QUOTE (efendie @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 11:49)
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This topics only been up for a few hours, give it some time, mate.
My mission packs been up for a few days and I haven't got a single comment yet.
I will probably try it later when im not so busy.

Okay man.

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Posted 18 May 2013 - 07:15 PM

QUOTE (efendie @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 09:08)

Bull's :Ally gang in san fierro.But brian dont know this gang.Brian member of bull boy's.


mindf*ck

This doesn't make any sense man. I don't know if it's because of your language problems but try to give your mission packs more thought. It makes the presentation worse, and a bad presentation holds people back from trying your missions.
That's why you aren't getting many comments.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 09:41 AM

QUOTE (Technique @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 19:15)
QUOTE (efendie @ Saturday, May 18 2013, 09:08)

Bull's :Ally gang in san fierro.But brian dont know this gang.Brian member of bull boy's.


mindf*ck

This doesn't make any sense man. I don't know if it's because of your language problems but try to give your mission packs more thought. It makes the presentation worse, and a bad presentation holds people back from trying your missions.
That's why you aren't getting many comments.

My english s*ck i know it.İm from Turkey Sorry.

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Posted 19 May 2013 - 12:57 PM

New mission added !

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Posted 20 May 2013 - 07:42 AM

Chapter I finished !




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